VN Ren'Py Abandoned Long Lost Daughter [Ch 1-8 fix] [Tawny Fairquim Frolics]

[billyjoebobmartin]

stupid image limit per post...

Spoiler: minor clipping once more!

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Spoiler: don't think it's a clipping error.... but it's an error of some kind for sure

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Spoiler: bunni being as subtle as a brick

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[Deleted member 2325256]

stupid image limit per post...

Spoiler: minor clipping once more!

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Spoiler: don't think it's a clipping error.... but it's an error of some kind for sure

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Spoiler: bunni being as subtle as a brick

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"Subtle as a brick" is a largely accurate way to describe Bunni.

 

[billyjoebobmartin]

"Subtle as a brick" is a largely accurate way to describe Bunni.

 

[billyjoebobmartin]

Spoiler: patch work dress clipping

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Spoiler: was that even a dress a second ago?

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Spoiler: hair clips and arms

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[billyjoebobmartin]

annoying image limit.

Spoiler: more hair clips

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and i guess that's most/all the clipping issues in since i started posting. there could be more in ch 1 & 2. but i'll take a pass at looking for them for now. similarly with kimiko timeline, i'll mess with that after the game progresses more as it's updated.

kinda funny how one braided hair clipping though arm triggered me to do all this. but hey at least it's useful. good game so far.

Spoiler: what i'd like to see in the game later on

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[Deleted member 2325256]

annoying image limit.

Spoiler: more hair clips

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and i guess that's most/all the clipping issues in since i started posting. there could be more in ch 1 & 2. but i'll take a pass at looking for them for now. similarly with kimiko timeline, i'll mess with that after the game progresses more as it's updated.

kinda funny how one braided hair clipping though arm triggered me to do all this. but hey at least it's useful. good game so far.

Spoiler: what i'd like to see in the game later on

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Thanks for pointing all of these clipping issues out.

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[Deleted member 2325256]

also don't forget you could attempt to make a loli-patch for this game if you desire to add some of that content to the game.

Somebody with F95 slapped the loli tag on this VN. All my characters are 18-years-old and over. I suppose the fact that you can adjust the ages of the school girls might be the reason the tag was added.

 

[billyjoebobmartin]

yea, i was just thinking ahead on that one... if you catch my drift.

 

[a1fox3]

Somebody with F95 slapped the loli tag on this VN. All my characters are 18-years-old and over. I suppose the fact that you can adjust the ages of the school girls might be the reason the tag was added.

The loli tag for F95 means girls who are 18 or over that look like there around 12-13 yo like the girl on the left of the 3rd pic on the OP, nearly flat chested and no hair. (This is for games that don't need a patch for loli content.)

Loli tag also will be put on VN/games that have loli patches that are actually loli.

 

[caxhub]

this is an unofficial android port Long Lost Daughter [Ch 1-7] APK -

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[Deleted member 2325256]

Just to reassure the thread followers that might be concerned that this will be another abandoned game because the production is slowing down...

I do feel very motivated to finish this game, but I've been starting to neglect other important things in my life such as sleep and family while trying to keep up with self-imposed deadlines.

So from now on I'm going to adopt one of my AA program clichés of "easy does it, but do it."

 

[265lutab]

Take your time. (Though I can't wait for the next chapter ;p) Don't overdo it though.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

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Peach might have become a little too enthusiastic when she got her very first job as assistant librarian.



Project at work approaching the half way point.

 

[aasguard]

take your time no game is finished fast

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

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You were called to investigate lewd and lascivious behavior in the Gym storage area and came upon this scene featuring the gymnastic girls Zoe and Layla:



Project at my work is 80% done, then I can resume full development mode.

 

[UtsuhoReiuji]

Just ended up skimming through this. Story and text seem fine, if not great - lots of fun lewd situations, the characters and metaphysics are very interesting. My problem is the style. No sex scene is hot. Every scene meant to be moving is disturbing. Every single girl falls distinctly into the uncanny valley - They're too monstrous to be cute or hot, and too human to tickle my monster fetish. Please, dear god, get better at modelling. Maybe hire someone to make these models and animate these. Use honeyselect, or SOMETHING. It's not even low quality - it's just genuinely doesn't work. This is like, the porn version of scott cawthons early shitty christian games he made. it's unintentionally horrifying. You could rebrand your modelling career into horror, probably!

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Just ended up skimming through this. Story and text seem fine, if not great - lots of fun lewd situations, the characters and metaphysics are very interesting. My problem is the style. No sex scene is hot. Every scene meant to be moving is disturbing. Every single girl falls distinctly into the uncanny valley - They're too monstrous to be cute or hot, and too human to tickle my monster fetish. Please, dear god, get better at modelling. Maybe hire someone to make these models and animate these. Use honeyselect, or SOMETHING. It's not even low quality - it's just genuinely doesn't work. This is like, the porn version of scott cawthons early shitty christian games he made. it's unintentionally horrifying. You could rebrand your modelling career into horror, probably!

Everything is subjective.

 

[UtsuhoReiuji]

Everything is subjective.

I mean, yeah, if you like the art more power to you, it's a great game if you can enjoy the art.

 

[265lutab]

Just ended up skimming through this. Story and text seem fine, if not great - lots of fun lewd situations, the characters and metaphysics are very interesting. My problem is the style. No sex scene is hot. Every scene meant to be moving is disturbing. Every single girl falls distinctly into the uncanny valley - They're too monstrous to be cute or hot, and too human to tickle my monster fetish. Please, dear god, get better at modelling. Maybe hire someone to make these models and animate these. Use honeyselect, or SOMETHING. It's not even low quality - it's just genuinely doesn't work. This is like, the porn version of scott cawthons early shitty christian games he made. it's unintentionally horrifying. You could rebrand your modelling career into horror, probably!

He isn't going to hire someone. He isn't selling the game or getting money from patreon. It's just free. It's not the best modeling, but I think it's still plenty hot and perfectly fine. No need to insult it like that. Maybe say that it doesn't do it for you and give suggestions on how to improve it if you have ideas, but you don't have to be mean. Obviously Tawny has put a bunch of time into making this. I think he has done a great job with the skills he has and made a very hot game.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

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Youngest daughter Betsy only has one fancy dress...now her newfound Daddy is taking her clothes shopping and she can barely contain her excitement:



Work project over so I'm back in the development saddle. Update tentatively scheduled for early September.