VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Little Katelyn [Ch. 3] [Ellaraia]

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TheKryptonian

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@Ellaraia I was just messing around about the penis size of the MC, its actually more realistic that every MC in these games isn't hung like an actual horse. Set aside the fact a lot of women actually prefer a decent/average size penis as extra large penises actually cause a lot of pain.

Criticism aside I do like your work and appreciate you taking feedback good or bad. Keep it up and I am sure this game will be great (y)
 

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@Ellaraia I was just messing around about the penis size of the MC, its actually more realistic that every MC in these games isn't hung like an actual horse. Set aside the fact a lot of women actually prefer a decent/average size penis as extra large penises actually cause a lot of pain.

Criticism aside I do like your work and appreciate you taking feedback good or bad. Keep it up and I am sure this game will be great (y)
Thanks. 5.5-7 inches is preference, I think. Above average, but not so large it's painful. I'm not a woman though, I just got very insecure a few years ago and read a lot of reddit. You just have to scroll passed all the 2I'm pretty sure 6-7 inches is small, i'm 85 inches."
 

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Watching porn I used to think large dicks was something to shoot for in a mate until I quickly learned how "small" it is down there and getting stabbed in your kidneys is not enjoyable at all. Been with my hubby for a while now and even after having a baby it still hurts sometimes. I don't know about most women but stretching full feeling feels better anyway.
Girth > length.:sneaky:
 

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I havn't played that game, but the base model is the same one used in Big Brother. It's one of the best models out there.

Also, my lighting is better. :)
Ah, so my thinking that she looked remarkably like Lisa was right on target. It is Lisa! :love: Reincarnated. I love that model. It's incredibly cute.
 
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Watching porn I used to think large dicks was something to shoot for in a mate until I quickly learned how "small" it is down there and getting stabbed in your kidneys is not enjoyable at all. Been with my hubby for a while now and even after having a baby it still hurts sometimes. I don't know about most women but stretching full feeling feels better anyway.
Girth > length.:sneaky:
Some women get off on it...

Ex of mine was fairly shallow...and it would drive her to the brink of insanity. It was...interesting.

Too bad she was also batshit crazy...but that is a story for another day.
 

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Actually, doesn't have to be cancer.

There's "Early Female Pattern Baldness"


Female pattern baldness is largely thought to occur due to genetics. However, it may also develop due to an underlying condition that affects the production of the hormone androgen.

Androgen is a hormone that plays a role in pattern baldness. Tumors of the pituitary gland or ovary, which secrete androgen, may also lead to hair loss.

Other causes of hair loss in women include:

  • Autoimmune disease: is a rare autoimmune disorder that causes the immune system to attack the hair follicles leading to hair loss.
  • Medication: Certain medications, such as those that are used to treat , can cause hair loss as a side effect. However, hair usually regrows once a person has stopped taking the medication.
  • Illness: Hair loss can develop after a significant illness, such as a severe infection, high , or surgery.
  • Traction alopecia: This is hair loss that occurs when a person frequently wears hairstyles that pull the hair too tightly.
It could be that her mother is a cue-ball too.

However...If you went that route...Either do the genetics, or Traction Alopecia. Either way it would be a great reason for her to be ashamed.
You can have alopecia for other reasons, including stress. I did when I was in my twenties. Now my hair loss is just male pattern baldness. I blame my mother for that.
 

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You can have alopecia for other reasons, including stress. I did when I was in my twenties. Now my hair loss is just male pattern baldness. I blame my mother for that.
I don't know who to blame!!! I'm the baldest person in my family, despite my age. :( My Father is thinning, but he's 50+ and it's an age thing. All my cousins on my mother's side are fine, and they're all older than me.
 

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There may be a mod coming so Katelyn isn't Canadian, if you know what I mean.
I sure hope so. The scene where mom ("Mum") refers to whatever country the game takes place in as having a different culture than Canada was immersion-breaking for me. Canada is closer to England, historically, than the U.S., but being right next to the U.S. it shares most of the same culture as the U.S., if the game takes place in the U.S. And if the game takes place in the U.K. (which is my guess, as "Mum" is an English term, not an American one), Canada is still very similar culturally.

The choice for Kat's home would be much better if it were Aussie or Kiwi. Both native English-speaking but culturally distinct from the U.S. or U.K. Ireland is an even better choice. She could also be from damn near any Commonwealth country, or even India. Any ex-British colony where English is either the primary or second language. Hell, she could also be from South Africa. Plenty of white folk there who speak English. Or Israel.
 

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I don't know who to blame!!! I'm the baldest person in my family, despite my age. :( My Father is thinning, but he's 50+ and it's an age thing. All my cousins on my mother's side are fine, and they're all older than me.
All joking aside, male-pattern baldness is a heritable condition, and it can come from either side. See .
 
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I sure hope so. The scene where mom ("Mum") refers to whatever country the game takes place in as having a different culture than Canada was immersion-breaking for me. Canada is closer to England, historically, than the U.S., but being right next to the U.S. it shares most of the same culture as the U.S., if the game takes place in the U.S. And if the game takes place in the U.K. (which is my guess, as "Mum" is an English term, not an American one), Canada is still very similar culturally.

The choice for Kat's home would be much better if it were Aussie or Kiwi. Both native English-speaking but culturally distinct from the U.S. or U.K. Ireland is an even better choice. She could also be from damn near any Commonwealth country, or even India. Any ex-British colony where English is either the primary or second language. Hell, she could also be from South Africa. Plenty of white folk there who speak English. Or Israel.
I'm going to add an option in the settings to change her nationality, just for you.

Edit: UK
 

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Your "Chav" comment earlier is what made me think that.

I like Brits.
I wish I did. There are lots of very interesting people here, and some great accents. I once had a huge crush on a teacher of mine because of her accent. She was pretty too. I hate 'Lad' culture though. Drinking and one-night stands are all everyone thinks about here. As someone who partakes in neither, I don't really fit in. :(
 

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I wish I did. There are lots of very interesting people here, and some great accents. I once had a huge crush on a teacher of mine because of her accent. She was pretty too. I hate 'Lad' culture though. Drinking and one-night stands are all everyone thinks about here. As someone who partakes in neither, I don't really fit in. :(
Happens anywhere. 3 of my best online friends are Brits. 2 are Londoners and the 3rd lives in Hull. All are pretty cool guys. Known them for about 17 years now. One works for the BBC and the other travels due to his job. All 3 are pretty stable and aren't millenial douchebags.
 
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Happens anywhere. 3 of my best online friends are Brits. 2 are Londoners and the 3rd lives in Hull. All are pretty cool guys. Known them for about 17 years now. One works for the BBC and the other travels due to his job. All 3 are pretty stable and aren't millenial douchebags.
Everyone in their early-mid 20s sucks.
 
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