We have to put this into context though. This thing here is in 0.1 state. There is no point to compare with something more substantial, have to view this within its own context. The story won't win a nobel in literature but this is a porn game after all. A good story is awesome and enchances the fap, just like you say it, but i find this level of story to my liking
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To be honest i feel like he is delivering exactly what he did in his previous games, regarding the story i mean, it won't be less and i don't expect it to become more. There are simply twists and its not the usual approach which i personally don't mind.