VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Ordinary Extraordinary Life [Ch.12] [Cheepshot]

[hobobobb]

Whatever technicality they want to name it, it's a big *nope* for me.
I'm out.
Good Luck Dev.

Also Probably a good idea to Tag game properly.

 

[Cthulhu4Prez2020]

Ok...I finally have to say something on this game. Now that the patch is finished, I finally got around to starting the update, and had to take a pause. Now I'm not a big fan of NTR...but don't care either way. If the game is NTR heavy, I just don't even bother starting it. If something crops up but it's integral to the story in some way, I just carry on. Don't even care one way or the other about rape (it's pixelated chars...no-one is ACTUALLY hurt...rape IRL is WRONG and the mf who does it, man or woman, should have their genitals mutilated before going to jail). The problem I have is that everyone and their brother is worried about Karen, the MC thinks of a possible solution, and WAITS AND GOES TO FUCKING SLEEP CUZ HE HAS A HEADACHE?????? Are you serious?? For someone who supposedly loves her and would do anything for her, that is some seriously piss poor writing. He (theoretically) have immediately been on the phone to both the guys sister to find out the address and the cops to light a fire under their asses and get them over there. WTF?

 

[Avaron1974]

Ok...I finally have to say something on this game. Now that the patch is finished, I finally got around to starting the update, and had to take a pause. Now I'm not a big fan of NTR...but don't care either way. If the game is NTR heavy, I just don't even bother starting it. If something crops up but it's integral to the story in some way, I just carry on. Don't even care one way or the other about rape (it's pixelated chars...no-one is ACTUALLY hurt...rape IRL is WRONG and the mf who does it, man or woman, should have their genitals mutilated before going to jail). The problem I have is that everyone and their brother is worried about Karen, the MC thinks of a possible solution, and WAITS AND GOES TO FUCKING SLEEP CUZ HE HAS A HEADACHE?????? Are you serious?? For someone who supposedly loves her and would do anything for her, that is some seriously piss poor writing. He (theoretically) have immediately been on the phone to both the guys sister to find out the address and the cops to light a fire under their asses and get them over there. WTF?

That was my problem.

I can take rape if it moves the story or at least the rapist gets dealt with, which does happen so all good.

My problem was the lack of agency on the MC's part, and he does it twice which has rubbed me the wrong way considering I really like this.

Spoiler for this update, if you haven't played it don't click.

So, Demi, the mother figure is the one to get taken this update and sure i'm guessing it will move her story on to remember who she is.

My problem is how it happened.

MC sense something wrong, so much so that he has his sister and Cleo sleep elsewhere so nothing happens to them. He does that so he can investigate what is wrong without having to worry.

Instead of investigating he stays to fuck Cleo, which he has to do because the other option leads to a bad end, during which time Demi is taken and Jen blames herself.

What she should have done is blame him because for the second time he cares more about fucking than protecting the people he claims to love.

As much as I have loved this game it's starting to seem like the MC is just a horny boy playing at being a man and the people close to him are constantly suffering because he can't get his priorities right. As long as he can have sex, who cares if his loved ones get taken, tortured and raped.

How many times does he get to fuck up before the people around him stop sucking up to him and tell him to sort his fucking life out.

The worst part is the MC is supposed to be this great guy who everyone loves and always helps those close to him yet this update and Karen's suffering both make him look like a selfish moron.

 

[Cthulhu4Prez2020]

Beyond all that tho, I actually like the game, up until this update that is...I agree that it seems he really needs to get his shit straight.

 

[Avaron1974]

Beyond all that tho, I actually like the game, up until this update that is...I agree that it seems he really needs to get his shit straight.

I was really enjoying it, even with Karen's story stuff, it just seems this update really made the MC look bad.

Not only that but we're on the third time one of his women has gone missing and it's getting a bit old now.

2 have been kidnapped and Morna nearly got killed going out on patrol. I'd like to have things changed up a bit and the plot to move without a damsel in distress. Even worse considering 2 of the women were supposedly great warriors although Demi has the excuse of supressed memories it still isn't a great look.

 

[Qoo-Rilla]

What the fuck is going on in this game? Why should it be ruined as soon as people start liking it. That forced NTR was a complete knockout for the whole fucking game. DEV should already know how much this brings shit to the neck and how much it kicks players out of this game. Don't they damn ever learn. Then when it targets the worst, a family member, how much it raises anger. 5/5 shits

 

[mnkey45457]

Man I really wanted to play this game, it seems interesting. But damn, those renders are really poor quality. I wasn't able to get very far in the game... Are the renders like that for the whole story or do they eventually improve?

 

[Deleted member 2412505]

This game was great up untill now. This was one one the trashiest update I've ever seen in a game. His sister got beaten, raped to oblivion and he doesn't even go to hospital to take care of her but has all the time to fuck with 'so' much headache. Seriously?!
And what's that barn shit?!?! Fucking a horse? And kissing us with the horse's sperm her mouth. You didn't even make it optional!
Fuck this shit. I'm out.

 

[Avaron1974]

Man I really wanted to play this game, it seems interesting. But damn, those renders are really poor quality. I wasn't able to get very far in the game... Are the renders like that for the whole story or do they eventually improve?

They do get better as the story goes on.

 

[Qoo-Rilla]

There is also one original sin in this game. In a way, there are no choices. If two options appear on the screen, then the other always leads to a bad result. Which is basically just one choice. Why even show that bad end choice when it’s useless. No one stops playing at the point of "fuck I chose the wrong choice". Fucking big facepalm.

 

[Hybris]

Regardless of your opinions on content the biggest issue with this game is the garbage grade renderings. This is heavily pixielated sub 1080p renders and there is little excuse for that. If the game wasn't so hard to look at I might be willing to play for more than a few minutes and actually care about the story and characters.

 

[DeathAl]

Hybris
" From other comments and reviews there is a lot of NTR that doesn't seem to be avoidable. All I can say is look at the tags before downloading. "

The problem is that the game was not tagged as containing rape and NTR.
It's the dev / writer who said it was a good idea to add that for the last update (except that no or so it would be good to warn the players from the start, if he had done that I think people wouldn't have complained.).
Personally I call that a dick move.

 

[Qoo-Rilla]

Regardless of your opinions on content the biggest issue with this game is the garbage grade renderings. This is heavily pixielated sub 1080p renders and there is little excuse for that. If the game wasn't so hard to look at I might be willing to play for more than a few minutes and actually care about the story and characters.

True. Personally, I played all the rubbish from the beginning yesterday and found that the quality of those upstream images has been dropped to just the level of rubbish from what they were when the game was released. Although they weren't quite top even then. I have a few delicious pictures from the early days in store and they can’t even be compared to each other with this latest update. Here are a couple of examples. You can understand that when you think about how you can keep the size of the game as small as possible.

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[Abhai]

My Ordinary Extraordinary Life [v6.0] [Cheepshot] (2.06 GB rar pc source)
264 MB rar unofficial pc compressed (reduced image quality):

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done by Cruncher v0.4.1(BAS@f95zone)

 

[TundraLupus]

Okay, so I had to replay the game from the beginning and let me first say, I don't have a problem with the renders and think that people care way too much about that, and I have no problem with the rape since it made some sense story wise(there was no ntr, ntr indicates that the LI is willing to have sex with the other person, this was kidnapping and rape), but although I see potential in the story it is really shallow, it is for all intents and proposes a porn game and nothing more, the plot is there to get the main character laid and that is it, and I'm just not interested on that right now, also the sex scenes tend to jump all over the place and be a very porn-like witch is not something I'm too much of a fan off, I mean they are better than a lot of others that I see on here but not my flavour, as a porn game it is average to good, for a VN I would say it is bellow average to bad at the moment, again that is my assessment, I just wanted to say to the dev: Good luck and I hope you get a lot of support to your project, keep up with the good work.

 

[DeathAl]

there was no ntr, ntr indicates that the LI is willing to have sex with the other person, this was kidnapping and rape

Like Merrill said it's NTR C not the most common but it's still NTR

 

[mnkey45457]

They do get better as the story goes on.

The quality of the renders improves? Maybe ill try to get a bit further then, thanks!

 

[TundraLupus]

Like Merrill said it's NTR C not the most common but it's still NTR

NTR or

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, (

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. 寝取られ, 寝(ne) as in 寝取られ means "sleep", in this case, "

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sleeping with someone (cheating)". 取られ(torare) is a noun coming from 取られる(torareru), "have something stolen/robbed".

It is a genre of anime (most commonly found in

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), with a specific idea at its centre - cheating. It has a (main) story where the protagonist has his/her lover stolen by someone. The sex in an Netorare hentai/NTR hentai will focus more on the couple that is having an affair together, rather than the married or dating couple whose relationship is being violated. Netorare/NTR usually has a female character as the one who is cheating on her husband or boyfriend, but it can also be a male character as well sleeping with other girls. Quite often, Netorare hentai/NTR hentai end in depressed,

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, and rage-filled characters rather than happy endings.

even in NTR manga that starts with it being rape or blackmail by the mid or end the other person is enjoying it and goes back to cheating out of their free will, there is no enjoyment coming from the LI in this story, so not NTR, just plain rape, I even researched the "NTR C" thing and found absolutely nothing, NTR is about jealousy if you are jealous of the rapist than your option doesn't matter to me at all.


edit: if you feel like your partner is a property then I care even less about your opinion

 

[laeg]

even in NTR manga that starts with it being rape or blackmail by the mid or end the other person is enjoying it and goes back to cheating out of their free will, there is no enjoyment coming from the LI in this story, so not NTR, just plain rape, I even researched the "NTR C" thing and found absolutely nothing, NTR is about jealousy if you are jealous of the rapist than your option doesn't matter to me at all.

when someone using what is mine i am jealouse....

 

[DeathAl]

I even researched the "NTR C" thing and found absolutely nothing

In this case you don't know how to use a search engine and I'm sorry for you.

NTR is about jealousy if you are jealous of the rapist than your option doesn't matter to me at all.


edit: if you feel like your partner is a property then I care even less about your opinion

Coming from a guy who says that: "have no problem with the rape" it's borderline. (You saw I can distort your words too, it's funny.)