VN Ren'Py Abandoned Long Lost Daughter [Ch 1-8 fix] [Tawny Fairquim Frolics]

[Deleted member 2325256]

I tried to give 5 stars in the review and help the developer, but the moderator give a strike ... ok I rate the game here.

Wonderful game, one of the best!!!!!!!!! horny girls, many fetishes and the player is not restricted by the choices ... seriously AMAZING game!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for trying and I'm glad you like the VN. My only concern about the reviews is that a lower star rating might discourage somebody from giving it a shot.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

I played some more today! I've meant to ask this for a while now, but what is LLD's theme music? It's really pretty. LLD the character, not the game.

Peach is so hilarious. "It helps me to think of it as a fiery maw that will bite my fingers off!" It's a good thing I wasn't drinking anything!

April putting her hair in pigtails for the beach is a nice touch of nostalgia for her younger days. You gave us a splendid shot of them all in their bikinis at once! I love the varied designs. Skye's bottom is my favorite. Hehe.

LLD and Charlotte are amusing in their beach rivalry. "You witch with a B!" You tell her, LLD, that'll sting for certain!

Harpy! From the school! She calls Peach daughter two of five, how does she know what she knows? I assume she's a character from Sinfest, but I got sidetracked from reading that in October 2012 and never went back yet. Isn't Peach daughter one though? MC pumped her inside Deirdre before leaving home, right?

And Harpy winked at Skye! I'm guessing she knows about Bunni. Oh, her and Bunni both have animal names. Coincidence? The programming thing later makes me sure it was Bunni who programmed her.

Poor Peach. So much for breaking the news to her in the right time and place.

I see you're bringing in GSA. You've got science in my porn! You've got porn in my science!

I love the stars in Betsy's eyes when she realizes MC is daddy.

I love MC's gently smug line during the happy ending with Marianne. "What, and miss this novel opportunity of watching three females with zero internet porn experience trying to figure it out?"

Oh, Marianne, trying so hard. "Don't talk like that. This is a professional massage, sort of."

The close-up of the cumshot is really well-done. That cum actually has some texture. How did you do it?

Agh! That Black Sun rictus. You cruel, cruel, man!

Sister Collette? Is this the same Collette mentioned earlier? Have we met her yet in the game? Sorry my memory is so bad. If I only had time to play without such long breaks inbetween!

Poor Peach! Is everyone going to have a Dark Night of the Soul?

Kyu the love fairy, I like her. Another SinFest character?

The kiss between MC and LLD is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet. I love it!

I love the conversation Marie has with April in bed.

I really appreciate that you have all those hard nipples showing through clothing. Is that something in Koikatu, or do you have to make it work on your own?

April the bride's maid. Lol. It's funny that Skye is so careful not to let April hear about her straddling MC, and then April pops up at the end. You have a good sense of humor.

You did an impressive job with orgy positioning for Charlotte's defloration. Having the other girls all around, but still showing the penetration. The very first daughter deflowered! A long time coming, and so worth it! I'm happy Bunni made it painless.

"Oh my non-existent God." Lol.

I'm happy Charlotte got pregnant and is happy about it! Sleazy Grandma though.

I love Charlotte being so giddy and bouncy at home.

I like your spiritual origin story of the universe, even though I don't believe it. Funny how serving the ego with bodily needs and desires is painted as the opposite to oneness with God, given the VN is all about gratifying bodily needs and desires. Lol.

The flirty peeks at school are great. I like Layla and Zoe. Very cute.

That's as far as I got today. Thank you for a wonderful VN.

Holy shit, Alpha! Glad you're enjoying the VN, dude! That's almost literally a months worth of topics in one post! I'll touch on a few of them here.

I found all the music on this great free site:

You must be registered to see the links

. You can see which songs I chose if you access the files in the Music folder. I didn't pack them into an .rpa file so they are easily accessible. The LLD music is under lld1 to lld4.

The harpy is Bunni's creation and my own character design, not Sinfest. Peach is the oldest daughter, followed by Matilda, Charlotte, Skye and Betsy. Apparently not too many harpies become accountants since Peach is actually 1 of 5.

As is obvious to anybody who is following this VN, I love my fluids and I'm working hard to improve my fluidcraft. I draw a lot of inspiration from the artist whom I call Fluidmaster Reinbach, the creator of this game: This Romantic World

Kyu Sugardust is the main character from this game: HuniePop

Sister Colette is the dark lady who took the LLD away from the MC, the nun who molested Peach, and is also the same woman moving in with Azaleah.

That's the trouble with making up a game as I go along...sometimes a few threads become unraveled. Thanks for sticking with it, though.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Planned Ideas/Tags:
Well it needs more content, a bad guy or 2, meaning a boyfrien or boyfriends to get rid of, blackmailing and such.
It wasn't that bad.
Maybe you should turn it into a sandbox with a zoom im zoom out feature.
That feature alone will turn any game into something special no matter how boring the story may be.
And it would greatly increase it's interest if you give the females specially milfs more curves.
Sandbox zoom in, zoom out, it's the way of the future.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

NTR, blackmail and such is not my thing. I'll leave that to those who are interested in that stuff. Kyu Sugardust is the current villain. Once she notices that Bunni undid her curse on the MC, she'll be back with a vengeance.

I personally don't like sandbox games, but that's all that is...a preference. It would be cool to be able to zoom in and out, though.

I like big-titted and not so curvy milfs...another preference. I am listening to all the feedback I'm getting here and will utilize it when I make the next game, which will not be nearly as niche.

 

[Dark Seraph]

I'd say bug. It seems to be in Ren'py... I have had to reload from earlier saves not at the chapter end for multiple games (this one, Tales From the Unending Void and My New Family). It might be an oversight of code with new updates of the engine. Certain games are flagged by my anti-virus and those work fine. The games I mentioned went through my anti-virus but saves at the end of an update/chapter caused an error.

So there is no way to continue on to ch. 6 unless i have to play from the beginning since i don't have any saves near the beginning of ch.5 ?

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

NTR, blackmail and such is not my thing. I'll leave that to those who are interested in that stuff. Kyu Sugardust is the current villain. Once she notices that Bunni undid her curse on the MC, she'll be back with a vengeance.

I personally don't like sandbox games, but that's all that is...a preference. It would be cool to be able to zoom in and out, though.

I like big-titted and not so curvy milfs...another preference. I am listening to all the feedback I'm getting here and will utilize it when I make the next game, which will not be nearly as niche.

Already a game has been implemented for the zoom in and zoom out feature, but I don't know if that would work in story mode, but it would be worth trying it.
Sandbox zoom in, zoom out, it's the way of the future.

 

[Pudthumper]

Thanks for trying and I'm glad you like the VN. My only concern about the reviews is that a lower star rating might discourage somebody from giving it a shot.

I hooked you up bro.

 

[Pudthumper]

NTR, blackmail and such is not my thing. I'll leave that to those who are interested in that stuff. Kyu Sugardust is the current villain. Once she notices that Bunni undid her curse on the MC, she'll be back with a vengeance.

I personally don't like sandbox games, but that's all that is...a preference. It would be cool to be able to zoom in and out, though.

I like big-titted and not so curvy milfs...another preference. I am listening to all the feedback I'm getting here and will utilize it when I make the next game, which will not be nearly as niche.

I like them in all shapes, but exaggerated, extremely large curves, me no like. My personal preference is for less than voluptuous and never Rubenesque.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

So there is no way to continue on to ch. 6 unless i have to play from the beginning since i don't have any saves near the beginning of ch.5 ?

Sorry your going though this with the saves. Earlier in this thread it was indicated that you can advance with a save from Chapter 4.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

The thing that got me about this game, was that one pic of the girl crying when she saw someone missed seeing after so long is my guess. I haven't played it yet, but that's what it felt like to me.
I felt the love there in that one single pic. It's more romance then anything else.
Must pay attention to the story cause it's more about the story then the artwork in the end.

 

[bugart0420666]

Who is doing the Android ports for this?

ANDOID PORT PLSSS

 

[Alpha Male Adam]

Holy shit, Alpha! Glad you're enjoying the VN, dude! That's almost literally a months worth of topics in one post! I'll touch on a few of them here.

I found all the music on this great free site:

You must be registered to see the links

. You can see which songs I chose if you access the files in the Music folder. I didn't pack them into an .rpa file so they are easily accessible. The LLD music is under lld1 to lld4.

The harpy is Bunni's creation and my own character design, not Sinfest. Peach is the oldest daughter, followed by Matilda, Charlotte, Skye and Betsy. Apparently not too many harpies become accountants since Peach is actually 1 of 5.

As is obvious to anybody who is following this VN, I love my fluids and I'm working hard to improve my fluidcraft. I draw a lot of inspiration from the artist whom I call Fluidmaster Reinbach, the creator of this game: This Romantic World

Kyu Sugardust is the main character from this game: HuniePop

Sister Colette is the dark lady who took the LLD away from the MC, the nun who molested Peach, and is also the same woman moving in with Azaleah.

That's the trouble with making up a game as I go along...sometimes a few threads become unraveled. Thanks for sticking with it, though.

Thank you for your answers. Yea I was pretty sure Colette is the one who took away LLD, I just wasn't sure if she had been met/seen or just mentioned in the present day.

NTR, blackmail and such is not my thing. I'll leave that to those who are interested in that stuff. Kyu Sugardust is the current villain. Once she notices that Bunni undid her curse on the MC, she'll be back with a vengeance.

I personally don't like sandbox games, but that's all that is...a preference. It would be cool to be able to zoom in and out, though.

I like big-titted and not so curvy milfs...another preference. I am listening to all the feedback I'm getting here and will utilize it when I make the next game, which will not be nearly as niche.

I agree. No NTR or blackmail! Just happy harem sex! I too love big-titted and not-so-curvy. But I love all shapes. Big tits and slender hips are a favorite though.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

I really appreciate that you have all those hard nipples showing through clothing. Is that something in Koikatu, or do you have to make it work on your own?

There are certain outfits included with the Koikatu build that I downloaded from this site that show nipples. The thing I like best about it is that you can adjust the erection of the nipples so you can depict a girl getting sexually excited from one frame to the next.

 

[Ayhsel]

There are certain outfits included with the Koikatu build that I downloaded from this site that show nipples. The thing I like best about it is that you can adjust the erection of the nipples so you can depict a girl getting sexually excited from one frame to the next.

What is technology for, if not for wonders like this!

 

[x3m3x]

Android port please

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Awesome update as usual, maybe the best one yet (but I think I might have said that after every update so far). I love this game.

 

[Sural Argonus]

Don't remember it on the old version, but in the upper left it says "no dc"

Last time I played was at the end of Chap 4...

Anyone able to tell me what no dc means?



I looked thru a bunch posts...but didn't see anything (Even used search feature)

 

[MrBigfoot]

Don't remember it on the old version, but in the upper left it says "no dc"

Last time I played was at the end of Chap 4...

Anyone able to tell me what no dc means?

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I looked thru a bunch posts...but didn't see anything (Even used search feature)

I also see it, but for me it says "YES DC". I'm thinking DC stands for discord or something since another Ren'py game I'm playing recently had the "brilliant" idea of having discord integration where it shows the game you are playing (I almost had a heart attack). Maybe it's a new feature in Ren'py but I'm not sure lol...

 

[coretex]

Its apparently some Renpy update thing in conflict with something to do with Nvidia drivers. theres other threads in F95 here and even other sites mentioning it

Either mentions to delete some file in the Nvidia driver install, or Restore your Nvidia 3d settings.

https://f95zone.to/threads/no-dc-watermark.75132/page-5
https://f95zone.to/threads/no-dc-text-at-launch-solved.75263/

 

[BigDaddyJJ]

Tawny Fairquim Frolics
I just finished Chapter 6 and ... WOW , great work! I've thoroughly enjoyed every minute of this story so far. You've worked in so many kinks I have, and in some very interesting ways. You even blue-balled me a couple of times! Words honestly can't express enough what a great job I think you've done and I'm so excited to see what you have in store for us in the next release.

Thank you so much for all the time and effort you've put into it. It truly is a gem of a game