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Who's your favorite girl so far?

  • Aine

  • Gwen

  • Emma

  • Sky

  • Lily

  • Freya

  • Klara

  • Naomi

  • Moon


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Ka1tzer

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Jan 12, 2023
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If you dislike incest that much then set the relations correctly and don't romance the family members. You usually can't haver your cake and eat it too with this stuff.
My problem was that the story itself makes it so that even by setting the relations differently, the story itself makes it so that anything other than incest doesn't make any sense, and it could all be easily be remedied by changing relatively little in the wording of some lines of some characters in specific scenes, so long as a proper relation is established for Klara to be something ambiguous instead of certain.

Then people that want her as mother will be happy, but people that want her as aunt, step-mother, adoptive mother, legal guardian or whatever else will be happy too. All that's needed is to not confirm beyond any doubt the pregnancy and the relation with Jovian.

Everything lined up really well with the relation for her set as aunt (or guardian) until the Hera scene that mentions Klara's pregnant with the MC with Jovian being the father.

Sky is much less of an issue, as she mainly (at least so far in the story) only needs to be somewhat consistent with Klara's relationship to the MC and needs to be in a "frowned upon" position as the MC's lover (cousin, step-sister, and adoptive sister could work just as well as being the actual sister, for example).

I get that there are many times that the whole "have your cake and eat it too" is impossible to achieve, but it is not the case in this game. This game presents a perfectly possible way to implement a way to please both people that are into incest as well as those who are not by making some very small changes.

That's on account that before that Hera scene, the story up to that moment was very well written to the point that several different types of relation settings worked. But after that scene, only one makes sense.
 

Mommysbuttslut

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Feb 19, 2021
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Klara to be something ambiguous instead of certain.
Which cheapens the incest plot. Her being MC's mother absolutely should not be ambiguous, your mother isn't an ambiguous person and it cheapens their relationship for her to be written as such.
 

Ka1tzer

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Jan 12, 2023
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Which cheapens the incest plot. Her being MC's mother absolutely should not be ambiguous, your mother isn't an ambiguous person and it cheapens their relationship for her to be written as such.
It doesn't because she's never really shown as a typical mother, as for the better part of the story she maintains a distance (both physical and emotional) from both the MC and Sky. That is shown (as opposed to "told") through her dialog and actions (which is a mark of good writing). Making the very few lines that set their relations in stone ambiguous would not cheapen any kind of plot in any way. Just set Klara as mother and done, nothing in the player's perception of the characters within the story would change.

Besides, the narrative itself visually flirts with the idea of them not being blood-related. Compare how Aine, Freya and Hera look like, and then compare the visuals of Klara, Sky and the MC. In fact, the only character that looks to be blood-related to Klara is Kana.

In the end, the main issue was that the player is given a choice at the beginning. That choice translates into a limited power of the narrative. But that power is then taken away completely on account of the Hera scene. That is what actually cheapens a plot. In fact, it cheapens every single plot that isn't straight up blood-related incest.

Assuming incest was always the intended canon, then it would've been much cleaner to simply not give a player a choice at all in that case. I wouldn't have had any issue with it if that was so. But because my preferred choice created plot-holes, it then became a problem. So the keyword boils down to choice and power, and having the first be irrelevant while taking back the second after it was given at the beginning.

Anyhow, that's my feedback for the game on the topic. I hope the devs see the posts and take them into consideration.
 
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Mommysbuttslut

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Assuming incest was always the intended canon, then it would've been much cleaner to simply not give a player a choice at all in that case. I wouldn't have had any issue with it if that was so. But because my preferred choice created plot-holes, it then became a problem. So the keyword boils down to choice and power, and having the first be irrelevant while taking back the second after it was given at the beginning.
Because the choice is never a choice, particularly in the case of a fill in the blank relation like this one. It's the illusion of choice to get around Patreon's draconian rules.
In fact, the only character that looks to be blood-related to Klara is Kana.
Red hair is a recessive trait. Unless Jovian had red hair the absolute highest possibility of either of Klara's children having it would be 50%, assuming Jovian even had a single red hair gene to pass on. Besides that it's honey select, everyone looks like they could be related.
nothing in the player's perception of the characters within the story would change.
If it was changed so that nothing in the player's perception would change with her being the mother, then that cheapens their relation. You're completely ignoring the dynamics that make incest alluring in your analysis by prioritizing your dislike of the dynamic over the taboo dynamic from their blood relation, which needs to be relevant within the script to be meaningful. Just calling some random woman the MC hasn't seen in years mother without actually treating her like one and acknowledging the taboo nature of their relationship cheapens any incest plot. Your perception is being clouded by your dislike of incest, your change would reduce the incest down to some pointless piece of dialogue and effectively eliminate any narrative taboo of sleeping with your own mother beyond simply calling her mom.
 

greasyshitter

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Overview:
You will play as Kei (name can be changed), a young man who has experienced bullying from the girl
he confessed to during high school.
After fighting your way through heaven and hell just to change your physical appearance,
you swore to get your revenge one day on her.
However, upon reaching adulthood, you realized that taking revenge is a fool's game and decided to simply
move on with your life.
One day, your landlady put the other rooms in your house for rent.
Without your knowledge, that girl alongside her friends, are the ones moving in.
However, you will soon discover something that will change your life forever.
While diving down into each character's heart-warming stories,
you'll experience growth more than you ever thought you would.

THIS IS NOT A REVENGE GAME. IF YOU'RE LOOKING FOR REVENGE, THIS GAME IS NOT FOR YOU.

Thread Updated: 2023-06-16
Release Date: 2023-06-15
Developer: NiiChan - - - - - -
Censored: No
Version: Ch1 Ep2 Fix 1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
Other Games: Sicae
Genre:
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This is NOT a remake, the first 7 episodes are Prologue Chapters.

DOWNLOAD
Win/Linux: GDRIVE - MEGA - - PIXELDRAIN
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Update Only (Experimental [Emma's Solo Ending to Ch1 - Ep2]
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Extra: FAN SIG - FAN SIG 2 - Official Walkthrough Mod - Character details/timeline (spoilers) - Walkthrough - Walkthrough-Gallery Mod* - Portuguese-Brazilian translation*

*This unofficial port/version is not released by developer, download at your own risk.


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The kitchen needs some cupboards, I'm ngl lol
I was wondering why it looked so wrong
 

Uthuriel

Conversation Conqueror
Jan 26, 2021
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Hmm...all the hours of play...(sigh) Well I'm not sure if the walk through mod gimped my game, but there are a lot of scenes that I don't get to see after following it until the end of the latest update. I thought this is a harem story, and using the mod would make it easier to get all the scenes available, but it seems that is not the case for me. Fuck!


Sky 3/6 (one is the swim suite choice)
Lily 0/0
Aine 1/2
Emma 0/3
Gwen 2/5
Klara 0/1
Freya 2/2
Naomi 0/0
Moon 1/2

The above list is what my play through has unlocked within the scene section, while using the walk through mod. And I found it odd with some of the girls had no intimacy with them at all. But I played through, and while using the 0x52_URM tool I noticed I was seeing failed requirement checks like in this image.

Now I'm not sure if this was caused by the wt mod, but so many hours of play with it seems with bad results, as I was playing to build a harem path. :unsure:


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I used the WT mod and it works perfectly... I'm pretty sure you fucked up somewhere...
 

ChadFast

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Jul 19, 2021
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Since I've not played this one I guess I'm one of the newbies mentioned, but after reading this I'm very interested in trying it out. While lewd scenes are great, I really get into stories and characters. Your review sounds like it's right up my alley so thank you for that.

Somewhat copy pasting my review, so some newbies could read this to get hooked into the game? I dunno. anyways

I started this game cuz the cover looked good and the name reminded me of a pornwha i read before... i came for quick faps but the story and their characters mesmerized me so well that i cant stop playing this game and i cried rivers during certain moments...
also renders are done so well, characters are written so good that i dont have any chars im fed up with so far and the choice of music is just.. golden.. "Trying to be ok" hit me so hard during Emmas birthday... the moment it started after she returns home... fk...

i already replayed this gem of a game twice, not scenes several more times.. its just that good. characters, story, humor, renders, design, music, interaction with the story.. its just great and im in love with this. im really glad i found this.
/QUOTE]
 
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Since I've not played this one I guess I'm one of the newbies mentioned, but after reading this I'm very interested in trying it out. While lewd scenes are great, I really get into stories and characters. Your review sounds like it's right up my alley so thank you for that.
Kinda piggybacking off of the quote but if you read my recent review on game, it's very similar experience. I gave up on the game first way around because I thought it was just going to be run of the mill HS game with goal of just getting to lewds. But after reading the reviews again, I went through again and oh boy did it hit hard. Without spoiling much, DONT give up until after ep 5 (something about Emma or angel episode) which gives background on Emma and MC. The plot just goes up from there and if you play Emma ending it's just so satisfying. I definitely got teary-eyed not just with this ending but if you pursue other characters like Sky, Gwen, or Aine they also have very touching relationship with MC which we get to witness. The developer did an awesome job with storytelling and really letting us relive what the MC went through in past with the characters. Hope you enjoy it
 

Jeycii_

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Since I've not played this one I guess I'm one of the newbies mentioned, but after reading this I'm very interested in trying it out. While lewd scenes are great, I really get into stories and characters. Your review sounds like it's right up my alley so thank you for that.
im really happy that my review could contribute to making a potentional player try it out. the experience was really amazing, you prolly wont regret it!
 

d0tc0m

Newbie
Jun 15, 2021
29
13
Thank you so much for this game
usualy I use Texttractor & Deepl to translate. but it don't work for me on this game
someone was find a solution to translate in real time the text?
I can read and understand the story but as you see my english is a bit crapy and I don't want to make effort when I'm playing
 

PattersonTM

New Member
Nov 4, 2022
4
19
I gotta say, I really appreciate the dev's humor. There were so many times I found myself laughing out of nowhere, especially Shu, that poor dude, but he just tickles my funny bone. The later scenes with Klara as well, just outstanding. Can't wait for the rest of this one!
 
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