VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Model Daughter Remastered [v0.05] [WickedGames]

[WickedGames]

Here's my next Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

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Thanks mate

 

[WickedGames]

It says dad and daughter movie night. this isnt using any script and patreon or someone catches it and he could get his account banned.

Thanks mate you are right 100% Allso i would try to be active on discord from now on.

 

[WickedGames]

It's called sharing an opinion, when you grow up, you will understand.

It's subjective and how we perceive the world is in an eye of beholder. But imo i never saw her as a persone that young to be creepy

 

[WickedGames]

Well the model is much better. Renders can be iffy. I will wait for the next update to comment on the story.
You need a copy reader though as some sentences do not make sense.
But one thing; keep to YOUR story. Ignore all those with comments on what to do. Good luck.

Thanks mate i will try to stay true to my story and renders will get better i promise.

 

[WickedGames]

If you are in need of a copy-editor, I would love to help you out with that.

I agree, I will try to get better, but if anyone want to help me with this it would be appreciated.

 

[WickedGames]

I gotta say the new model for her looks amazing, she's absolutely gorgeous. Even though i already liked the original model, the new one takes the win in my book, well done!

Thank you so much

 

[WickedGames]

I like the new renders more. Even though the original design was more unique but probably because of the limitations of the render engine some of the shots looked a bit creepy.

The new renders look good, only sometimes too grainy. I don't know if a denoiser could help or just have to give more time for the engine for the renders.

It will get better, thanks for nice words

 

[WickedGames]

Remaster is good ... really GOOD !!

But...
Try not do it again !!!

No remasters ever again, the story must continue.

 

[WickedGames]

Looks good wish good luck and hope to see original sexual tags

Thanks mate

 

[KnuckleDragger79]

I agree, I will try to get better, but if anyone want to help me with this it would be appreciated.

If you would like, private message me on here so I can give you my email address. You can send me the translated script for the game and I will rework it with the proper spelling, grammar and context, then I will send it back to you.

 

[bamachine]

Looks good, also like the idea of the dev and mystery man popping in occasionally with commentary. Just need to fix the spelling/grammar/contextual errors which are in nearly every single sentence.

 

[Mia Fan]

in my opinion the remastering was bad.
the model is one that has in many other games.
the old model was beautiful and unique.
unfortunately it didn't look good.
the old version was much better.

 

[dirtyoldmanlol]

If you would like, private message me on here so I can give you my email address. You can send me the translated script for the game and I will rework it with the proper spelling, grammar and context, then I will send it back to you.

A hero rises

 

[WickedGames]

in my opinion the remastering was bad.
the model is one that has in many other games.
the old model was beautiful and unique.
unfortunately it didn't look good.
the old version was much better.

What other game have same model ?

 

[SeveredRealms]

What other game have same model ?

Ignore him he is just complaining to complain. If he is so good at judging he should actually do the work and make his own game.

 

[lordfridge9]

Good F & D content is always welcomed

 

[Ooh]

If you would like, private message me on here so I can give you my email address. You can send me the translated script for the game and I will rework it with the proper spelling, grammar and context, then I will send it back to you.

That has to be the best profile pic Ive seen...Who is that?

 

[KnuckleDragger79]

That has to be the best profile pic Ive seen...Who is that?

Her name is Yumiko from Holiday Island.

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

She was much better in the old version.
seemed to be a unique and original character
the current one looks like a copy of another game

Hi rafa30,

I agree…

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[Master of Puppets]

Hi rafa30,

I agree…

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The one you have on the left there is the new one. The one you have on the right was an early iteration of her. The original daughter from before the change looked like this: