Ren'Py Abandoned Monster Slums! [v0.1.7c] [Funbags]

[Scy7he]

what I'm really sad about is that the job hunt scene for Tanya wasn't even in the update so you either have to wait for the new update to play Natalie's scene after the job hunt or use a different save for it (which personally I'm not a fan of)...Is Tanya's jealousy scene only gonna be for few dialogues and then she returns to normal and you can continue the job hunt quest with her or will that option be removed permanently and force a jealousy route for Tanya with the whole hate sex route and all?

(and also in the walkthrough can you color the new events in the new version a different color? would make it easier to know where the last update left us on)

 

[bobdillan]

I don't particularly want to spoil my plans for her so I'll just leave you with a few things to kind of piece together.

Spoiler: Lilly

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just thought I would add when I was talking of size I meant dick size, thinking horse dick

 

[Funbag]

Good game so far, the most promising game to come out in the last few months.
It's really nice to have expressions and body language during dialogue.
My only critique so far is that the sex scenes feel a bit short. A few more lines on how the characters feel or descriptions of things would be great. For example a line on how the scales of the lizard girl feel to the MC.

I also found a bug, more an exploit really. When you start an interaction at Night, you return to the room and may be able to interact with the girl again without time passing.

Finally I was slightly disappointed that the ears of the catgirls weren't used in their expressions. Having so much movement and variety of expression in a game like this is great, it just seemed like a missed opportunity.

If that night time thing is Natalie that's intended, it's a placeholder while I try to figure out a way to let the player interact with her more while keeping her night time only.
The ears is a good point, I'll keep that in mind going forward.

what I'm really sad about is that the job hunt scene for Tanya wasn't even in the update so you either have to wait for the new update to play Natalie's scene after the job hunt or use a different save for it (which personally I'm not a fan of)...Is Tanya's jealousy scene only gonna be for few dialogues and then she returns to normal and you can continue the job hunt quest with her or will that option be removed permanently and force a jealousy route for Tanya with the whole hate sex route and all?

(and also in the walkthrough can you color the new events in the new version a different color? would make it easier to know where the last update left us on)

It just skips the job hunt portion and she goes directly to her new job. It'll impact maybe 2-3 scenes before returning to normal.
I'll keep the coloring idea in mind.

Edit: Her jealousy route will be a compounding thing, if the player focuses on Natalie again before doing tanya's scenes they will get locked into it. As is the job hunt will be two scenes, and Tanya will act jealous still in the first scene at her job if you got that bonus scene.

 

[Funbag]

just thought I would add when I was talking of size I meant dick size, thinking horse dick

We'll just assume the different races have similar genital sizes to promote cross species interaction. Otherwise demons collecting pets to play together doesn't work very well. Also, she's a succubus, even if she was a virgin she should be able to take anything thrown at her fairly well considering she's a demon with a body designed for that kind of interaction. Now if Epi/Alice/Sandy/Natalie/Tanya had a run in with something like that it'd definitely not go as well for them.

 

[bobdillan]

We'll just assume the different races have similar genital sizes to promote cross species interaction. Otherwise demons collecting pets to play together doesn't work very well. Also, she's a succubus, even if she was a virgin she should be able to take anything thrown at her fairly well considering she's a demon with a body designed for that kind of interaction. Now if Epi/Alice/Sandy/Natalie/Tanya had a run in with something like that it'd definitely not go as well for them.

O.... well the dialogue seemed to imply that she wasn't and that it was very very painful.... guess it was meant as more of a pinful memory of a certain R word...

 

[Funbag]

O.... well the dialogue seemed to imply that she wasn't and that it was very very painful.... guess it was meant as more of a pinful memory of a certain R word...

Yea it was meant to emphasize the lack of consent as opposed to physical violence. I should be more specific with that one, I may take another look at the dialogue in the scene since I don't intend to actually implement that specific incident. Getting her to describe it in detail also seems like it would be rather odd and out of place.

 

[bobdillan]

Yea it was meant to emphasize the lack of consent as opposed to physical violence. I should be more specific with that one, I may take another look at the dialogue in the scene since I don't intend to actually implement that specific incident. Getting her to describe it in detail also seems like it would be rather odd and out of place.

if I may suggest, removing the dialogue about the size or more specifically when she was having a nightmare saying it was too big/ won't fit, and just have it being her saying no, or to stop instead. (wasn't thinking proper physical violence (like hiting, not to imply that act isn't itself violent), but that kind of act with a thing of that implied size would be a violent interaction either way.... well more violent than it normally would be)

 

[AlexTorch]

In the end, thats why Lilly don't wanna do anything with the mc, after the minotaur, the mc and her will have luck if they can feel anything...the gaping that she has must be enormous, and the raping was a turn off...the only good thing is that Kass give a semi-handjob for the mc...

 

[Canade]

I like the semi-dark feel of this game, but I'm also am not a fan of the possible horse penis sized rape. I get that she was raped, semi-dark story, but a possible horse sized penis would multiply the trauma times 1000.

 

[Funbag]

I'll take another look at her back ground. In my mind a minotaur has no where near the equipment you guys have given him. I was mostly going off of greek mythology where they were mostly man but with hooves, fur and a bull head. Larger men to be sure, but in greek depictions of minotaurs they had human sized packages, and several greek heroes stood eye to eye with them. Idk if centaurs is more of what you guys are thinking or if there is alternative lore for them that has a different depiction but ultimately I'll just assume a non-consentual background is too controversial.

I'll replace the dream scene with something tamer in the next update and work in a different background on an update oriented around her while trying to maintain her current motives and behavior.

 

[Canade]

I'll take another look at her back ground. In my mind a minotaur has no where near the equipment you guys have given him. I was mostly going off of greek mythology where they were mostly man but with hooves, fur and a bull head. Larger men to be sure, but in greek depictions of minotaurs they had human sized packages, and several greek heroes stood eye to eye with them. Idk if centaurs is more of what you guys are thinking or if there is alternative lore for them that has a different depiction but ultimately I'll just assume a non-consentual background is too controversial.

I'll replace the dream scene with something tamer in the next update and work in a different background on an update oriented around her while trying to maintain her current motives and behavior.

Ah I get you, hence the reason for the use of the word, possible. Thank you for clarifying about the minotaur.

 

[Funbag]

I've thrown several greek references in there so far as well. Idk if you guys have pieced together the other ones or not lol

 

[c4145317]

The game could really use some sort of notification when you've exhausted a character's current content. A lot of games use phones for this, but I don't think the MC even has one. Maybe some sort of furniture item in each girl's room?

 

[AlexTorch]

I'll take another look at her back ground. In my mind a minotaur has no where near the equipment you guys have given him. I was mostly going off of greek mythology where they were mostly man but with hooves, fur and a bull head. Larger men to be sure, but in greek depictions of minotaurs they had human sized packages, and several greek heroes stood eye to eye with them. Idk if centaurs is more of what you guys are thinking or if there is alternative lore for them that has a different depiction but ultimately I'll just assume a non-consentual background is too controversial.

I'll replace the dream scene with something tamer in the next update and work in a different background on an update oriented around her while trying to maintain her current motives and behavior.

The main stuff about minotour is about porn, in every one (and some games too) he have a bull dick, now imagine, the smallest have 6 feet and 300 pounds...the big ones is around 8 feet and weigh 400 pounds...

 

[MuffinManWantsPregnancy]

So I just got around to playing the new update. I love it! The new girls introduced are great. Out of curiosity will we get some domination content with Selena in the future? (Ideally male-dom)
I am also curious about another thing. After going through the WT I was wondering, If we have intimate/romantic relations with Anna in the future, and Alice enjoys watching, will Alice only be watching? Or can we also have the same with her as well? Because I love Alice, I love that she enjoys watching, but I also want something more with her as well XD. Thanks in advance.

 

[Funbag]

Spoiler: Selena

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Spoiler: Alice

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[Paapi]

Femdom avoidable ??

 

[AlexTorch]

Femdom avoidable ??

The post above yours.

Spoiler: Selena

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[Funbag]

Femdom avoidable ??

You can pretty much ignore any character that you don't like and they won't get forced on you, the only exceptions being Kass, and potentially Tanya (if you go after Natalie she's going to interject herself).

 

[AlexTorch]

I still think that Kass is one of hottest one of all...and one of that i'm realy intresting in her history. I realy hope in her background there is no minotaur.