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Whos your favorite girl so far?


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zeph19

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Okay let me start by saying I like this game. The characters look good and are very likable.

It's missing originality though. It is HEAVILY influenced by "My real desire" mixed with various Manga and manga/hentai tropes. The poking thing from Naruto, food thing from Shokugeki no Soma and the excited little sister sitting in the train giggling to herself looking forward to surprising her onii-chan from every brocon story ever.

The writing is jumpy at times, too. It's like this pretty much:

MC: Girl I like you.
Girl: Oh shit, lemme suck your dick.
MC: Yes.
- jump to middle of bj scene -

It's not just the sex scenes that are like this, even normal scenes feel like they're missing a little flow at times.

Still, it's a light hearted, not too deep and complicated story that I can very much enjoy. The dev definitely has the skillset to make it a great thing.
 

NiiChan

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Okay let me start by saying I like this game. The characters look good and are very likable.

It's missing originality though. It is HEAVILY influenced by "My real desire" mixed with various Manga and manga/hentai tropes. The poking thing from Naruto, food thing from Shokugeki no Soma and the excited little sister sitting in the train giggling to herself looking forward to surprising her onii-chan from every brocon story ever.

The writing is jumpy at times, too. It's like this pretty much:

MC: Girl I like you.
Girl: Oh shit, lemme suck your dick.
MC: Yes.
- jump to middle of bj scene -

It's not just the sex scenes that are like this, even normal scenes feel like they're missing a little flow at times.

Still, it's a light hearted, not too deep and complicated story that I can very much enjoy. The dev definitely has the skillset to make it a great thing.
Yeah. That is admitted. I'm still learning a lot of things, this is my very first AVN after all. However, I will try my best to improve the game in the future updates.
Thank you for the feedback.
 
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NiiChan

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Second game Public Preview.
 

HansDampf788

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Second game Public Preview.
Did you perhaps know the anime Masamune-kun's Revenge? because your second game sounds like a porn version of it.

Doesn't making a second game slow the progress of both games down?
 

Bucketbot89

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Did you perhaps know the anime Masamune-kun's Revenge? because your second game sounds like a porn version of it.

Doesn't making a second game slow the progress of both games down?
Hopefully it doesn't copy the manga's godawful ending
 

NiiChan

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Did you perhaps know the anime Masamune-kun's Revenge? because your second game sounds like a porn version of it.

Doesn't making a second game slow the progress of both games down?
It is inspired by that anime, yes. Although it's just the idea of it, not the 100% story.

About the progress: Somehow for the 2nd game, yes. But I will still prioritize the development of LCC. There will be no delays in LCC's updates.
 

NiiChan

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Hopefully it doesn't copy the manga's godawful ending
Nah... I read it. Not a fan of the ending too. So it won't happen in the game LOL. Futhermore, the game itself has different story. I just based the idea for the game. :KEK:
 
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HansDampf788

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Hopefully it doesn't copy the manga's godawful ending
Not really a manga reader, more of an anime fan (and even then only dub I hate reading subs) so I don't know the ending but from the few shorter mangas that I read I can tell most of these magakas can't write endings.
 

NiiChan

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Not really a manga reader, more of an anime fan (and even then only dub I hate reading subs) so I don't know the ending but from the few shorter mangas that I read I can tell most of these magakas can't write endings.
There are some telling that it was good. But I hated it down to the bone.
 

HansDampf788

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It was my least favorite ending ever until Yuragi-sou no Yuuna-san late last year.
Have you read the Hataraku Maou-sama though? :KEK:
Harem manga or anime always have shit endings because the authors never have the balls to actually give the MC his harem.

I only found 1 anime that teased that the MC gets his harem but it was a one-season light novel adaptation so it will never come to it in anime form.
 

Bucketbot89

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Harem manga or anime always have shit endings because the authors never have the balls to actually give the MC his harem.

I only found 1 anime that teased that the MC gets his harem but it was a one-season light novel adaptation so it will never come to it in anime form.
We can't study/ We never learn gave all the girls individual solo routes, so there's that at least.
 

voyeurkind

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Harem manga or anime always have shit endings because the authors never have the balls to actually give the MC his harem.
I know of one that does end with a harem. Give Cat Planet Cuties a try. It's actually much better than the title sounds, at least IMO.
 
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