- Aug 13, 2018
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The Story is awesome, Questions though. One. Can Jesse be.... brainwashed by the rival gang if the MC is not with Jesse at the right time?, Two. What exactly does the "corruption" entail,is it just a sexual awakening? because most of the girls already seem, very open-minded. Lastly it would be a super cool supernatural twist if one of the gangs are in fact werewolves and the other hunters...or Vampires. Just saying adding any supernatural element no matter how subtle would be awesome even if it is just rumor that one of the gangs are werewolves.