Hmm. This is good re-work of graphic and elaboration of characters and story.
But the main story has been stuck at one point for a whole year. It is not good.
I know that reworking is necessary to bring the story into a whole state, but is it really impossible to bring a few new scenes with other characters? One or two dialogues with Tara Bengala, without new graphics, just new texts, the opportunity to sit in Oliver's bar - and randomly meet Fauna or Dolla there — and go to the barn afterwards for the same scenes of lust with them.
And, of course, I really want the main story and characters to be worked out in advance so that in the future I don't have to painfully rewrite history.
Good luck! And we wait for new!