- Nov 15, 2020
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Netorase content is not available in the current version, but may be added in the future, the pirate theme is definitely the most suitable for Netorase
Although I very much enjoyed the update, I agree wholehandedly with this critique. Sex scenes in dream sequences/flashbacks/imaginations need to die a fiery death in AVNs.So after positive initial impressions with first update I gotta be a bit critical of the second. First of all there were some coding mistakes and typos, but that can all be polished out. What concerns me is developement resources being used for "flashbacks/memories/fantasies" or other events that are not currently happening. As someone who likes the kinks involved in these events it's very meh in terms of enjoyment and knowing someone had to make a lot of renders and animations for that makes me feel even more grim. Now think about portion of audience who don't even make that choice - for them content is not disappointing, but simply not existing. It's important to talk about this now, because recipe like this will only stack up and increase in development time as game evolves. I've mentioned this in other games I play as well - if you want to introduce a character, set up lore, explain premise of something from past or dream or whatever... Simply do few well written dialogue sentences and maybe throw in a good background render or two. Save time, resources and have near identical effect. Use spare resources and time to further develop story or prepare a spicy scene with important event/character.
I am only critical about game I hope will do well so please don't take anything I say personally or hate motivated. Also that is only my opinion, if majority disagrees with me I won't contest that. I will still check out next update! Good luck and apart from the stuff I critisized everything else seems cool enough so don't lose hope
I could be sympathetic with the dev here - perhaps he thought we're so early in the story aside from amber's drinking game it wouldn't be realistic to have so many characters getting fucked seven ways till sunday - so flashbacks are one way to still implement sex scenes....though I'm still with you on the overall result, I'd much rather see the same number of renders spent on story-(in present time) progression.
- Dec 21, 2019
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Weird update. I feel like this story was presented as "Protect the virtue of these dear women while dastardly pirates try to corrupt them" but it's actually "10 random promiscuous people fuck eachother on a boat and have way too many flashbacks."
There's no corruption, the women are instantly sleeping with anyone who pays attention to them for 5 minutes. Both in the past and at present. Without a single instance of inappropriate behavior from these horny pirates. They're not hurting or taking advantage of anyone. They're not even rude. Ajit is like god damn Prince Charming.
There's no ntr outside the scene with the gf and the fisherman. But nobody had a clue what was happening which kind of defeats the purpose. The rest of the girls shown are Wayne's family, some random barmaid, the captain's wife, the game doesn't provide any reason to feel anything or care what happens to them. MC can even help set up Bryce like it's the most normal thing in the world.
Don't get me wrong, the women are still hot, the renders and sex scenes are still nice. It's just missing... something.
There's no corruption, the women are instantly sleeping with anyone who pays attention to them for 5 minutes. Both in the past and at present. Without a single instance of inappropriate behavior from these horny pirates. They're not hurting or taking advantage of anyone. They're not even rude. Ajit is like god damn Prince Charming.
There's no ntr outside the scene with the gf and the fisherman. But nobody had a clue what was happening which kind of defeats the purpose. The rest of the girls shown are Wayne's family, some random barmaid, the captain's wife, the game doesn't provide any reason to feel anything or care what happens to them. MC can even help set up Bryce like it's the most normal thing in the world.
Don't get me wrong, the women are still hot, the renders and sex scenes are still nice. It's just missing... something.
- Nov 13, 2021
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That's why I like it I guess it gets straight to the point cause most of the NTR games I play have corruption that keeps teasing and it takes hours to finally get to a scene, sure it kind of hot to start slow like that, and make the scene more worth the time, but sometimes I'm just too lazy to read and get tired of it fast, That why this game kind of refreshing a bit, But I do agree with the lack of bad guy, to make the game more interesting they has to have more bad guy with bad intention to spice the scenario a bit, btw I think it is the dev first project so there still time to improve and fix.
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- Dec 21, 2019
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I don't necessarily think it needs douchey villains. Just some tension. Corruption. Seduction. Some slightly believable behavior. Not 2 minutes of vanilla fairytale romance dialogue followed by sex every time characters meet.
Well, this was only day one of their lustful voyage. Maybe the dev is also sick of slow burn games that never deliver and wanted to get in some early sex scenes. I can get on board with that. We'll see what the next updates bring.
Hopefully less flashbacks
I dont think that's fully true - I mean personally I'm curious how Kayla will get on with the crew.
And now with the captain taking A BALL TO THE BRAIN things are likely to be shaken up amongst the crew.
I think some of where that feeling comes from is because it's NOT a blueball simulator like so many games. It's like we're all guilty of being jaded and adopting that as the norm in our minds for porn games, so when a game comes along that isn't that it feels weird and off-balance.
I took your usage of intrigue to mean confusion/curiousity on the part of the audience like "I wonder what will happen next!?"
It has nothing to do do with it not being a blueball simulator, it has to do with the girls giving it up so easy that it breaks that little bit of immersion the reader has. The barmaid getting it on with Hank was one thing. But the blonde, and then Amber screwing some old fucks they just met after a few words... That is so detached from RL, so unbelievable, that it feels off.
The upside is that the scenes are hot. The dev is good with the renders, so it "saves" the game. But the game could be a lot better without abandoning the route is going.
Based on the quantity of criticism for the npc antagonists compared to the last episode, I've a strong hunch it has less to do with believability and more to do with the manner in which these escapades took place.
- Mar 17, 2021
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- Dec 20, 2020
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Exactly... Hank is some bartender who gets the girls without effort and
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- Aug 18, 2020
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The user interface is terrible. The main menu is wayyyyy too exxagerated with them six women as each choice, just make it simple and spice up the design.
When right cklicking to either load a different save, go to preferences or something else I'm having trouble navigating as the background takes up more focus than the menu points and there's no quick menu which is sometimes troublesome.
Lastly, a game that has as many mutiple pathways with sex scenes needs a gallery asap.
I remember having sex with Kayla at the beginning and now we have sex with Amber or screw with Savannah. There's also "NTR" flashbacks with the blonde (forogot her name) and the captain's late wife (not real ntr but whatever) and Ajit seemed to have had a possible scene for Amber, I did not inspect further.
We need a gallery for this. I feel like it's an unwritten rule for AVNs to have a replay gallery.
When right cklicking to either load a different save, go to preferences or something else I'm having trouble navigating as the background takes up more focus than the menu points and there's no quick menu which is sometimes troublesome.
Lastly, a game that has as many mutiple pathways with sex scenes needs a gallery asap.
I remember having sex with Kayla at the beginning and now we have sex with Amber or screw with Savannah. There's also "NTR" flashbacks with the blonde (forogot her name) and the captain's late wife (not real ntr but whatever) and Ajit seemed to have had a possible scene for Amber, I did not inspect further.
We need a gallery for this. I feel like it's an unwritten rule for AVNs to have a replay gallery.
- Nov 15, 2020
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When you choose not to eavesdrop, you may have opened up the possibility of a vanilla route for you and Blondie
yeh i hate that this old man was the only set up for the gf and her mother
I like it. Now there are two stowaways on board. I wonder who will get caught first?
Bro is a true cuckold probably, he wants to see gf being taken from the view of MC, leave the Dev cooking, he knows what he is doing, that first scene was amazing
Anyone knows what the dev just drop on his new update? I though it was a game update, but it still V0.2. I was asking to know so i can buy it.
There's a lot to like about this game from the detailed renders to the story's willingness to touch upon (relatively) dark subject matter. It's clear that the dev has ambitions for this project and wants it to stand apart from other games like it in the space. However, in my opinion, this game ultimately does not reach the high expectations that it has set out for itself. This is due to x3 main issues that significantly detract from the intended experience. This is elaborated upon in more detail under the tag below.
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Great game! I just played the 0.2 version and it's definately a game I will keep track of.
Could be a game worth supporting too.
I like the looks of the Lis and the story so far, plus kudos for letting the girls have some hair (wish they had more, but I take what I can get) also kudos for adding NTR (and allowing me the choice when to play it or not).
As some others have mentioned, sharing content and/or Netorase content could be a positive improvement. Though it will create more paths and will make each new update heavier for you to handle (dev wise) so it is definately not an easy choice to make.
I will write a review, but have to wait a few more versions first. But a good start indeed.
Could be a game worth supporting too.
I like the looks of the Lis and the story so far, plus kudos for letting the girls have some hair (wish they had more, but I take what I can get) also kudos for adding NTR (and allowing me the choice when to play it or not).
As some others have mentioned, sharing content and/or Netorase content could be a positive improvement. Though it will create more paths and will make each new update heavier for you to handle (dev wise) so it is definately not an easy choice to make.
I will write a review, but have to wait a few more versions first. But a good start indeed.
Here is my feedback as a netorare-enjoyer who doesn't like netorase vibes.
I'm actually pleasantly surprised that at least so far, you don't have to get the MC to knowingly and willingly become a cuck/netorase kind of guy. There is hope for netorare yet. I thought that event with Bryce would be some netorase thing, but Ajit swooping in and cucking both of them was a nice touch.
If there is an advice to give, I'd say that you should slow down. You seem to be considering a full scene as an "NTR event," but satisfying NTR needs some more time to simmer and build up. Because if you blow that load on the first scene, where do you go from there other than the repeat of the same thing over and over again? Like Ajit and the red head girl have banged and she is in love with him. On the first scene. That arc is essentially done and it was the first event.
For me, the flashback stuff were actually more conductive to NTR storytelling, simply because that is not part of an NTR arc and it's just showing the player something that happened in the past. For something like that, it's fine to go full sex and showcase the scene as you wish. That said, you can't just always rely on flashbacks or dreams or whatever. It would be prudent to get a feel of building up scenes upon each other and planning out a progressive arc for each girl as they get more and more corrupted. And as a netorare fan, I personally would enjoy it if the MC wasn't overtly pushing them into NTR but inadvertantly causing it like he has been doing so far. But if you want to go for netorase stuff, that's your choice as well. It should just be written with deliberate intent on which flavor you want to go with so there is some thematic consistency. And if there are choices that can lead to either variation, that would be even better.
Btw, I have a weaker machine, so I noticed that the animations that play in succession tends to lag during the later ones. This usually means you are not clearing an animation before playing the new one so the first animations are still playing in the background or something like that. Maybe check that out.
I'm actually pleasantly surprised that at least so far, you don't have to get the MC to knowingly and willingly become a cuck/netorase kind of guy. There is hope for netorare yet. I thought that event with Bryce would be some netorase thing, but Ajit swooping in and cucking both of them was a nice touch.
If there is an advice to give, I'd say that you should slow down. You seem to be considering a full scene as an "NTR event," but satisfying NTR needs some more time to simmer and build up. Because if you blow that load on the first scene, where do you go from there other than the repeat of the same thing over and over again? Like Ajit and the red head girl have banged and she is in love with him. On the first scene. That arc is essentially done and it was the first event.
For me, the flashback stuff were actually more conductive to NTR storytelling, simply because that is not part of an NTR arc and it's just showing the player something that happened in the past. For something like that, it's fine to go full sex and showcase the scene as you wish. That said, you can't just always rely on flashbacks or dreams or whatever. It would be prudent to get a feel of building up scenes upon each other and planning out a progressive arc for each girl as they get more and more corrupted. And as a netorare fan, I personally would enjoy it if the MC wasn't overtly pushing them into NTR but inadvertantly causing it like he has been doing so far. But if you want to go for netorase stuff, that's your choice as well. It should just be written with deliberate intent on which flavor you want to go with so there is some thematic consistency. And if there are choices that can lead to either variation, that would be even better.
Btw, I have a weaker machine, so I noticed that the animations that play in succession tends to lag during the later ones. This usually means you are not clearing an animation before playing the new one so the first animations are still playing in the background or something like that. Maybe check that out.