VN Ren'Py Abandoned Long Lost Daughter [Ch 1-8 fix] [Tawny Fairquim Frolics]

[jstreet]

My vote is for Skye...she turns into Bunni!

The Matriarch treated her daughter Deirdre as a sex slave and would have molested her grandchildren except for her, so she is a more sinister sort of pervert.

So let me get this right Tawny Fairquim Frolics, Skye and Bunni are one and the same and she is going back in time to set all of the events in motion so she turns into the Bunni. Or the Bunni took the Form of Skye to have a little Fun?

And for Deirdre I only think why she is having fun with Charlotte and not Skye is she didn't know or thinking Skye was wanting to have fun to. As for the other MC daughters she only starts after talking with them. The Matriarch point of view of the events finding her husband (MC's father/Grandfather) with her daughter along with the other events that happen with her and her daughter having another grandchild would be a nice side story for after you finish the LLD story.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

So let me get this right Tawny Fairquim Frolics, Skye and Bunni are one and the same and she is going back in time to set all of the events in motion so she turns into the Bunni. Or the Bunni took the Form of Skye to have a little Fun?

And for Deirdre I only think why she is having fun with Charlotte and not Skye is she didn't know or thinking Skye was wanting to have fun to. As for the other MC daughters she only starts after talking with them. The Matriarch point of view of the events finding her husband (MC's father/Grandfather) with her daughter along with the other events that happen with her and her daughter having another grandchild would be a nice side story for after you finish the LLD story.

How Skye transcends into Bunni will be revealed later, but yes they are one and the same. Bunni is literally the MC's daughter but in the form of a sex goddess.

It's certainly possible that there will be offshoots from this VN. I'm kind of a gentle creature, so I don't know if I could do justice to a Matriarch POV VN, though.

 

[DADDY1962]

since You Are the dev You can Open a ticket and ask for the developer tag

Pardon me for jumping in on someone else's discussion, but are you the same dev who made Complex Society? I ask because that game has a promo tag for this game in it. Anyway... I just want to say I love this game, love the choices and the harem/incest theme... especially like the ability to choose character names and ages of students.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Pardon me for jumping in on someone else's discussion, but are you the same dev who made Complex Society? I ask because that game has a promo tag for this game in it. Anyway... I just want to say I love this game, love the choices and the harem/incest theme... especially like the ability to choose character names and ages of students.

I'm not the developer for CS, but I do help AbrokenA Productions by proofreading his game since he is not a native English speaker. In return he has helped me by making the menus for this game and assisting me with coding. I use my non-developer account, Nocturnal85, when I post on his site and elsewhere in F95 Zone.

Glad you're enjoying the VN. I'm learning a lot by making it.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Update Report and Preview

A lot of schoolgirls are ill at ease in the buxom Nurse Waifu's presence.

 

[jstreet]

Update Report and Preview

A lot of schoolgirls are ill at ease in the buxom Nurse Waifu's presence.

View attachment 1328666

Those poor things wishing their Little Bitties were Tig Ol' Bitties like Nurse Waifu has.

 

[UtsuhoReiuji]

He isn't going to hire someone. He isn't selling the game or getting money from patreon. It's just free. It's not the best modeling, but I think it's still plenty hot and perfectly fine. No need to insult it like that. Maybe say that it doesn't do it for you and give suggestions on how to improve it if you have ideas, but you don't have to be mean. Obviously Tawny has put a bunch of time into making this. I think he has done a great job with the skills he has and made a very hot game.

I mean, i'm not a digital artist. All i'm saying is that a lot of these models strike the uncanny valley for me HARD. They look more like plastic dolls then animated people, or people.

 

[265lutab]

I mean, i'm not a digital artist. All i'm saying is that a lot of these models strike the uncanny valley for me HARD. They look more like plastic dolls then animated people, or people.

Yeah I can see that. Just try to leave constructive criticism instead of insults. Maybe say that you like the idea, but that the models are too far in the uncanny valley for you to like it. (or whatever is true for you) instead of "Please, dear god, get better at modelling " Modeling is not easy and takes a lot of work to learn.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Yeah I can see that. Just try to leave constructive criticism instead of insults. Maybe say that you like the idea, but that the models are too far in the uncanny valley for you to like it. (or whatever is true for you) instead of "Please, dear god, get better at modelling " Modeling is not easy and takes a lot of work to learn.

Maybe I don't understand this "Uncanny Valley" stuff, but I thought it mainly applied to the more realistic portrayals of humans such as Honey Select or Daz. These are just anime cartoons...how do they produce this effect? I'm just not seeing it.

 

[finndem]

Maybe I don't understand this "Uncanny Valley" stuff, but I thought it mainly applied to the more realistic portrayals of humans such as Honey Select or Daz. These are just anime cartoons...how do they produce this effect? I'm just not seeing it.

Uncanny Vallery is very much a "your mileage may vary" thing. For some people, it's very hard to trigger the response; for others, anything even vaguely humanoid that isn't the real thing can set it off in their brains. Personally, some of the expressions in the game don't feel quite right to me, but that's a common issue in 3D model games and barely ticks my brain unless it's egregious.

 

[265lutab]

Maybe I don't understand this "Uncanny Valley" stuff, but I thought it mainly applied to the more realistic portrayals of humans such as Honey Select or Daz. These are just anime cartoons...how do they produce this effect? I'm just not seeing it.

As finndem said it varies from person to person, basically it's real enough that the things that aren't right about it make it creepy. It's much stronger in very realistic stuff that is just slightly off, but some people find less realistic stuff creepy in the same way.

 

[Deleted member 490189]

I'll be honest: the models, expressions, posing, and animations are basic, but serviceable. The writing and scenario are the stars; they're pretty unique and have this absurd quality and sense of humor that I find endearing. Plus it's a rarity to find something with this particular mix of fantasies: loving multi-generational incest and inbreeding without consequences (hopefully Bunni will help with the latter).

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Update Report and Preview

"Daddy, how do you like my new bikini? Gonna be hot this weekend, so we should all hit the beach one last time!"

 

[3DbPNuRHhpW]

You misspelled "nothingkini".

 

[Vreek]

I have a feeling the MC is going to bring his special sunscreen (for girls only) this time

 

[265lutab]

How is development coming for chapter 8? I hope that you haven't let the few people who don't like it get you down at all/reduce your enthusiasm. The rest of us love the game and can't wait for the next part You are doing a great job with the skills you have and it's plenty good enough to make a very hot game. Those that don't agree just shouldn't play it ;P

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

How is development coming for chapter 8? I hope that you haven't let the few people who don't like it get you down at all/reduce your enthusiasm. The rest of us love the game and can't wait for the next part You are doing a great job with the skills you have and it's plenty good enough to make a very hot game. Those that don't agree just shouldn't play it ;P

Thank you for the encouragement. I took a break for a month with development because after over a year I needed it. I'm ready to go full bore now to finish Chapter 8 and then the game. The release will be in September...I'll provide a more exact date when I see how things go.

I'm just wondering if I have enough skills to put out a decent DAZ game. I guess the only way I'll find out is to go ahead and try it.

 

[billyjoebobmartin]

I'm just wondering if I have enough skills to put out a decent DAZ game. I guess the only way I'll find out is to go ahead and try it.

might be an idea to make a short term half year long project to test the waters!

 

[Serafall Leviathan]

Yummy a daddy impregnate me game. Blessed.

 

[265lutab]

Thank you for the encouragement. I took a break for a month with development because after over a year I needed it. I'm ready to go full bore now to finish Chapter 8 and then the game. The release will be in September...I'll provide a more exact date when I see how things go.

I'm just wondering if I have enough skills to put out a decent DAZ game. I guess the only way I'll find out is to go ahead and try it.

Yeah I’d suggest trying it out with a small project and see how you like it.