VN Ren'Py Martyr of Love [v5.0] [AlienCat69]

[SpyderArachnid]

Long hair MC will get to be short hair MC...or not, according to your choices. It's a story that started with a possible end that's all. It's not finished.

That makes it confusing though. Starting the game with one of multiple possible endings. If someone doesn't get that ending that matches the intro to the game, then the intro won't make any sense. It becomes confusing how the intro starts that way, yet the ending doesn't match.

You need to really change your first Chapter because when the game starts out or at least that is how it is for the Android version it shows the MC older and much shorter hair and then as he starts to have flashbacks it shows him starting to have sex with Christina which doesn't seem like there is a choice there. There is much that is forced on the MC especially his relationship with Samantha which I get because then we can meet her Milf mother. The thing that gets me in Part 3 is sex with Camille which is forced when it should be a choice there or not to cheat, yeah it is a choice to "stay" at the party or go with Samantha BUT it should also be a choice to have sex with Camille or not. I don't know who beta tests your game but there is obviously a lot of forced stuff that many players won't like and will be turned off by it. You started out good with the first Chapter BUT it could use a bit more choices. Also it is hard to know by the banner here who most of the LI's are going to be which should be updated. Also the conversation with Samantha's dad about how he wants to be with Josephine which almost tells me that choice there is going to be forced especially IF you want to cuck him with his wife. Not a bad story BUT I think some things just need to be rethought.

I didn't know about that (with Camille). I chose to go with Samantha. Guess the game does force you to be a cheating asshole then.

Same answer about the beginning.
Yeah, as you say it's possible to stay loyal to Samantha, didn't see it necessary to add a yes/no choice when Camille's naked in front of you, MC wouldn't say "Good bye, I'm going home." He has a weakness. But yeah, if people want it, I'll add it.
I have no control over the banner here, my patreon has the latest one.

He has a weakness? So a girl gets naked and he loses all control and has to sleep with her against his will? MC has a girlfriend and a chick gets naked and he just goes "Screw my girlfriend, I'm going to go get laid!". Yeah that's definitely not the type of MC I want to play. Force a girlfriend on us and then force us to cheat on her. Myself personally, would definitely say "Goodbye, I'm going home." MC has a girlfriend he is in love with. Does that mean nothing to him that he would drop it all to get his dick wet at the first sight of a naked chick?

That really cements the choice that this game just won't be for me. Doesn't mean you need to change it or anything, just not my tastes is all. There is plenty others who will enjoy it, so no worries. Regardless, again, still wish you the best of luck with your project.

sorry for the multi-quote and long message lol

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

That makes it confusing though. Starting the game with one of multiple possible endings. If someone doesn't get that ending that matches the intro to the game, then the intro won't make any sense. It becomes confusing how the intro starts that way, yet the ending doesn't match.



I didn't know about that (with Camille). I chose to go with Samantha. Guess the game does force you to be a cheating asshole then.



He has a weakness? So a girl gets naked and he loses all control and has to sleep with her against his will? MC has a girlfriend and a chick gets naked and he just goes "Screw my girlfriend, I'm going to go get laid!". Yeah that's definitely not the type of MC I want to play. Force a girlfriend on us and then force us to cheat on her. Myself personally, would definitely say "Goodbye, I'm going home." MC has a girlfriend he is in love with. Does that mean nothing to him that he would drop it all to get his dick wet at the first sight of a naked chick?

That really cements the choice that this game just won't be for me. Doesn't mean you need to change it or anything, just not my tastes is all. There is plenty others who will enjoy it, so no worries. Regardless, again, still wish you the best of luck with your project.

sorry for the multi-quote and long message lol

There are people like that in RL, bro and while you're not like that, others are. Sometimes it's hard to keep the horse corraled when there are barns that are wide open.

 

[juliusnestor]

very good game, but the choices are not very clear!!!!

 

[AlienCat]

Milfs, Romance, Cheating, Mystery...Corruption too, but not implemented yet.

Some tags...

 

[Kuokaman]

Unfortunately there's only illusion of choice, you can't even choose girl you are interested in.

 

[Abhai]

very good game, but the choices are not very clear!!!!

you mean, choices should be something like - here is a ultra hot XYZ chick. what mc will do now:
1-yes, he wanna to fuck her
2-nope, he doesnt wanna to fuck her (are you sure...sure 100%..nah, you are joking..this is a porn game you aczually wanna to fuck her, so here we go)

yeah, this game doesnt have that, your pain is understandable

Unfortunately there's only illusion of choice, you can't even choose girl you are interested in.

so far only "enforced" chick is GF.
hopefully it will stay that way, or provide an opportunity to break up with her at some point.

too early to judge still, we shall see how it goes with few more updates.

 

[juliusnestor]

you mean, choices should be something like - here is a ultra hot XYZ chick. what mc will do now:
1-yes, he wanna to fuck her
2-nope, he doesnt wanna to fuck her (are you sure...sure 100%..nah, you are joking..this is a porn game you aczually wanna to fuck her, so here we go)

yeah, this game doesnt have that, your pain is understandable

so far only "enforced" chick is GF.
hopefully it will stay that way, or provide an opportunity to break up with her at some point.

too early to judge still, we shall see how it goes with few more updates.

your answers are not very clear, tell you all and are contrary

 

[Kuokaman]

this is a porn game you aczually wanna to fuck her

This is not just a porn game, this is a life simulation game and sex is of course an important part of life but for me when playing more important are relations with female characters.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

You can debate what happened.. but as for me I had fun with this. Hot girls.. decent writing.. great animations.. Not to much else I could ask for. Nice work!

 

[kktcross]

i got 2 scenes with samantha and 1 with camille did i miss some scenes guys?

 

[hysepReC]

Damn, that Camille scene was hot. Love how she asked the MC if her tits were bigger than his girlfriend's and then mentioned her again as she was riding him. She's definitely my favourite so far.

I was looking forward to content with Vittoria, but her husband practically offering her up if the MC helps him with Jo kind of dulled my interest. I'd prefer to just fuck her behind his (and her daughter's) back but i guess that's not going to happen?

 

[m4pII]

I really liked the game.
There are great characters, and I enjoyed reading the dialogues.

I think I understand what you're trying to do by giving the MC an almost perfect girlfriend and at the same time surrounding him with hot MILFs.
But I didn't like the forced scene with Camila. It looked very unnatural. At one moment he is a nice guy, at another, he behaves like an unscrupulous chad. My humble opinion is that the player should be given the opportunity to cheat, but not forced to do so.

And I also fucking love Vittoria and look forward to the content with her, but as it was written above, due to the fact that her husband almost himself pushes her into the arms of the player, she is no longer perceived as a challenge and "forbidden fruit".
This reduces interest in her.

 

[Abhai]

I really liked the game.
There are great characters, and I enjoyed reading the dialogues.

I think I understand what you're trying to do by giving the MC an almost perfect girlfriend and at the same time surrounding him with hot MILFs.
But I didn't like the forced scene with Camila. It looked very unnatural. At one moment he is a nice guy, at another, he behaves like an unscrupulous chad. My humble opinion is that the player should be given the opportunity to cheat, but not forced to do so.

And I also fucking love Vittoria and look forward to the content with her, but as it was written above, due to the fact that her husband almost himself pushes her into the arms of the player, she is no longer perceived as a challenge and "forbidden fruit".
This reduces interest in her.

From my side I hope there will be an opportunity to break up with (predestined) "almost perfect girlfriend"
Im all for freedom of choices, and the only negative in this game are few enforced characters and scenes (though im getting the reasons for some of those as well).

 

[sigvar]

Yeah, I'll have to check out of this one as well. Not a fan of being forced into a path if I am supposed to be having a choice. I chose not to go after Samantha in the first meeting and apparently that wasn't a real choice. I don't mind kinetic novels as I can look at the tags and decide if it is something I want to read. Ones that aren't tagged as such and end up forcing choices like this one are pretty dishonest. If you have a story you want to tell a certain way, just make it a Kinetic novel. It will go over better.

 

[dacris69]

So many good looking girls and mc is forced with one of the ugliest

 

[Garouzar]

any sex scenes?

 

[Im The Night]

Guys anyone saves of ep3 start please share with me

 

[Im The Night]

Guys anyone saves of ep3 start please share with me

 

[Canto Forte]

Episode 4
Main Events:
Soccer tryout/Jessica's birthday.
Franz's side story progress.
2 new s*x scenes with animations.

Spoiler: Peek a boo ...

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Meet my babe section:

Spoiler: Characters: Camille Garnier

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[powerfred3k]

If you like the game, please support it.

I did a few days ago. This game is a hidden gem.