That was just mild nitpicking, the message should be:
”Fight with heart to protect your girls”
Hi, Thanks for this advice, can you give me the correct sentence ?
I made the traduction of this video. I know it's not perfect. I made my best. I tried.
Don't be worried, the game was translated by another english personn.
Eric.
There is nonsense in your phrasing, like what emotion when exchanging fists?
Your pic is of MC punching the groping monster customer.
About the sentences in that vid ... oh ...geez ... lets fix this:
1st one should be: ”Become the hero of
the story,”
no just any story, this game story!
That erotic and sensual afterthought should be ” both erotic and sensual”
the story is erotic and sensual, am I right?
Or just go like this: ”A story erotic and sensual where you become the hero”
2nd couples of words thrown in there should read:
”Game features original scenes and a lot of exciting situations”
3rd is just the same headache in the title ...
”Do not be afraid to fight for your girls” / ”Fight to protect your girls fullheartedly”
Next one is OK ... even estranged as it is ... the meaning transpires both languages:
”Vivres la romance et sauves les filles” - ”Live the romance and save the girls”
We are talking about the specific romance from the game and the girls in your game,
not just any girls from somewhere unknown ...
Next should be: ”This game has this exciting story where characters exhibit deep personalities”
this story is of this game and these game characters have their deep personalities
That prison shenanigans is out of the blue, what on earth posessed you to throw that in there?
That is deep story and hard impact visually, suddenly MC is in prison break scenario?
Since when? What for? We were lead to believe we are saving girls and fighting the bad guys,
now we are the bad guy MC who is already in prison all of a sudden?
Yeah, that makes no sense, it has no place in the idillic fight to protect your girls game motif.
There you have it .. make this better.
