- Dec 13, 2017
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This is off to a crawlingly slow start. I'm not convinced it's ever going to take off.
How come it doesn't occur to anyone that whoever had a motive to murder the truthsayer may have a motive to murder the MC? That seems like a detail that would go in the jacket liner notes: "An apprentice whose teacher has been murdered."
How come it doesn't occur to anyone that whoever had a motive to murder the truthsayer may have a motive to murder the MC? That seems like a detail that would go in the jacket liner notes: "An apprentice whose teacher has been murdered."