VN Ren'Py Lilith Rising [v1.0.3ns] [Jubei]

[Jace_Herondale]

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Is there any path to it because main game does not have her as a sister

 

[Chimba]

At the end of season 1, you'll need to choose one, but you'll understand why when you get there.

I don't want to spoil it too much, but its going to be a really really cool moment!
Can't wait to share it...

mmm ok nice, but is the game a "choose 1 only LI" or does it have a harem planned? (I understand that you want to make a big surprise for the end of season 1, but in game terms that can be in 2 years or 3, depending on how long the updates take and the length of each season , besides saying what kind of content to expect is not spoiler.

 

[Joubei]

Is there any path to it because main game does not have her as a sister

Its actually has been fixed.

She is your betrothed now, since a young age, so more like a childhood friend.
as the story starts, its bascially the first time you see her as a woman.

 

[-L-L-MJ-]

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Well, I guess we'll have to see if the dev shows up at f95 and can explain what the "and more" is because after reading the dev notes I don't know what to expect from this game.

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Ok...either this dev/team has no idea about Patreon or the Sister is not a LI but to openly say that X character is the sister on patreon is like putting a target on his/their forehead.(dev if the sister is a LI change that description, patreon is not very kind to incest)

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Anyways good luck.

your *EDIT here is really on point. After reading ;

I worked on over 100 games for the past 15+ years, from AAA to AA, as Creative Director and Game Director.

I just can't comprehend how the dialogue and transitions are this bad.. Really cringe even, which is a shame cause the underlying story seems somewhat interesting and renders aren't bad either. In it's current state it really isn't appealing and I hope it gets reworked somewhat, should definitely be salvageable even by just adjusting dialogue/thoughts etc..

 

[AJBit]

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Well, I guess we'll have to see if the dev shows up at f95 and can explain what the "and more" is because after reading the dev notes I don't know what to expect from this game.

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Ok...either this dev/team has no idea about Patreon or the Sister is not a LI but to openly say that X character is the sister on patreon is like putting a target on his/their forehead.(dev if the sister is a LI change that description, patreon is not very kind to incest)

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Anyways good luck.

If Gwen is his younger sister, yeah he met her all these years ago....when his mom gave birth to her lol.

 

[L3z1l3]

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It says Gwen is my sister, but everyone calls her MC-s betrothed, also there is no incest tag, so which one is it?
MC calls the Queen her grace, so is she not his mother?

 

[L3z1l3]

Its actually has been fixed.

Yeah, "fixed"...

 

[Joubei]

If Gwen is his younger sister, yeah he met her all these years ago....when his mom gave birth to her lol.

Yes this was fixed, she is your betrothed, and you've meet her when she was a child.
it was common practice to join houses by blood, with betrothal, they were 9 when they met, so childhood friends.

Patreon and Steam have "wincest" as a big no no.

 

[Bucketbot89]

Decent start, but needs an editor big time.
Not a fan of the forced betrothal. Any relationship or connection that the 2 supposedly have rings very hollow. I'm not gonna feel anything for the fiancée when I ultimately cheat on her.
Still, the render and animation quality looks be quite high, and I'm curious where the story goes from here.
Good luck going forward, dev.

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

There is suspension of belief as in time travel. Then there is suspension of belief as in tentacled space aliens. But out there in a league of its own is suspension of belief that must occur when a young man's father, mother, fiancé, and various other acquaintances are ostensibly slaughtered by fantastical creatures and the first choice of action is to get a blowjob.

SMH.....................................

 

[Joubei]

”fixed”

Your feedback is quite good, (review)
Except the sfx, issue,
Are there anything else specific that came to your mind?


I’m compiling a feedback list, and address them for the next update.

Thank you so much!

 

[JohnF95zone]

I just hope that Joubei will make this game just how he wanted and envisioned for (after being denied for a long time working in the tightly regulated industry).

However, if he wants to make game for other people, according to their criterias, likes, preferences, then I guess it is fine too. A cliche same old same old game with no imagination and innovation of overused plotlines, is better than no game at all.

The renders looks great. I wish this game was made using Unreal Engine 5 or similar so that players are able to 'live' the game instead of just watching and reading it, but it is never a good idea for the first attempt to do something huge like that.

Thank you for the share. All the best, Joubei. Cheers.

 

[Joubei]

I just can't comprehend how the dialogue and transitions are this bad.. Really cringe even

Hi, thanks for your feedback,
I'd love to understand what you mean by that, can you be more specific?
What in the transition is bad? too fast? too slow? too many shakes? if you can give examples I'd be able to add it to the feedback list and address it,
usually transitions are just a code line, so its understanding what's wrong, on my machine it works fine, dissolves in 0.5s mostly.

as for dialogue, you'll really need to give examples, so I'll understand what you mean.
Throwing - "this is bad" is not helpful, but explaining your meaning is extremely helpful.

Thanks again for any feedback.

 

[AJBit]

Yes this was fixed, she is your betrothed, and you've meet her when she was a child.
it was common practice to join houses by blood, with betrothal, they were 9 when they met, so childhood friends.

Patreon and Steam have "wincest" as a big no no.

Damn RIP

 

[Joubei]

When a young man's father, mother, fiancé, and various other acquaintances are

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[harsha_26]

At the end of season 1, you'll need to choose one, but you'll understand why when you get there.

I don't want to spoil it too much, but its going to be a really really cool moment!
Can't wait to share it...

If he is a prince, then there's gonna be chance for polygamy? Like many prince & kings have.

 

[harsha_26]

You can provide unofficial incest patch in this forum that can make Queen as MC's mother and the childhood friend as his sister. That wont create problems with patreon.

 

[don't censor it]

game without incest tag is not attractive to me i hope the dev will include it in future updates

 

[JohnF95zone]

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Thanks WuzzyFuzzy you old hairy gorilla for spoiling that to the others who have not played the game yet.

I would imagine anyone who played the game can figure that out anyway (so it is not really a huge spoiler) if they use their human brain.

 

[dolfe67]

The optional voyeurism would be on other random minor characters: There was a scene in the tavern that you are drunk and mistake your room door for another, and see another couple. But that scene is probably not going to see light heh - it was put back in the drawer. its all a matter of budget in the end...

Voyeurism is the most boring tag to me, if I want to watch people fuck, I just watch a porn video. I couldn't care less about a sex scene if the MC is not involved.

I will just jump in here and say that personally I enjoy seeing other characters beside MC have relationships in the game and having sex, ones that are not MC's LI's, makes the world seem bigger like it doesn't revolve just around the MC.

Yes except I'm not interested in watching them having sex, like I'm not interested IRL.

I just hope that @Joubei will make this game just how he wanted and envisioned for (after being denied for a long time working in the tightly regulated industry).

I hope too. Changing your plans because of one random opinion is not a good move imo.

However, if he wants to make game for other people, according to their criterias, likes, preferences, then I guess it is fine too. A cliche same old same old game with no imagination and innovation of overused plotlines, is better than no game at all.

That's debatable. It's not like we're in drought of games