VN Ren'Py Long Road Home [v10.1 Part 3] [OBDGames]

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Lavender123 said:
Well... I didn't finish the game yet...
But it doesn't look like the choices have much effect in the game(Other than some minor dialogue and render differences based on the "Good" or "Bad" points)
Though... was wondering if the creampie options(and other choices) will have effects in the game. Or it's more or less like a "Kinetic Novel".
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they matter on subject aka if choice is good for biker club or mc or to whom he is talking with. no preggo tag yet but we'll see if there'll be little-mcs.
 
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Really good story! Looking forward to many more episodes.
I read through the text in all six episodes and made basic grammar edits. Hope it is useful Dimitri57
See attached [LongRoadHome 0.6.0 edited text.zip]
 
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onenf said:
Really good story! Looking forward to many more episodes.
I read through the text in all six episodes and made basic grammar edits. Hope it is useful Dimitri57
See attached [LongRoadHome 0.6.0 edited text.zip]
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Thanks onenf I'll look them over when I have time to compare them to my episode scripts. No offense, but I'm not going to plug them in not knowing what you changed or perceive to be grammatical errors.

I've mentioned it before that some of the slang, common sayings and phrases that I use is to have the characters speak the way people actually talk rather than be perfect grammatically. This seems to bug people that English isn't their first language since they likely learned proper text book English. To me, the dialog comes off robotic and stiff when written in perfect English.
That being said, my grammar and spelling suck. I use a spell check and grammar program. I didn't on the early scripts. I've corrected typos and grammar that folks have pointed out to me numerous times.
 
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HIngl

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Dimitri57 said:
Thanks onenf I'll look them over when I have time to compare them to my episode scripts. No offense, but I'm not going to plug them in not knowing what you changed or perceive to be grammatical errors.

I've mentioned it before that some of the slang, common sayings and phrases that I use is to have the characters speak the way people actually talk rather than be perfect grammatically. This seems to bug people that English isn't their first language since they likely learned proper text book English. To me, the dialog comes off robotic and stiff when written in perfect English.
That being said, my grammar and spelling suck. I use a spell check and grammar program. I didn't on the early scripts. I've corrected typos and grammar that folks have pointed out to me numerous times.
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When's the next update coming brother
 
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Lovely Candidate said:
is there any update on this month? hardly to seeing this story could have every months update
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Look two comments up to get your answer...

I'm not a gaming studio. I'm one person. I've never promised my Patreons monthly updates like the larger fully staffed games do. I don't like putting out micro updates, so it is what it is.
 
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