VN Ren'Py Abandoned Long Lost Daughter [Ch 1-8 fix] [Tawny Fairquim Frolics]

[HrostFall]

Christ the writing in this game is insufferable and skye started off as the worst written character i have ever seen in a visual novel. Every time the game showed her in a scene i just wanted to skip past it. The only part of this game I've enjoyed so far was one option when coming home to your wife. You can either choose to act like an unbelievable pussy letting your wife walk all over you because she's mad that you want to be able to meet your daughter you gave up for adoption years ago (who the fuck acts like this) or you get my favorite part of the game so far where you can say "I didn't come here for wife-taming lessons you pretentious fucktard, just get on with it". Wish i got that dialogue option for the rest of the game.

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

*Pops a can o' cold-one* Extra-dimensional bunnies and churches... bruh i'm starting to like this thing.
Bunni-zones, here i come!

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

Shit bro, you really know how to start a smutty VN, literally watching your bunny masturbating herself to tits right now.
While going on about universal stuff at the same time.
This is a fucking riot.

*Zooms in on her cunt.*
"Just how far down the rabbit hole are you willing to go?"

Hahahaha i foken ded bruh. deeed!
Shit, almost spit my beer all over the screen.
I'll give you 5 stars just for that one.

Also, can sum1 drop me a link to that ComplexSociety game the dev recommends?
Would be a terrible shame not to do Fairquim a favor after he almost killed me in the first 5 mins of playing his game.

 

[billyjoebobmartin]

Also, can sum1 drop me a link to that ComplexSociety game the dev recommends?
Would be a terrible shame not to do Fairquim a favor after he almost killed me in the first 5 mins of playing his game.

here ya go. that game is on-hold atm though dev's feelin the burn out from taking on such an insanely big project.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Christ the writing in this game is insufferable and skye started off as the worst written character i have ever seen in a visual novel. Every time the game showed her in a scene i just wanted to skip past it. The only part of this game I've enjoyed so far was one option when coming home to your wife. You can either choose to act like an unbelievable pussy letting your wife walk all over you because she's mad that you want to be able to meet your daughter you gave up for adoption years ago (who the fuck acts like this) or you get my favorite part of the game so far where you can say "I didn't come here for wife-taming lessons you pretentious fucktard, just get on with it". Wish i got that dialogue option for the rest of the game.

How do you like the price?

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Update Report and Preview

World's greatest waifu:

 

[265lutab]

Update Report and Preview

World's greatest waifu:

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Oh wow that looks like a hot scene

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Oh wow that looks like a hot scene

Hope you like it. I'm pretty happy with the way it turned out.

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

here ya go. that game is on-hold atm though dev's feelin the burn out from taking on such an insanely big project.

Ah, tried to eat something bigger than his mouth huh. I know how that goes.
I'd recommend cutting that something into smaller pieces first. ^^)
Thanks for the link, gonna check that out later.

 

[jstreet]

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World's greatest waifu:

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Waifu is the best. But is Waifu trying off MC for the life insurance by to get the girls of the work place to join the family fun.

 

[botc76]

How do you like the price?

Yeah, we obviously have to love it, because it's for free. Makes complete sense to me.
Look, the guy could have maybe expressed it more politely, but free game = great game, it does not work that way.

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

but free game = great game, it does not work that way.

Precisely.
However, i've been enjoying this game so far personally.
It's definitely not a bad vn. ^^)
It was not to that guy's palate, but it is just fine to mine.
Can't please everybody is all. And don't bother trying Fairquim.
Eat the shots and evolve. Hehe~

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

Precisely.
However, i've been enjoying this game so far personally.
It's definitely not a bad vn. ^^)
It was not to that guy's palate, but it is just fine to mine.
Can't please everybody is all. And don't bother trying Fairquim.
Eat the shots and evolve. Hehe~

Yeah, I'm making this game to both entertain and to share some spiritual insights that have brought me a measure of peace and happiness. It's a passion project and lately I've allowed myself to get annoyed about the people that "don't get it" and who "shit on this game" that I've worked so hard on. That really is the definition of a pretentious fucktard.

It's totally understandable that most people will be upset and even appalled at seeing spirituality discussed in a porn game. I just need to accept that and move on.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

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When I observed myself behaving like a petulant child because of negative feedback, I realized I needed to make some changes. I'm normally very thick skinned so that was a real wakeup call.

Lately I've gotten frustrated because I haven't been able to get into a creative groove. This was becoming work instead of a joy. Yesterday I was ready to just give it all up and found myself crying for the first time in years, just like one of my characters, over a silly VN. I realized I needed to reset.

Soon I'll be returning to my physical office at my full-time job and since I have a 90 minute commute each way, that will drastically reduce the time I can devote to this project. So I'm taking all the pressure off of myself to meet my self-imposed deadlines and change the way I do things here.

There will be no more weekly updates and previews. These will be posted organically now when there is something to show.

Frankly I have no idea when Chapter 8 will be finished. Perhaps I will release more mini updates instead. I'm not making any promises about anything. It is what it is. Bottom line I want to finish this project, but my family and job come first.

Who knows...the way things are going I could be unemployed soon and then I will have plenty of time to get this thing done. Time will tell.

Thank you everyone for your support and encouragement. That means a lot to me. Also, thank you to those providing feedback both positive and negative. I have a lot to learn about being a developer so the so-called negative feedback is particularly helpful.

Since it's been over three months since the last update, I'm posting a micro update later today. The VN is going to take a bit of a darker turn now as Bunni struggles with the temptations of her newfound goddess status. Poor Peach...

 

[265lutab]

I hope you can feel more inspired about it after taking the pressure off. It's a great game!! One of my favorites on this site.

 

[265lutab]

I am looking forward to the mini update

 

[DMon1981]

Tawny.

Good luck with your life and family as that comes first, I love your game and I would say, probably most who play it do to.

You should only listen to good or constructive feedback. Ignore the negative if it does not give a possible solution. You can only do the game to the way you want to, if you try to listen to everyone to make changes they want, that would be the quickest way the game will become a chore for you and so for it not to be completed.

As always I am looking forward to the next release whenever it is ready and you are happy with it.

 

[Deleted member 2325256]

I am looking forward to the mini update

The new files have been posted.

 

[Haellm]

Koikatsu-based game

 

[jstreet]

Tawny Fairquim Frolics hell if it took a year (really hope not) making sure you are enjoying writing and rendering your story that is more important than just making updates when your burned out. Take some time for yourself and see how everything feels up to writing again. You know we'll be here when your back in the groove.