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learn to use the search on the topic
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- Oct 21, 2016
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Sooo....dad's a cuck (is that the "hot" fetish right now or why am I seeing it so often?), MC has fallen for mommy but also kinda remembers that the game has Mia in the title, Mia has gotten feels for MC and Emma has gone full psycho bitch with Sam barely existing anymore.
Well...it's something, I guess. Better than NTR sidequest after NTR sidequest. I'm curious where you're going with this because it's definitely not to the happy-go-lucky place where this game started. My one true complaint is that we did not get to see Emma properly stretched by whatever the fuck mom used on her. Oh, and the fact that the next episode comes out on Christmas or some shit. I guess the other game is the main focus anyway. Pitty
Well...it's something, I guess. Better than NTR sidequest after NTR sidequest. I'm curious where you're going with this because it's definitely not to the happy-go-lucky place where this game started. My one true complaint is that we did not get to see Emma properly stretched by whatever the fuck mom used on her. Oh, and the fact that the next episode comes out on Christmas or some shit. I guess the other game is the main focus anyway. Pitty
- Apr 27, 2017
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Still not believable though, there was no conflict there in the first place and now you've created one unnecessarily so when there was already a conflict that existed between mother and daughter that you could have used to do what you wanted as a means to drive the daughter into leaving instead of destroying the BFFs story between Mia and Emma that you had already created.
How was he a villain? Everything happening was taboos and barriers being broken down even if it was in a shallow way. None of the characters had any conflict over what was happening except between mother, daughter and emma. The latter two of which had the strongest developed bond in terms of trusting the other and engaging in acts they weren't against and obviously with the MC. The jealousy issues didn't come into play until the mother became involved. Hmm, seems like that's where you should have expanded on the complexity rather than destroying the bond between two friends to an unbelievable extent.
No, it actually doesn't make any sense. The sister should have contacted the other from a literary standpoint or you should have setup a scene where the father asks the sister to contact their daughter to try and get her out of harms way if his marriage is really on the rocks since he already nearly did something with her in the story you were already developing (even if that didn't pan out). There's zero point for the aunt to contact her niece over marital issues between her sister and husband unless some context is provided. You failed to provide that context and are simply using the aunt as a plot device to advance sadly, bad writing, for what you want to make into something complex.
Thank you for actually making it clear that what i'm saying, is entirely relevant and valid cause that sums up precisely what i'm pointing out in depth. You're turning a shallow story and shallow characters into something more complex without investing the necessary time in updates (perhaps an entire chapter or half of a chapter to evolve the story towards that complexity to make it more believable).
You've done just as i've pointed out though, broken down all the taboos you were pushing that attracted so many people to playing the game. Leaving only the very basic of taboos in a game developed with so many kind of waters it down.
All in all, I still wish you luck in accomplishing what you want to achieve.
- May 6, 2017
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Again, I could argue how wrong you are about so many of the minute things you’re so hell bent on criticizing me over, but I’d be wasting my breath. At no point did you prove that anything I wrote wasn’t plausible, you just provided an alternative to it. But I suppose just because a choice I made wasn’t something YOU would do, then it must not be believable, right? Also, those ideas you suggested? Maybe you’re too arrogant to comprehend this, but there’d be people who’d hate those, too.
Just to be clear, I respect your opinion. I truly do. But at the end of that day it’s just that. An opinion. I know I can’t make everyone happy, and I’ve made peace with that. And that goes doubly so when you’re taking risks with a story. Was it maybe not perfectly executed? Perhaps. If I had more time available to me, to elaborate on certain aspects, would I do it? Probably. Am I claiming that what I did was by any means perfect? Definitely not. But I’m proud of myself for taking the game in a direction that subverted people’s expectations. Because predictability is boring. And if I succeeded at one thing, it’s that for the first time maybe ever in this game, no one can predict what’s going to happen next. And that I think is exciting.
Just to be clear, I respect your opinion. I truly do. But at the end of that day it’s just that. An opinion. I know I can’t make everyone happy, and I’ve made peace with that. And that goes doubly so when you’re taking risks with a story. Was it maybe not perfectly executed? Perhaps. If I had more time available to me, to elaborate on certain aspects, would I do it? Probably. Am I claiming that what I did was by any means perfect? Definitely not. But I’m proud of myself for taking the game in a direction that subverted people’s expectations. Because predictability is boring. And if I succeeded at one thing, it’s that for the first time maybe ever in this game, no one can predict what’s going to happen next. And that I think is exciting.
- Nov 14, 2017
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1. use compressed version, 2. if no compressed version then wait renpy remake (few months).
game wasn't that unstable until graphics got improved (although compared to old versions not that easy to see changes).
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This is the only RPGM I'm playing it's just so good,
And that ending was hard for MC
And that ending was hard for MC
- Dec 7, 2018
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It's a very great game. I'm loving it. Right now I'm starting Act 3. However, I have three doubts that I hope someone can answer me:
- In the Act 2 there is a collection of 10 images, but I have only found the first 5. Where can you find the remaining 5?
- In the Act 3 there is a minigame where the MC down a cave where a speleologist previously tried to cross it in search of treasure. Does anyone know what is the way to find it?
- In the Act 3 there is a collection of 100 images, but in view of the doubt of the collection of the Act 2, can the collection be completed?
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