VN Ren'Py Completed Life Changes for Keeley [v1.0] [Tora Productions]

[Ozygator]

What's the point of saying you ain't playing a game because it has something you dislike. I keep reading this in every game thread (being NTR, futa, incest, bushes or whatever) and it never ceases to amaze me. Dev is not going to change that for you so you are wasting your own time without adding anything of relevance to the thread, just showing your lack of class and "tolerance". I can't imagine people walking in a shop and telling the owner 'oh, how I wish you'd sell A instead of this rubbish and disgusting B you've been selling for years'. I feel for you, guys

Eh, you can chalk these type comments as people who think that anyone else really G.A.S. about their opinions or thoughts. For some reason the people who say that think their opinion will somehow make the dev change the game *just for them*, when they are getting it free on a pirate website.

Narcissism, or an over-inflated ego, they have one or the other and the people who make those comments always make me with the "Ignore" list was 10X it's size. I already maxed mine out at 1k, and there are too many stupid people in the world to not be able to ignore them all.

 

[theMorzan]

Is that one sentence in the credits with Jessica already having her own game that Tlaero didnt write refering to something specific?

 

[Caryland]

Dude, your renders are amazing looking. Both in this game and the SW game. Really nice use of lighting. Awesome stuff!

 

[Brocho]

Is that one sentence in the credits with Jessica already having her own game that Tlaero didnt write refering to something specific?

I think there is an old game called 'Virtual Date with Jessica' or something similar which someone made using her character model. I haven't played it, but I've seen it listed on sites like playforceone.

 

[jtc]

A humble request to Tlaero and Mortze, please don’t discard “Pandora“ from your future plans.

Wasn't Pandora Mortze's solo project, like the SW game? But yeah, I wouldn't mind seeing more of that... but I also want more Elsa-verse.. or basically anything by them.

 

[master110]

I've seen a lot uglier...

In the older games Keeley and kisha look a lot better.



Story makes no sense because kisha will just drop her.knickers at the drop of a hat but in past game it took whole game.

 

[Turska]

That's because then she was dating a new guy she didn't know. Here she is getting it on with a guy she knows very well and has apparently had the hots for a long time.

 

[Deleted member 748346]

Is it the same dev that developed the only decent star wars game on this website?

yes same devs Tora Productions are Tlaero and Mortze , the Star Wars game it's made by Mortze because Tlaero had some rl stuff going on but now Tlaero it's back so you can expect more games with good story from them

 

[Deleted member 748346]

Most women i know trimm their pubic hair around that level, some a bit more others a bit less. Despite what porn "teach" only once i saw a "bald pussy" in real life.
A few pubic hairs don't scare or disgust me.


Yes.
Choose love path when Claryce is talking to Keeley on the phone. I was also making sure Claryce showed romantic/sexual interest on Keeley before that choice.

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Anyway i played Claryce & Keeley's route. Really a short amazing love story (with a threesome in the middle) put together with some of the best looking models and renders that i saw in visual novel. Great Job to the developers!
Unfortunately i can't support on patreon (that would require another credit card) but if you ever decide to sell this game on Steam i garantee i will buy it!


Ps:
Still need to play the cheating husband route, wonder if he will be a bastard there too.
Also nice wall breaking credits.

for the husband route you can choose to cheat on Keeley or dont cheat on her anymore , that gives different endings my favorite personally it's to don't cheat on her , reject all girls

 

[Deleted member 748346]

Yeah... will skip the one too. Still to hairy for my taste. Wich makes me sad because I generally like the games.

dont skip it the story its very good and there isnt that much bush anyway

 

[Sunny]

If anyone has a copy of Tara Call's first novel, hit me up. I'd love to read it.

 

[Petro28]

I loved this from the moment I pressed start and how can it be any different? The duo of Tlaero and Mortze is incredible, passionate, and one of the best if not the best. I played this only from Jame's perspective, for now, the female one I will play after I find all of the endings for James. The first time I was playing with the intention of reconciliation between Keely and James and I achieved it. However, it was cold, full of distrust, and routine. I knew what I did wrong and quickly made the right decision. I chose not to have a lap dance. This choice of lab dance counts as sex for some reason, so I was very surprised when I had a choice to lie or tell the truth. Otherwise, so far I loved the story and I know I will like more, whatever Tlaero offers.
One more thing Mortze's designs and image quality are outstanding, but his animations are not the best (of course I saw only a few) and without practice, he won't get better and maybe he should put as many as he wants, but I know that I would be satisfied with more still images accompanied by Tlaero's brilliant ways with words.

 

[Krull]

Fan Sig:

Links:

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[Tlaero]

Awesome. I've downloaded the game and really look forward to playing later.

Tlaero There's something I've wondered for a while and keep forgetting to ask you. When you came up with the first Christine game all those years ago, did you always intend it to take place in the same universe/setting as the Keeley games, or did that happen later when you brought all the characters together in the next game?

I always intended for Christine and Keeley to be in the same universe/city. I didn't plan the whole story arc out, the way I did with the first 4 games in the Elsa-verse, but they were always going to be cameos in each other's games.

Tlaero

 

[Tlaero]

Tlaero, hi hun, I loved it.

Only played the love route for Claryce and Keeley and kept it between them, it was really well done.

The build up seemed believable enough to me and I do so love a good romance story.

I'm going to borrow one of the things from your story though. It seems both me and my girlfriend liked the detective scene and think we might give that go, seemed like really good fun.

The interviews were a nice touch and I am ever so glad the Elsaverse will expand a bit more.

Thankyou for this one hun, it was fantastic and look forward to seeing what comes next and the next SW game from Mortze. I don't know if i've spoken to him on here before but if not give him a big thankyou from me too, for all his work.

Yay! For those that don't know, I've wanted to write another female protagonist story for a long time. I've been put off by many of the female protagonist games I've played because they often feel like the "woman" is just a man in a woman's body.

When I decided to do this one as a female-female story, I worried that people would have similar complaints about me. I worried that they'd say, "It feels like a straight woman in a lesbian's body." So I took extra care in writing Claryce's story, and I've been waiting with baited breath to see how Avaron would take it.

I'm estatic that you like it!

And, oh my god, if you two do the LARPing Strip Detective thing for real, and enjoy it? That would warm my heart.

Tlaero

 

[Tlaero]

Is that one sentence in the credits with Jessica already having her own game that Tlaero didnt write refering to something specific?

Long ago, before Mortze, there was an artist named phreaky. He and I started collaborating in "Virtual Date with Keeley" (now known as "Meeting Keeley") but, before then, he wrote a "Virtual Date with Jessica" game. It was supposed to be the same character, but when I took over the writing and characterization on the Keeley game, I ignored what happened in the Jessica one. Phreaky is a great guy, and, for his time, was a great artist, but there's a reason we quickly settled into our roles (him: art, me: writing and programming).

Tlaero

 

[Tlaero]

By the way, I removed the offending "jungle bush" image from the OP. It wasn't representative of the game. That image is literally the only one with that character, and it only appears in one of the 8 ending montages (wait, maybe two...). If that single image is keeping people from playing the game, it's a shame. Now, if the bushes you see on the other thumbnails are also turning you off, then, yeah, best to avoid this game.

Tlaero

 

[Pogo123]

so the girl in the pic is claryce? and i can seduce guys with her? (even older men?) and maybe even fuck them? that would be so nice. she looks quite nice imo. just not really a big fan of lesbian stuff so i hope thats not the only scenes with her.

 

[Avaron1974]

so the girl in the pic is claryce? and i can seduce guys with her? (even older men?) and maybe even fuck them? that would be so nice. she looks quite nice imo. just not really a big fan of lesbian stuff so i hope thats not the only scenes with her.

Claryce is full lesbian and only goes for Keeley.

There is a threesome with James if you get all 3 of them together but Claryce won't let him touch her, cos she's lesbian.

 

[Cabin Fever]

Wasn't Pandora Mortze's solo project, like the SW game? But yeah, I wouldn't mind seeing more of that... but I also want more Elsa-verse.. or basically anything by them.

Mortze started Pandora on his own but Tlaero helped him finish it.