VN Ren'Py Move the Chains [v0.2 Bugfix] [MissFortune]

[motseer]

I... I'm nearly speechless. A sports story where the writer knows the sport. An "out of ghetto" story where the writer knows what a ghetto looks like. A writer that can WRITE!! A graphic artist that can... graph? Wait... is that right? Hehe Damn, I thought it might be a good one. I am definitely not disappointed. I'm all in MissFortune.

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

Congrats buddy, so much work for so long, and it's fucking great

 

[Call of Booty]

I... I'm nearly speechless. A sports story where the writer knows the sport. An "out of ghetto" story where the writer knows what a ghetto looks like. A writer that can WRITE!! A graphic artist that can... graph? Wait... is that right? Hehe Damn, I thought it might be a good one. I am definitely not disappointed. I'm all in MissFortune.

Yeah,strange to see white CB,tho.

 

[Fazed]

Mostly because I couldn't figure out a better way to introduce the idea of a harem to the protagonist, who's obviously never realistically thought of having one. You'll be able to break up with her, if you want, later on.

I honestly think Yuna is cute and I love the fact that she was willing to go so far to take care of her dad. It says a lot about her, but I have never liked ear disks? Plugs?( Forgive me I'm not sure what to call them.). Very much the opposite in fact. I might be able to look past all the ink on the MC and some other characters but I'm gonna really have to try for the disks.

MC with an abrasive shell but a heart in the right place. It's interesting but I kinda wanna see him drop it more often, at least when with people that know otherwise. Sure put up a front for the on lookers that won't care to know him either way but when around friends it feels unnecessary.

That's just me though. Was a great start overall. MC was down in the shit with the worst of them and it was believable. Good job.

 

[motseer]

Yeah,strange to see white CB,tho.

17 years since Sehorn started in the NFL. Really not that surprising though. Lot's of positions without many white players. Ghetto's make tough people. Tough people do well in football. Not so many tough white's comin' outta the hood. I knew some folks outta Inglewood, CA a loooooonnnnggggg time ago. Good people, bad people. Same as everywhere else. But, tough people to the last one.

 

[judgenot93]

holy shit, rendered MILFs that actually look 30+? and one of them even has a non-LI kid. i can barely believe it, thank you dev.

also, tiny mistake: when getting the school tour from alaina, there's a choice which room to go to first. picked dance room first, but the pool scene still ends with her saying "so... dance room?".

are there gonna be extra scenes when picking a solo route?

 

[Sngo]

Very good renders, story seems it could be interesting but already starting bad with the futa bullshit, nice way to avoid 3 letter tag to still have another man fuck the LI,'s.
Dunno if sky is or isn't a LI but if not it's a wasted char to give to the mc friend specially with her already had been involved with the mc.
Sad some games that seem to have a good potential fuck themselves up or jeopardizethe amount of success they could get with some stupid ideias that only a very low nich will enjoy.
But we'll gl anyway

Edit: just noticed now, so a FMC game, then another with the 3 letter tag disguised as multiple protagonist and now this one with the futa crap, ok seems there is a pattern in dev tastes, seems not even worth waiting more updates. Sad because it seems the story could be really interesting , like the sucess the other game never had because of the disguised tag .GL and HF tough

 

[Gallant Trombe]

 

[Fazed]

Very good renders, story seems it could be interesting but already starting bad with the futa bullshit, nice way to avoid 3 letter tag to still have another man fuck the LI,'s.
Dunno if sky is or isn't a LI but if not it's a wasted char to give to the mc friend specially with her already had been involved with the mc.
Sad some games that seem to have a good potential fuck themselves up or jeopardizethe amount of success they could get with some stupid ideias that only a very low nich will enjoy.
But we'll gl anyway

Your pfp says one thing but your words say another. Why would you just not interact with this character if you feel so threatened by their very existence? The game gives you that option. Your whining is a pain to read.

 

[MrBenny]

Here is an image that shows what the trans (Ivy) choice looks like. (The player can follow or stay) Also in this image, I used the 0x52_URM tool to display what's behind the story choice. (A very useful tool)

As well, this tool can be found using the search function on this site. To install it just place it into your game folder, and then run your game. A box in the top left hand corner will appear when ever a story choice, and or a story requirement check happens. (Click show to see more info.)




Also what a drag, seeing huge ass gauges on this cute petit girl's ears...is just a sad sight to see. When the gauges are removed, it's like her earlobes are melting (droopy hanging skin)…that usually requires surgery to repair the damage caused by gauging.

Spoiler: Gauged ears... Yuck!

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[Fazed]

Also what a drag

I wasnt sure what they were called but I definitely agree. Yuna herself is great but those ear accessories are not doing her any favors.

 

[Calz]

Honestly had a blast playing, Looking forward to more content in the future.

 

[Faxe10%]

Very good renders, story seems it could be interesting but already starting bad with the futa bullshit, nice way to avoid 3 letter tag to still have another man fuck the LI,'s.
Dunno if sky is or isn't a LI but if not it's a wasted char to give to the mc friend specially with her already had been involved with the mc.
Sad some games that seem to have a good potential fuck themselves up or jeopardizethe amount of success they could get with some stupid ideias that only a very low nich will enjoy.
But we'll gl anyway

Edit: just noticed now, so a FMC game, then another with the 3 letter tag disguised as multiple protagonist and now this one with the futa crap, ok seems there is a pattern in dev tastes, seems not even worth waiting more updates. Sad because it seems the story could be really interesting , like the sucess the other game never had because of the disguised tag .GL and HF tough

Yeah, bruh another fake harem...in fact I think this harem tag is just a bait...tanks for the info...

 

[judgenot93]

Also what a drag, seeing huge ass gauges on this cute petit girl's ears...is just a sad sight to see. When the gauges are removed, it's like her earlobes are melting (droopy hanging skin)…that usually requires surgery to repair the damage caused by gauging.

theres like 15 LIs in this, just don't go for the ones you don't like. girls with body mods are so rare in these games, i appreaciate them being included here, even if it's not really my thing.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Hopefully we aren't forced to be with certain LIs (like in WVM). I like to pick and choose mah harem or remain faithful to just 1.

I don't know about this one bro I'm very monogamous and I don't like to cheat and you still have to be

a no good dirty cheating boyfriend and one of the girls I like comes along with another girl

don't get me wrong the game looks amazing but looks aren't enough to have a good story

I mean I can see the hard work the dev a put into it but I just don't know

 

[Fazed]

I don't know about this one bro I'm very monogamous and I don't like to cheat and you still have to be

a no good dirty cheating boyfriend and one of the girls I like comes along with another girl

don't get me wrong the game looks amazing but looks aren't enough to have a good story

I mean I can see the hard work the dev a put into it but I just don't know

The game gives you options to turn down each girl. What do you mean?
Well except for yuna at the moment because she was with the MC before the story started but has distanced herself.

 

[Bmagada]

holy shit, rendered MILFs that actually look 30+? and one of them even has a non-LI kid. i can barely believe it, thank you dev.

I was super surprised the teacher was built like an attractive early late 20s, early 30s aged woman instead of either way too young looking or basically like a thick ass milf.

Side note the pool route gives you some insight into the coaches daughter, probably for later romancing.

 

[Xeron_Xr]

Great First Release Dev Kudos To All Of Them

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

The game gives you options to turn down each girl. What do you mean?
Well except for yuna at the moment because she was with the MC before the story started but has distanced herself.

I'll have to go back and check brother but I believe one of the girl you can't be in a relationship with without being also in a relationship with her best friend

I will have to download it and check to make sure but I believe you start the game with a girlfriend

I will have to play it myself to make sure but I believe it makes you a cheet brother

 

[EchoFoxtrot]

I'll have to go back and check brother but I believe one of the girl you can't be in a relationship with without being also in a relationship with her best friend

I will have to download it and check to make sure but I believe you start the game with a girlfriend

I will have to play it myself to make sure but I believe it makes you a cheet brother

You don't start with a girlfriend, Eisley is more of a fuck buddy.

True some semblance of a relationship is rekindled with Yuna but it hardly counts as an exclusive relationship