I just want to add that Renonymous (a Newbie) pretty well summed up my feelings for this ending.
I mean, "what's this?? Your MC Choices MATTER?!! Really!??! " The ability to give the variation of endings based on previous choices makes this a phenomenon in itself. No other game I've played yet has managed to give this much sensibility, good plotting, clear vision of what would/should happen if the MC acts like a man, a monster or a mouse and show it would result in a specific ending/consequence. Out Standing!
After having played all the way through (several times) the only thing I think I could add in the way of constructive criticism is the length of the MC's monolog throughout the game. The MC extensively thinks of everything down to the nitty gritty and worries about every little possibility so much that it extends the text . . . and the length of the game actions more than a little. Especially at the climax while Belle and the Fairy Queen are holding the Demon at bay while he ruminates through several layers of thinking/decision making, were I felt, overdrawn and lessened the drama. I'm sure you had your reasons for writing him that way but I thought you might want to know my impression. (If you wanted to make him seem more 'wimpy' and insecure, you succeeded.)
None the less, this was a magnificent production. My Hat's off to you, Sir! Please ignore--as you have--those who feel disappointed because they didn't get their harem of nubile concubines to satiate their every fantasy. It is refreshing to see a game in which plot and character are held in high regard. 30