Thank you! I feel like I have the writing under control though, so I'm not in any immediate need of help.I would also like to add I have a BFA in Creative Writing. If you ever need any help or anything I'd be happy to send you my credentials to show you I'm not talking out of my ass. I would gladly help you out for free on any project you have. I just recently started playing games like these and this is by far one of the best.
Hmm, that's going to be a little annoying to fix. Oh well, noted! Thanks!Hey Belle,
minor thing I noticed when in replay: Belle's name for the MC reverts to the standard "virgin", even if it's impossible (or near impossible) for the MC to be a virgin in the scene that is replayed.