Since there are lots of characters it's hard to improve all of them but I'm giving credit to
Killer, he is doing very well. Too bad there is no further scenes after threesome with Fiona and Mary.
Okay, thank you. Thought I might've fucked up.
Yeah, not hating on the Dev by any means, he's doing amazing work considering the amount of characters there are. Just felt as though a lot of momentum was lost. Pretty much fully turned the tables on her (
hell, we stole the woman's anal virginity) then yeah.. nothing. I'd understand if she was just another side character, but she's been a pretty prominent figure in the story since she was introduced, and especially in these last 2 chapters and there were so many times a scene could've been placed. I don't think it's easy to make these scenes whatsoever, but yeah, just a bit of personal bias lol.
Anyways, if you're reading this keep up the great work Dev