- Jun 4, 2018
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This is currently a great example of how to write diverse and interesting characters. Especially well done on Katrina given how much I absolutely despise her guts.
Decently slow-burn pace but it's something I enjoy, renders are pretty good, I guess all I could say is that the girls could look a little bit more different from eachother I suppose?
But genuinely, it's hard to find actual critique, it's been real good thus far and I'm eager to see where it's going. (Hopefully with Katrina 6 feet under, but I digress.)
Decently slow-burn pace but it's something I enjoy, renders are pretty good, I guess all I could say is that the girls could look a little bit more different from eachother I suppose?
But genuinely, it's hard to find actual critique, it's been real good thus far and I'm eager to see where it's going. (Hopefully with Katrina 6 feet under, but I digress.)