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I get your point, but the last thing I wanted to do was hurt those who were in a relationship with the mc only to be left behind at the end. Sorry, just got a little greedy hoping for a scenario where everyone is mostly happy at end, even if it’s to ease my own conscience, but I get that’s not realistic.No offense, but you just perfectly encapsulated the big problem with this kind of concept: it completely, utterly disregards the feelings and opinions of the women in the story, treating them more as objects than actual people, a commodity to be traded around for your entertainment. There may be a historical precedent for that, but it's not even remotely close to the theme and ideas I want to convey with LLtP.
By sleeping around in this story, you are going behind the backs of almost all the women you flirt with. They're not going to just go "oh, okay" when they learn about this. More likely, they'll be furious with you. You'd be lucky to keep any relationships at all. Only in those cases where the women were already clearly accepting of this, such as with Lilith/Selena or Belle, does this work. Or if you accept a demon's essence inside your mind and body, corrupting your thoughts and emotions and turning you into a power-mad despot perfectly willing to erase people's personalities to turn them into your idealized version of who you want them to be.
That said, if the mc is already being ‘shared’ by Callie and Evelyn, why would they not be able to just continue with the way things were going since despite her initial apprehension, Callie is more than fine with their threesomes?