The prologue is short, and supposed to introduce how it was prior to the story, and introduce the main plot,Thanks for reaching out.
Here's my $.02. The plausibility factor went way up with the optional choice to deny the seductress. I think it fits much better. Even the most callous of jerks will still have some affinity for parents, etc at the MC's assumed age, so the sudden trauma of the situation would most likely render him unamenable to sexual gratification. Maybe if there had been more character development to reveal a really twisted, sociopathic person, then maybe. But we only get a couple of lines of him being a jerk to a maid and that could be just as easily attributed to being a spoiled, entitled brat who nevertheless would still love his mom and therefore be significantly traumatized by her demise.
In retrospect, you could possibly more logically pull off the BJ route if the MC were catatonic following the trauma. Catatonia is a very predictable result of severe trauma and the seductress could then use her method in an effort to have the MC regain focus. Regardless, the progression of the story is better now.
I also want to commend you for a couple of other things. First, the UI. You've put some effort into some of the little things and it shows. (I also thank you for not having the volume at tympanic rupturing levels.) Secondly, the skin tones in your renders are above average. They are reasonably realistic and avoid that plastic doll look. Lastly, the animations, while so far limited in number, are above average, too.
So going forward, your success hinges on your writing ability.
its now clear, a demon worshiping cult has taken over the kingdom.
the different characters and their backstory will be introduced in the next episodes.
I chose the reaction total panic, as it will be more fitting with his personality, you'll find out more about it later on as well.
the overall scenes in the prologue mostly were night shots, and indoors, so later on we'll have more very nicely lit environments with more breath, not to mention different locations and vistas.
Happy you liked it.
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