Okay, played the update, here's my two cents.
Size-wise this felt like a regular update, you can't help wonder what the dev did all those months.
I liked the story, though I really wonder what this is all about. THere have always been weird things happening, but now?
I get the feeling that either this is some kind of sick experiment or you and Desmond cooked up a plan to make your daughter fall in love with you and you lost your memory.
What I didn't like was that even if you choose your own name, Desmond keeps calling you Edward and in one instance the daughter also gets called Bella instead of the name you choose.
In the path where you are a dick and fuck the D again, it is very weird how she just keeps on calling you father.
I think she mostly called you dad or by name in season 1, so that feels like a weird change.
Also, I don't like Desmond, not at all. I hope I can kick his face in.