Hello
It's not a bad game and with some decent art I have fun and really liked it until I got the claw like Ceph says before.
But the game can be way more better with a little more work so i give you what i think about it don't take it bad it's only for you help to improve you'r game.
1) When i save the merchant (green haired girl) : She warp me to home... i was full life... and i make again all the way to the entrance of the mine. At least let me choose if i whant to return home or not.
I feel it is for add some easy playing time, i guess it's ok since the game is not to long and the way is easy. But also a little frustating.
2) When i save the first gobelina i was warped (again) to the gobelin village.
Village that i have never seen before. Moreover i don't understand what they say and what happened since i'm not english.
=> I suggest you to close the way to save the gobelina and make the player find the village first.
Like this, the player will traveling 2 time in this big room, one for climbing and find the village and one for falling to go to save the gobelina. That will add a litlle playing time to you'r game. You can also add a bed in the village for save your game.
Right now, The big room before the village is totaly useless, i don't have climb this room and i don't have come back for collecting stone since i can simply buy it.
=> By the way, i suggest you to remove stone and wood from the shop.
3) Warp again to the home when i save the halfling, maybe a boss just before saving her will be good.
Only for again go all the way to the gobelin village... that's a good way to add somme free playing time... again.
4) The screen to save the cow-woman is difficult to compare to the rest of the game.
5) Where is the lizard village ? Just one NPC and that's all ? I was waiting for swamp / water screen, and another village like the gobelin village, and one or two side quest to save some little lizards women... and maybe add a boss ? At this point i have the felling the game was rushed to end it.
5) I can't use the milking machine on myself... nooo !
6) The way to for going to the dryad is the most trash i have see in the game, and when i finaly did it i obtain the bad ending... just a black screen with a little text. My game will stop here for now.