Ren'Py Completed Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR]

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abram1

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Onyxdime said:
Sure, as I mentioned previously there are not going to be any pregnancy or harem Endings in the final 1.0 release.

If ICSTOR ever asks me if I want to write those though, then I would absolutely love to.

Ideally, I'd like to do a build-up towards a harem by starting with threesomes between:
-Linda+Caroline (With Linda and Caroline dominating the main character.)
-Sara+Caroline (With Caroline teasing her jealous younger... fellow renter.)
-Sara+Linda (Linda guiding Sara's actions, telling her what to do etc.)

These threesome scenes would have to have proper introductions where the girls reveal they have both been sleeping with MC, and their reactions to this. Then, perhaps a group date with the two girls, followed by the actual threesome scene.

Once all threesomes have been unlocked, the player could then cumulate in a final foursome between the main girls and MC. Not quite sure how I'd write this yet.
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The way you thought out the hypothetical "true" continuation/conclusion of this story warms up my heart. Whenever your employer fulfills his part of the deal by releasing this dumpster-fire of a VN, it would've been fantastic to get what you've described.

You're definitely a qualified person to write well-thought stories. What if you pitch the harem idea to him and if he agrees, you write an actual mini-story with above mentioned scenarios, kind of a draft, to give him an idea where to move after 1.0. It makes more sense to take care of the story to a guy who actually knows how to write them, not just stamp a bunch of renders hoping to end up with something decent.
 
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magaclaawe

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Onyxdime said:
I'm aiming to finish Liza and Yazmin by Sunday night. Maybe Monday at a push.

That will be 100% of my side of the work complete.

From that point on ICSTOR and the programmer take over. I honestly don't know how long it will take them on that side of things.
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No spoilers but does liza and yazmin have any NTR? Or maybe someone else in the game?
 
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to all asking for "harem" or "pregnancy ending":
i understand you all - in NORMAL conditions, i would love to see them too. but given the situation, i wouldn't push this topic: it could be a "good" reason for the dev for another delay.
so let's just hope we will have a full game, as scheduled (IF we ever see it...)
 
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Chazz1239

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Onyxdime said:
Sure, as I mentioned previously there are not going to be any pregnancy or harem Endings in the final 1.0 release.

If ICSTOR ever asks me if I want to write those though, then I would absolutely love to.

Ideally, I'd like to do a build-up towards a harem by starting with threesomes between:
-Linda+Caroline (With Linda and Caroline dominating the main character.)
-Sara+Caroline (With Caroline teasing her jealous younger... fellow renter.)
-Sara+Linda (Linda guiding Sara's actions, telling her what to do etc.)

These threesome scenes would have to have proper introductions where the girls reveal they have both been sleeping with MC, and their reactions to this. Then, perhaps a group date with the two girls, followed by the actual threesome scene.

Once all threesomes have been unlocked, the player could then cumulate in a final foursome between the main girls and MC. Not quite sure how I'd write this yet.
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Hmmm, now that you put it like this, I personally don't want it.
For some reason it just... "doesn't feel right" to have a harem ending.
 
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vks017 said:
The last update was tiny. Rushed out to remove the abandoned tag. The last normal size update was 4 years ago. So thats the last real time we know for certain this was worked on full time.
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Even though it was a tiny update, it was still the last update that was released
 
boxedjack

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Chazz1239 said:
Hmmm, now that you put it like this, I personally don't want it.
For some reason it just... "doesn't feel right" to have a harem ending.
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Could it be because the MC is written very differently across the routes? The biggest outlier is him being all romantic with Caroline explicitly stating he would never hurt her like her cheating boyfriend did. Would be a tough sell:

"Caroline, I know I promised I'd never do anything to hurt you but you should know that I've been fucking mom landlady and Sarah thinks I'm her boyfriend. Don't worry, I think we can make it work. Also, if the police show up it's probably because I've been blackmailing my teacher college professor into having sex with me after she rejected me.
But I'm totally the same sweet boyfriend you know. Just ask my psychologist (who I've also been fucking)."
 
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ddcmt said:
If you think one minute of content and a few rendering scenes are considered updates, then it is.
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It went from 0.6e to 0.71b even with that small update.

And look at updates from most big game makers, making outfit DLC that are insignificant to everything but is official DLC
 
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boxedjack said:
Could it be because the MC is written very differently across the routes? The biggest outlier is him being all romantic with Caroline explicitly stating he would never hurt her like her cheating boyfriend did. Would be a tough sell:

"Caroline, I know I promised I'd never do anything to hurt you but you should know that I've been fucking mom landlady and Sarah thinks I'm her boyfriend. Don't worry, I think we can make it work. Also, if the police show up it's probably because I've been blackmailing my teacher college professor into having sex with me after she rejected me.
But I'm totally the same sweet boyfriend you know. Just ask my psychologist (who I've also been fucking)."
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Kinda yeah, their personalities don't resonate together and morally clash. Each wants him for herself and every plotline is written in a way that it emphasizes a 1 on 1 relationship between family members.
Harem routes would only make sense if it's a family member with an outside cast. Ex. - Linda with Judy/Celia/Liz, Caroline with Violet and Sara with Lily...
 
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MrBaddingtonBear

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Moro86 said:
cause he claimed the game will be released around April .. in June he is talking about how much work he is doing right now for the script and renders of main characters ... it does not make any sense . I think we are here doing them a favor by keeping the topic alive making free publicity
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Onyx gave an estimation when he expected it should’ve been done by. Unfortunately for him, ICSTOR decided to snort coke and jerk off in his mom’s basement instead of doing the remaining renders. Not a surprise for any of us after witnessing this same thing happen multiple times druing all these years, so all that people can say is that Onyx was waaaaaaaay too optimistic with his estimation.
 
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Mapedi said:
It went from 0.6e to 0.71b even with that small update.

And look at updates from most big game makers, making outfit DLC that are insignificant to everything but is official DLC
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According to your words, his rendering on Patreon has also been updated, so he has been updated for 3 years.
 
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