Started to play it, renders look good, but writing seems a little inconsistent and sometimes redundant.
Sometimes you provide the same information twice, like
"You get to the café and the julia and miranda engaged in a conversation"
"dominik enters and sees julia and miranda talking"
Little later
"Nothing to drink for you then. Its getting late, how about i drive you home"
next shot
"the night is still young, would you come over for a few drinks?"
#edit
The animations were pretty good, not as stiff as usual, can see a lot of work went into them.
Good luck with your project, i'll happily wait for the next update