Ren'Py Completed Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR]

[timbukalso]

Meta-update: I've created a thread for this rewrite and will be providing updates, there: https://f95zone.to/threads/milfy-city-american-dirty-talk-15-02-2024-timbukalso.193758/

I've deleted the attachment from this post. You can find the most up-to-date version in the thread for the rewrite.

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Attached to this post you'll find a partial rewrite of Milfy City. It's partial because I'm rewriting as I play the game, and I'm about half-way through.

Update:
1.08.2024: Fixed one syntax error, rewrote 8 additional scenes.
1.15.2024: Significantly rewrote Celia's path to increase plausibility, or at least decrease implausibility. Rewrote 3 additional scenes.
1.16.2024: Fixed one syntax error, rewrote 1 additional scene.
1.17.2024: Rewrote six additional scenes on Celia's route.

If you'd like to try out this version, you'll first need Powerbabe's "Content Restoration Mod".

1. Apply version 0.4 of the Content Restoration Mod to version 1.0e of Milfy City.
2. Delete game\scripts.rpa
3. Copy the contents of game.7z into your Milfy City folder, overwriting any files which already exist.

In this rewrite:

Dialogue has been "Americanized", both in idiom and in spelling. E.g. favourite -> favorite, ice lolly -> popsicle, "that's me done" -> "I'm finished".

Dialogue has been heavily rewritten (up to the point of my current progress in the game). In general:

• I've noticed frequent opportunities to eliminate internal monologue in which characters are redundantly stating what's happening in the scene.
• I've tried to make characters sound more natural. E.g. by breaking up their dialogue with hesitation as they figure out what they want to say while they're saying it.
• I've made the women, particularly the MILFs, much more vividly graphic in their dirty-talk.

Images have been reordered to better match the flow of the dialogue.

Simple animations have been added to make the scenes slightly more dynamic.

Annoyances have been removed. E.g. A great deal of unskippable pauses, and many requirements to have particular items selected in the inventory.

Note: The non-incest and non-blackmail dialogue has been removed from these versions of the files.

Here's an example of rewritten dialog, this one being the first sex scene between Sidra and Isla. As you can see, I've diverged significantly from the original script. In particular, I wanted to add some dimension to Sidra, who's a cartoon villain in the original script. The orgasm arithmetic also seemed ridiculous, to me, so I eliminated it.

Spoiler: Original dialogue

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[Timy31]

What was the last thing you did with Celia, before the hint said to talk with Judy? Did you finish all the webcam stuff? Did you meet Celia in your room? Did you find Celia's weakness?

You can also upload your save file, maybe I can see where you are and find out what you need to do.

I started over. Now I can say where it starts. After I've been to the security room and deleted the recordings, I go back to talk to Celia. Then I get an error message and if I ignore it, I get an announcement that the director will talk to me. If I go to the director, it will say that I have already spoken to him and from then on things won't go any further with Celia.

Here is the error message:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While processing text tag {/color} in u'{color=#a4f1ff}Zeit:{/color> ??? \n{color=#a4f1ff}Location:{/color} ??? \n{color=#fbce6e}Warte auf Celias Zug.{/color}'.:
  File "game/scripts/school/school_entrace/morning/shool_entrace_morning.rpy", line 26, in script
    call screen school_entrance_morning
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 569, in execute_call_screen
    store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
Exception: u'/color' closes a text tag that isn't open.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/scripts/school/school_entrace/morning/shool_entrace_morning.rpy", line 26, in script
    call screen school_entrance_morning
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 2015, in execute
    self.call("execute")
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 2003, in call
    return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/statements.py", line 278, in call
    return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 569, in execute_call_screen
    store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/exports.py", line 3136, in call_screen
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse="screen", type="screen", roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 688, in render
    child = renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1264, in render
    st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1029, in render
    surf = render(d, width - x, rh, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/text/text.py", line 2096, in render
    virtual_layout = Layout(self, width, height, renders, drawable_res=False, size_only=True)
  File "renpy/text/text.py", line 610, in __init__
    self.paragraphs = self.segment(text.tokens, style, renders, text)
  File "renpy/text/text.py", line 1039, in segment
    raise Exception("%r closes a text tag that isn't open." % text)
Exception: u'/color' closes a text tag that isn't open.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Milfy City 1.0e
Sun Jan  7 15:03:06 2024

 

[john1230]

I started over. Now I can say where it starts. After I've been to the security room and deleted the recordings, I go back to talk to Celia. Then I get an error message and if I ignore it, I get an announcement that the director will talk to me. If I go to the director, it will say that I have already spoken to him and from then on things won't go any further with Celia.

Here is the error message:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While processing text tag {/color} in u'{color=#a4f1ff}Zeit:{/color> ??? \n{color=#a4f1ff}Location:{/color} ??? \n{color=#fbce6e}Warte auf Celias Zug.{/color}'.:
  File "game/scripts/school/school_entrace/morning/shool_entrace_morning.rpy", line 26, in script
    call screen school_entrance_morning
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 569, in execute_call_screen
    store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
Exception: u'/color' closes a text tag that isn't open.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/scripts/school/school_entrace/morning/shool_entrace_morning.rpy", line 26, in script
    call screen school_entrance_morning
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 2015, in execute
    self.call("execute")
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 2003, in call
    return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/statements.py", line 278, in call
    return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 569, in execute_call_screen
    store._return = renpy.call_screen(name, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/exports.py", line 3136, in call_screen
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse="screen", type="screen", roll_forward=roll_forward)
  File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3325, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3839, in interact_core
    self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
  File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2565, in draw_screen
    renpy.config.screen_height,
  File "render.pyx", line 492, in renpy.display.render.render_screen
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 688, in render
    child = renpy.display.render.render(self.child, w, h, st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 826, in render
    surf = render(child, width, height, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1264, in render
    st, at)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1029, in render
    surf = render(d, width - x, rh, cst, cat)
  File "render.pyx", line 170, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "render.pyx", line 263, in renpy.display.render.render
  File "renpy/text/text.py", line 2096, in render
    virtual_layout = Layout(self, width, height, renders, drawable_res=False, size_only=True)
  File "renpy/text/text.py", line 610, in __init__
    self.paragraphs = self.segment(text.tokens, style, renders, text)
  File "renpy/text/text.py", line 1039, in segment
    raise Exception("%r closes a text tag that isn't open." % text)
Exception: u'/color' closes a text tag that isn't open.

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Milfy City 1.0e
Sun Jan  7 15:03:06 2024

I wanna say you installed an old walkthrough mod on a new version of the game, but what do I know.

 

[manneychin]

Attached to this post you'll find a partial rewrite of Milfy City. It's partial because I'm rewriting as I play the game, and I'm about half-way through.

If you'd like to try out this version, you'll first need Powerbabe's "Content Restoration Mod".

1. Apply version 0.4 of the Content Restoration Mod to version 1.0e of Milfy City.
2. Delete game\scripts.rpa
3. Copy the contents of game.7z into your Milfy City folder, overwriting any files which already exist.

In this rewrite:

Dialogue has been "Americanized", both in idiom and in spelling. E.g. favourite -> favorite, ice lolly -> popsicle, "that's me done" -> "I'm finished".

Dialogue has been heavily rewritten (up to the point of my current progress in the game). In general:

• I've noticed frequent opportunities to eliminate internal monologue in which characters are redundantly stating what's happening in the scene.
• I've tried to make characters sound more natural. E.g. by breaking up their dialogue with hesitation as they figure out what they want to say while they're saying it.
• I've made the women, particularly the MILFs, much more vividly graphic in their dirty-talk.

Images have been reordered to better match the flow of the dialogue.

Simple animations have been added to make the scenes slightly more dynamic.

Annoyances have been removed. E.g. A great deal of unskippable pauses, and many requirements to have particular items selected in the inventory.

Note: The non-incest and non-blackmail dialogue has been removed from these versions of the files.

Here's an example of rewritten dialog, this one being the first sex scene between Sidra and Isla. As you can see, I've diverged significantly from the original script. In particular, I wanted to add some dimension to Sidra, who's a cartoon villain in the original script. The orgasm arithmetic also seemed ridiculous, to me, so I eliminated it.

Spoiler: Original dialogue

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Spoiler: New dialogue

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Pretty nice but beware that Powerbabe's patch is still in dev and will continue to be for some time (1-2 more months, maybe). Please consider setting aside some time to update your patch when Powerbabe updates theirs.

Powerbabe, do you think the next update for your patch (AFAIK covering "Linda's path") will come this month?

 

[Powerbabe]

Powerbabe, do you think the next update for your patch (AFAIK covering "Linda's path") will come this month?

It will be. I'm almost done with it. I just need to do a few more playtests to ensure everything works as intended.

 

[DanielJ99]

Sorry everyone! I've been completely out of the loop with MILFY City for the past year or so; the last update I played was the 0.71b update. Has the game actually been finished now, seriously? I don't mean to be naïve or anything, but I'm just a little lost on where is game is at the moment in terms of it's development.

Did it actually get finished? Because I've spent the past 18 months thinking it was just dead in the water.

 

[Davexxx555]

Apk version????

 

[Mr.Blackwell]

Sorry everyone! I've been completely out of the loop with MILFY City for the past year or so; the last update I played was the 0.71b update. Has the game actually been finished now, seriously? I don't mean to be naïve or anything, but I'm just a little lost on where is game is at the moment in terms of it's development.

Did it actually get finished? Because I've spent the past 18 months thinking it was just dead in the water.

Go here Ren'Py - Completed - Milfy City [v1.0e] [ICSTOR] | F95zone

 

[Alex and Eva Gaming]

Sorry everyone! I've been completely out of the loop with MILFY City for the past year or so; the last update I played was the 0.71b update. Has the game actually been finished now, seriously? I don't mean to be naïve or anything, but I'm just a little lost on where is game is at the moment in terms of it's development.

Did it actually get finished? Because I've spent the past 18 months thinking it was just dead in the water.

Well, It's kinda finished. ICSTOR clearly didn't put much work into finishing the story lines. And the quality took a bit of a hit too. The dev is still adding some additional content to the game too, so it may be good to hold off until he's completely finished. Up to you if you wanna play through it all again.

 

[DanielJ99]

Well, It's kinda finished. ICSTOR clearly didn't put much work into finishing the story lines. And the quality took a bit of a hit too. The dev is still adding some additional content to the game too, so it may be good to hold off until he's completely finished. Up to you if you wanna play through it all again.

Okay, thanks for clearing that up. I might actually give it a go, because I do remember enjoying the story and a lot of the characters. I can't believe we actually live in a world where MILFY City is closer to completion (If you can call it that) than Summertime Saga.

 

[bubbaboy]

how do I access charles' home after completing that part of the quest? Playing 1.0d and can't find it, didn't get the secret cards and it's bothering me

 

[balboa2151]

Well, It's kinda finished. ICSTOR clearly didn't put much work into finishing the story lines. And the quality took a bit of a hit too. The dev is still adding some additional content to the game too, so it may be good to hold off until he's completely finished. Up to you if you wanna play through it all again.

I hope Dev puts the pregnancy back into game!!!

 

[Rick Ashley]

Can anyone share a link of any website where i can edit my save files

 

[fillup1209]

Spoiler: Old Versions

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Partial Content Restoration Mod 0.4 Alternative Dialog Pixeldrain
Partial Content Restoration Mod 0.4 Alternative Dialog Mega

0.1: It fully restores the deleted 'Sidra and Isla' content (the friendly neighborhood lesbians), the intro, and a few minor things, such as the school on the map.
0.2: Includes fixes to the full Caroline's path.
0.3: Fully restores Celia's blackmail path.
0.4: Restores Sara's full path.

Installation: Just drop the "game" folder from the archive into the main "MilfyCity" folder. Overwrite if asked.

Log:
0.1 - Initial release.
0.1.1 - Added the missing video files.
0.1.2 - Fixed the typo for the "videos" folder.
0.2 - Caroline only: Fixes numerous grammar mistakes, restores all relationship-related content, and reinstates all stuff related to school.
0.2.1 - Fixed the typo for the "videos" folder.
0.3 - Added restoration to Celia's complete blackmail path.
0.3.1 - A fully rewritten dialogue for the first event, introduced with version 1.0, between MC and Celia, is now much more in line with the previous ones.
0.3.2 - Contains fixes from 1.0e. Fully compatible with the Steam version.
0.4 - Adds full restoration to Sara's path. She's back to school, reinstates her relationship with the MC, and other members of the cast, along with all related content and many minor things. Sorry about the last event, I couldn't help myself...

0.4 - Adds full restoration to Sara's path, what does that mean? Was some of Sara's path removed?

 

[manneychin]

0.4 - Adds full restoration to Sara's path, what does that mean? Was some of Sara's path removed?

In the years between v0.7 and v1.0 ICSTOR took the opportunity to make his own name meaningless and remove incest from MC. In addition, he also removed anything else considered an incorrect fantasy by Steam/Patreon. This resulted in a v1.0 where lots of past kinky content involving many characters was mutilated or just removed to appease the Fantasy Police.
ICSTOR also produced false expectations right here on F95, via intermediaries, suggesting the aforementioned mutilations will be restored via a patch that will "magically" pop into existence from "unknown" pirates very soon after v1.0 final releases. v1.0 final released around Nov 3rd. There was no patch.
Powerbabe proceeded to make this patch independently but there's lots to do and it gets done in their free time with no compensation so it takes however long it takes. I've been tracking the effort and I guesstimate it's about 70% done so the earliest when everything that could be restored will likely finally be restored is around March.

 

[salvo00786]

Hi... I have seen the content restoration patch. What we are missing from the original before the deletion of the content? I want to play the game, but I want to know the answer to my question, because I have to think if I want to play this now or wait for the (possible) full content restoration patch. Let me know, thanks.

 

[manneychin]

What we are missing from the original before the deletion of the content? I want to play the game, but I want to know the answer to my question, because I have to think if I want to play this now or wait for the (possible) full content restoration patch.

I was also interested in this but I've never seen a concise list of TODOs for restoration, expressed in a way that's understandable to someone who's never played v1.0 at all and who barely remembers what happened in past versions (as they were released many years ago).
I haven't played v1.0 yet as I'm waiting for Powerbabe's final restore patch (which may take ~2 more months; let's call it r-patch for short, from now on) so what I know is all second hand info. I placed my bet on Powerbabe as the most relevant source of info about what the restoration effort entails.

An important thing to note about r-patch is that it goes much deeper than just strictly adding events & assets removed between v0.7 and v1.0. r-patch also corrects dialogues that don't make much sense in v1.0 because the mutilation done by ICSTOR to whore out for Patreon's Fantasy Police was half-assed (e.g. blackmail was incompletely removed so Celia still spoke later as if you blackmailed her, etc. etc. lots of corrections like that were needed). r-patch also corrects dialogues related to incest, especially if they were not already covered by . So r-patch acts as a complement to i-patch, improving incest dialogue across the game.
Finally, another important thing to note is r-patch restores what can be restored (i.e. events, dialogue & images/videos removed between v0.7 and v1.0) and corrects dialogues wherever they're obviously incoherent or mutilated for Steam/Patreon but it can't add significant content to the game as it doesn't deal with adding images/videos. So events/paths that were in effect left unfinished by ICSTOR will remain so even after r-patch's final version.

To see what was already done so far via r-patch, check its log here. In short:

0.1: It fully restores the deleted 'Sidra and Isla' content (the friendly neighborhood lesbians), the intro, and a few minor things, such as the school on the map.
0.2: Includes fixes to the full Caroline's path.
0.3: Fully restores Celia's blackmail path.
0.4: Restores Sara's full path.

Soon(ish), a new r-patch version will be released which will comb through everything strongly connected to Linda (i.e. Linda's path, inc. her sister).
There is still more work to be done afterwards, for events strongly connected to Judy, Bob and maybe a few other minor characters.
Last but not least, r-patch already includes a lot of dialogue corrections to properly support incest. At some point it might evolve to completely supplant the i-patch, which would mean more work.

 

[Harsh 007]

Is there any ending to this game i mean i completed all story with all characters and tbh all scenes in gallery are present BUT there is no harem scene with the family like linda , caroline and sara discovering mc has relationship with all of them and MAIN story ending....right now every character has endbut the main story like mc gets with all member is not there so i want to ask is this the end or there is an ending if there is tell me how to get that because i have no idea.....?

 

[fillup1209]

In the years between v0.7 and v1.0 ICSTOR took the opportunity to make his own name meaningless and remove incest from MC. In addition, he also removed anything else considered an incorrect fantasy by Steam/Patreon. This resulted in a v1.0 where lots of past kinky content involving many characters was mutilated or just removed to appease the Fantasy Police.
ICSTOR also produced false expectations right here on F95, via intermediaries, suggesting the aforementioned mutilations will be restored via a patch that will "magically" pop into existence from "unknown" pirates very soon after v1.0 final releases. v1.0 final released around Nov 3rd. There was no patch.
Powerbabe proceeded to make this patch independently but there's lots to do and it gets done in their free time with no compensation so it takes however long it takes. I've been tracking the effort and I guesstimate it's about 70% done so the earliest when everything that could be restored will likely finally be restored is around March.

Wow so he completely mutilated and neutered his own game to appease the puritans. That's sad. I'm honestly not even gonna waste my Internet data to download this now. For me Milfy City ended when I completed Caroline's path back in v6. I'm assuming since he removed the the incest Caroline's path was removed or neutered as well, same with moms path I'm assuming? God id be pissed if I was one of his paying subscribers and to think two years ago I actually considered being one. I just finished Once in a Lifetime and was thinking of playing this but I think I'd rather replay Once in a Lifetime, Sisterly Lust or Parental Love. Him removing the incest kink is a complete "fuck you" to the people who subscribed to him because of that kink.

 

[NotJoe27]

I have been absent for four or five months. Can someone give me a quick update on ICTORS latest lies?