VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Little Katelyn [Ch. 3] [Ellaraia]

[Sural Argonus]

I have no problem with Mom, other than the fact it seems like she is taking advantage of an exchange student.

HOWEVER...because I know the rules of the IESUSA (pretty sure other countries have similar rules), I have less issue with Mom punishing Katelyn.

• Obey the disciplinary rules of the Host Family and school. Be sure to keep communication open
• Drinking of alcoholic beverages or using illegal drugs is strictly prohibited.
• Driving of automobiles (except in the case of Drivers Education) or other motorized vehicles is prohibited. Contact your ISE Area Representative or the NY office for clarification.
• Students are expected to have a minimum of $300 personal spending money per month for the duration of the program.
• Travel (including return to the student’s home country) is prohibited during the program. Student’s may only travel with their Host Family, school, church, your ISE Area Representative, or approved ISE Trips. PRE-APPROVAL FROM THE NEW YORK OFFICE IS MANDATORY. All Area Representatives must work through his/her regional supervisor to obtain proper authorization.
• Visits from the natural family are strongly discouraged and must have prior approval from the ISE New York Office.
• Students must return home within 5 days of the completion of school.
• Students must maintain a “C” average in his/her classes.
• The student is not allowed to make “life changing” while on the ISE program. This would include but not be limited to: marriage, pregnancy, body piercing, tattoos, etc.
• Students are required to participate in 5 hours of community service during their program.

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[Ellaraia]

I kinda miss the brother/sister element. Is there some way to have an option for her call you brother like in the old game? Maybe she watches hentai videos and is really into that fetish.

There will be a mod. I'm just editing the scipt again first, then I can complete the mod. I'll post it on here when it's done.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

After playing chapter 2 I think the only non crappy character is Katelyn. Kind of hoping now she finds a whole new family to stay with

I felt bad for the MC after chapter 1 but he just seems like a micro penis beta douchebag now

Great renders but the rest is just meh...

Yeah there's nothing hotter than someone constantly begging for pussy from a clearly confused/lesbian chick. They were dropping mad hints and of course the mc is oblivious lol. She probably scared to come out and just using him as a reverse beard so she can clam dive in peace.

 

[Ellaraia]

So current thoughts on the game ch2, Dads a shit character, don't need him to be a part of the story anymore if that's what he's like, brings literally nothing to the story.
Mom's a controlling bitch, anyone would be a bitch with a husband like that I guess. Everybody masturbates big fucking deal don't intrude on people's private time, that's a fucking dick move.
speaking of dicks, MC's dick is too small, doesn't need to be super HUGE but about 4 inches isn't really good.Makes for a good cuck though, but I thought this wasnt that type of game.
Girlfriend still sucks, I really hope there is something there, it's way too shallow at the moment.

Thanks for the feedback. I've not been saying this enough, but I do appreciate all the feedback.

The Father isn't a part of the story. He's a dick for that reason, so you just stay away from him.

The mother isn't a big part of the story either. However, people are being too harsh on here, imo. There are lots of women far worse than here irl when it comes to views on things like masturbation.

His dick isn't too small. I don't know why people want large dicks in every game. It's hard to tell in DAZ how large his dick is, but assuming Lucy's hand is 3 inches wide, MC's dick is almost 6 inches. 6 inches is about top 10-15%. I don't know why everyone's dick in any online porn has to be in the top 1%.
It's not that type of game.
I need to improve people's opinion of Lucy.

 

[Ellaraia]

After playing chapter 2 I think the only non crappy character is Katelyn. Kind of hoping now she finds a whole new family to stay with

I felt bad for the MC after chapter 1 but he just seems like a micro penis beta douchebag now

Great renders but the rest is just meh...

Micro-penis???

His dick is almost 6 inches. That's literally top 10-15%. I don't know why on the internet, 7-8 inches is average. This is something I really hate about reddit.

 

[Ellaraia]

Yeah there's nothing hotter than someone constantly begging for pussy from a clearly confused/lesbian chick. They were dropping mad hints and of course the mc is oblivious lol. She probably scared to come out and just using him as a reverse beard so she can clam dive in peace.

"Love is blinding." or whatever the quote is.

 

[Ellaraia]

I have no problem with Mom, other than the fact it seems like she is taking advantage of an exchange student.

HOWEVER...because I know the rules of the IESUSA (pretty sure other countries have similar rules), I have less issue with Mom punishing Katelyn.



This is from the

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website, by the way.

No alcohol?
No tattoos? What if you already have fifteen tattoos, can you get a sixteenth? In that situation, it would be larger change to not get some new ones.
Community service? I don't really understand that one. Katelyn does the laundry now, that'll have to do.

 

[Ellaraia]

Finally got around to playing this. I see now why people wanted to dump the "gf". She rubs me all kind of wrong lol.
Also the lack of choices and the beta male mc means this needs a kinetic tag.

When I was writing the script, I found myself adding lots of choices, but they were meaningless. It's something games like DMD/Melody do a lot. They make you click a button for no reason. I suppose it helps you fell involved, but for me, it's just a needless distraction. If I give you a choice to make, it should make a big change in either the short or long term story. Choosing where to cum is the most obvious short-term choice to have. Things like dumping Lucy are the long-term choices you'll have to make.

MC gets into some stuff (not sex!) with Jessica, and the choices there are more your approach to the events that are happening. It's more of a shallow choice, but it's kinda required.

 

[Sural Argonus]

No alcohol?
No tattoos? What if you already have fifteen tattoos, can you get a sixteenth? In that situation, it would be larger change to not get some new ones.
Community service? I don't really understand that one. Katelyn does the laundry now, that'll have to do.

I made friends with some FES back in high school. They were REALLY restricted...even 25 years ago.

If they were caught drinking, fornicating or anything else...They pretty much get immediately shipped back home. If the offense is bad enough, they will be banned from ever applying to the IES program.


I would imagine if the student already had tats...they would probably be ok, unless they got new tats while abroad. HOwever in the US, I think most states, you must be over 18 to get one. Canada is 18 as well, just for reference.

The community service bit is new to me tho. I am pretty sure that info is given to the FES either prior to, or on arrival by their rep.

 

[Ellaraia]

I made friends with some FES back in high school. They were REALLY restricted...even 25 years ago.

If they were caught drinking, fornicating or anything else...They pretty much get immediately shipped back home. If the offense is bad enough, they will be banned from ever applying to the IES program.


I would imagine if the student already had tats...they would probably be ok, unless they got new tats while abroad.

The community service bit is new to me tho. I am pretty sure that info is given to the FES either prior to, or on arrival by their rep.

Community service is like work but for chavs. I don't see a nice, cute girl like Katelyn having to do that. It's literally a punishment. Why does being a FES require a punishment???

 

[Sural Argonus]

By the way, I am bored...so looking up shit passes the time.

If it is helpful...great. Otherwise...just ignore it. hehe

Tho I think a bit of reality is good in a project.

 

[Sural Argonus]

Actually...I just got curious...Katelyn is from Canada, right?

That would be the YES Canada program.

The YES Canada program doesn't list their rules on the site, at least I can't find them. They are probably similar to IESUSA, I would bet.

 

[Ellaraia]

Actually...I just got curious...Katelyn is from Canada, right?

That would be the YES Canada program.

The YES Canada program doesn't list their rules on the site, at least I can't find them. They are probably similar to IESUSA, I would bet.

I can't say I went so deep as to look up the rules. She won't be getting any tattoos though, so I think she's fine.
I grew up in a small town. I think most FES' stay in a large city, so I have no personal experience with any. It's one of those things you know about, but don't know why and don't know any real details.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

When I was writing the script, I found myself adding lots of choices, but they were meaningless. It's something games like DMD/Melody do a lot. They make you click a button for no reason. I suppose it helps you fell involved, but for me, it's just a needless distraction. If I give you a choice to make, it should make a big change in either the short or long term story. Choosing where to cum is the most obvious short-term choice to have. Things like dumping Lucy are the long-term choices you'll have to make.

MC gets into some stuff (not sex!) with Jessica, and the choices there are more your approach to the events that are happening. It's more of a shallow choice, but it's kinda required.

Fair enough. Personally, I love Lucy's model far too much to dump her. But eventually she's gonna have to learn who the boss is and I hope the mc mans up enough to put her in her place. That facial scene was cute but that's not enough to break her lol.
Basically what I'm saying is nice game.

 

[ltpika]

Micro-penis???

His dick is almost 6 inches. That's literally top 10-15%. I don't know why on the internet, 7-8 inches is average. This is something I really hate about reddit.

It might be a practical concern, the bigger cocks are easier to make out if you're playing on a phone or a small window. Maybe more girth might help if you don't want to increase length.

 

[Ellaraia]

Fair enough. Personally, I love Lucy's model far too much to dump her. But eventually she's gonna have to learn who the boss is and I hope the mc mans up enough to put her in her place. That facial scene was cute but that's not enough to break her lol.
Basically what I'm saying is nice game.

Thanks. I know things I need to improve on and am going to aim to do that over the next month with a few new additions and changes.

 

[Ellaraia]

It might be a practical concern, the bigger cocks are easier to make out if you're playing on a phone or a small window. Maybe more girth might help if you don't want to increase length.

While I'd understand that, I doubt it's the case. Also, the phone port is nothing to me and creating for a phone is just annoying and I think detracts from the end product's overall quality.

MC wouldn't like reading through this forum. The internet isn't a place to make you feel secure about the size of your dick unless you're over 8 inches. Below 7 and you worry you're small. 7-8 and you go from thinking you're top 1% (which is reality), to thinking you're just normal. I was never someone to 'play around' in my youth, preferred a single loving relationship to trying all the buffet, but I can imagine that young women have a very inflated view on penis sizes. Even an average man probably seems small until you've had like a dozen dicks.

 

[riktor]

and creating for a phone is just annoying and I think detracts from the end product's overall quality.

Couldn't agree more, so many websites and such are just shit now because they are designed for mobile use primarily. Leaving those of us using actual computers with a site that looks awful and has almost no features.

 

[Sural Argonus]

I can't say I went so deep as to look up the rules. She won't be getting any tattoos though, so I think she's fine.
I grew up in a small town. I think most FES' stay in a large city, so I have no personal experience with any. It's one of those things you know about, but don't know why and don't know any real details.

You aren't alone, but be aware...people WILL question certain things if they don't follow the rules. Some people say it is "immersion breaking"

I have a few things coming in my project that I wanted to avoid things like that. Also a project that I want to eventually start working on, I want certain things to be as close to reality as i can get. I also love learning...so I enjoy learning new things.

 

[Ellaraia]

Couldn't agree more, so many websites and such are just shit now because they are designed for mobile use primarily. Leaving those of us using actual computers with a site that looks awful and has almost no features.

Here's some life advice, don't move to China. The phone is the computer, most people don't even have a computer, just a phone and an ipad.

Here's an examples of how deep it goes.
QQ, which is basically China's facebook, is so phone-oriented that you can't even create an account on your PC. I don't know what they do if they lose their phone. Whereas here every account you have is connected to an email address, there it's your phone number. Losing your phone must be like losing the password to your email address without any way to retrieve it.

Also, the whole 'Diablo debacle' recently, that was 100% to sell to China, and it'll make Blizzard a fuck ton. $$$$$$$$$$$