Ren'Py Abandoned Love MorteM [v0.10a] [Chris Eman]

[DA22]

Some more current Renders:
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Report them if they are in 0.6 version already and ask to add to OP or just contact mods and supply them with renders you would like in OP that are lighter.

 

[Rory Smith]

Mc is the victim of cheating ??
I am out of here

 

[Jhon1885]

Report them if they are in 0.6 version already and ask to add to OP or just contact mods and supply them with renders you would like in OP that are lighter.

Thank you! I asked for the control of the thread to the admins, to update it myself directly!

 

[Jhon1885]

Mc is the victim of cheating ??
I am out of here

Thanks for letting us know, it is very important for me as a developer and for those in the thread.

 

[Vindaria]

More like an over the top Eclipse GSX

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Mutant machines)
I love Celica, I used to have one..

 

[pablo.1297]

Acabo de terminar de jugar y debo decir que me gusto mucho la historia y el concepto, la verdad espero que el mc pueda ser "malo" al final, es decir con todas las revelaciones que tiene y decide ayudar igual a esa misma gente que lo manipula, nose se sintió como si al mc no le importara o ya sabia dichas revelaciones.



I just finished playing and I must say that I really liked the story and the concept, I really hope that the mc can be "bad" in the end, that is, with the revelations it has and decides to help the same people who manipulate it , it didn't feel like the MC didn't care or already knew those revelations

 

[Jhon1885]

Acabo de terminar de jugar y debo decir que me gusto mucho la historia y el concepto, la verdad espero que el mc pueda ser "malo" al final, es decir con todas las revelaciones que tiene y decide ayudar igual a esa misma gente que lo manipula, nose se sintió como si al mc no le importara o ya sabia dichas revelaciones.



I just finished playing and I must say that I really liked the story and the concept, I really hope that the mc can be "bad" in the end, that is, with the revelations it has and decides to help the same people who manipulate it , it didn't feel like the MC didn't care or already knew those revelations

Sí, es algo a explorar en el capítulo 4, es decir te entiendo a lo que apuntas, quizás debería dar un refuerzo para que se entienda mejor la idea (aunque la 0.7 ya empezás a percibir esto):
Existe lo urgente y lo inmediato, en esta situación el MC y todos pasan por "lo inmediato" son muchas cosas que asumir, procesar, tienen que evacuar Sol invictus, luego ya habrá tiempo para jugar al gato y al ratón con el Aquelarre, el Castillo Amberlyn o Nuevo Amanecer.
¡Gracias por jugar!

Yes, it is something to explore in chapter 4, that is to say I understand what you are aiming at, maybe I should give a reinforcement so that the idea is better understood (although the 0.7 you already begin to perceive this):
There is the urgent and the immediate, in this situation the MC and all go through "the immediate" are many things to take on, process, have to evacuate Sol invictus, then there will already be time to play cat and mouse with the Coven, Castle Amberlyn or New Dawn.
Thanks for playing!

 

[Leon Blaze]

What do I need to do here?

 

[pablo.1297]

What do I need to do here?
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Go to the bar

 

[Jsd16]

I have ideas of it going to a classic VN at the end, but because of the fact that then taking it to sandbox/ free roam will be a lot of wear and tear and very difficult because of the impact of the last decisions.

Chapter 1 has the "sandbox" more "hard" even so there is no grinding and those things, but it is to know the places and the "realism" that the girls have their daily routine for which, you have to go to the surveillance cameras to see where they are.

So, if you are a Classic VN lover and you are bored with the lore outside the H Scenes, this VN is definitely not for you!

For example, the sandbox/free roam is for exploring to chat with each of the girls, see how they act depending on the items, see the locations, etc.

Chapter 2 (where this update starts) is a more "adventure game" style, that is to say, there are less interactions, or they are more controlled.

Maybe making it more dynamic.

Now in V0.6 (the one I'm working on) I'm doing something like this, but more complex, more interactions and secrets to discover.

I have to "thank" in part to the latinos, since they give me their support (and the, literally, 3 people I have in patreon) and motivate me to at least finish the VN.
Norman Knight, you kindly offered to correct the translation, the people who at least morally support me like the "Sandbox" or "Graphic Adventure" elements is what distinguishes it from most of VN (my style and the use of them in the narrative).
I'm an independent Dev, a guy who is just taking his first steps, it's also important for me to make something that is fun to play for myself, because if it's for profit and hate... I should have already closed this since version 0.1.

I have not played the game yet , I will be waiting for classic VN mode if you decide to make it in the end . Not many love SANDBOX games which is too grind in my opinion , where you have to go certain places in the map or free roam for you to continue the game . And you are saying that is how you want to develop your game , I respect that and good luck with your game .

 

[jhustrue]

Really tried to give this game a fair shot, but this translation is really rough. I can't understand much of what's going on. I only got as far as where the MC is talking to the cop before I tapped out. I hope you have plans to improve it. I'll put this one on hold and check back later to see if it is any better.

 

[Jhon1885]

I have not played the game yet , I will be waiting for classic VN mode if you decide to make it in the end . Not many love SANDBOX games which is too grind in my opinion , where you have to go certain places in the map or free roam for you to continue the game . And you are saying that is how you want to develop your game , I respect that and good luck with your game .

It has no grind, the VN is more like an adventure game, chapter 1 is the closest thing to a "sandbox", if you are someone who is only looking for hscene, as I say, it is better to pass this game, if instead you are looking for another type of experience and that also has hscene, you might like this game.

 

[Jhon1885]

Really tried to give this game a fair shot, but this translation is really rough. I can't understand much of what's going on. I only got as far as where the MC is talking to the cop before I tapped out. I hope you have plans to improve it. I'll put this one on hold and check back later to see if it is any better.

I don't know if the version you are talking about is current, because there is someone who is correcting the translation (before it was only deepl, like this).
Now, do you realize that it is a free game that has almost no monetary support?
Do you know how much it costs for a translator to correct 80 K words?
If it wasn't for the Latinos, LM it wouldn't exist, they are one of the few that give me support and at least try to help, some on patreon, others correcting the translation, others doing the ports for android...
To give you a better picture, ask a translator to give you a game of (up to 0.7) more than 80,000 words to translate into Spanish and add to that living in the 3rd world, with your currency hyper devalued, not making any economic difference with the game and working in something else to pay the rent and food.

 

[jhustrue]

I don't know if the version you are talking about is current, because there is someone who is correcting the translation (before it was only deepl, like this).
Now, do you realize that it is a free game that has almost no monetary support?

I think I was still in the prologue. I stopped playing a little after the MC and the others arrived at the school. Although I can't speak Spanish, I'd be more than happy to proofread for you for free if you need the help, but I can only proofread what I can understand enough to fix.

 

[Jhon1885]

I think I was still in the prologue. I stopped playing a little after the MC and the others arrived at the school. Although I can't speak Spanish, I'd be more than happy to proofread for you for free if you need the help, but I can only proofread what I can understand enough to fix.

We checked with Norman, he corrected the translation, it is possible that Renpy may have used an earlier version.
We are now cleaning up the code, creating a new translation to catch the corrected one.
In theory, the rest after the prologue (except for some chats that we are still correcting).
should be fixed.

 

[Norman Knight]

Really tried to give this game a fair shot, but this translation is really rough. I can't understand much of what's going on. I only got as far as where the MC is talking to the cop before I tapped out. I hope you have plans to improve it. I'll put this one on hold and check back later to see if it is any better.

I think I was still in the prologue. I stopped playing a little after the MC and the others arrived at the school. Although I can't speak Spanish, I'd be more than happy to proofread for you for free if you need the help, but I can only proofread what I can understand enough to fix.

Hey friend, glad you decided to try the game, I made the corrections of the original translation, but it seems that Renpy was loading an early version of the script without the corrections, the dev is going to check the code and fix this issue, the rest of the VN works fine.

 

[Rory Smith]

I have not played the game yet , I will be waiting for classic VN mode if you decide to make it in the end . Not many love SANDBOX games which is too grind in my opinion , where you have to go certain places in the map or free roam for you to continue the game . And you are saying that is how you want to develop your game , I respect that and good luck with your game .

Sandbox + quest log system is better than ...... VN's where mc's hand and legs are restrained.

 

[Jhon1885]

Sandbox + quest log system is better than ...... VN's where mc's hand and legs are restrained.

The VN is experimental in many aspects, there are some things that are wrong, but it is not "malicious".
I mean, it has no grind, maybe in retro spective, the first chapter where the days go by (classic that you can sleep), there are many details about each girl going to different places per week, you can intuit her personality by even those details.
But, it was tedious to go to the security cameras to see where they are every time, since they change places every hour (not that it's so hateful, but ok).
But as the game progresses I restricted that possibility to give it more lienal, there was a moment in which I thought, why should I implement it? but those things come out experimenting and gaining experience.
My style is definitely not the best for this genre, but I'm not the one who uploads the games here! Sometimes I ask for post control because of the "mistreatment of my VN!" so if you are going to pirate it, at least be a good pirate and update it!

 

[Jhon1885]

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I already asked for the transfer of the post and in theory they had to give it to me, but in theory, socialism works...

 

[Jhon1885]

Hay un error en la nueva version, si le dan en "hay que ser fuertes" se repite unas escenas del capitulo pasado y te manda de nuevo al hotel de la dimensión de cuando buscas la cruz

Hey gracias! ahi lo resolvi! ahora subo una nueva version!