rampage97

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YES to this! I realize this pathetic second guessing oneself is appropriate for some sort of beta/sub path, it's their bread n butter. But it's misplaced and immersion breaking for any sort of dom route..
I think I get the reservations at the beginning, he wants to have a stronger moral compass after what happened with Mel. But I agree, questioning it at every junction is a bit much. Even to do it every now and then with a dom personality would be fine, just not this much.
 

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I think I get the reservations at the beginning, he wants to have a stronger moral compass after what happened with Mel. But I agree, questioning it at every junction is a bit much. Even to do it every now and then with a dom personality would be fine, just not this much.
Personally, I could go without the inner monologuing. I prefer the silent protagonist approach where you're given options in dialogue but the player character doesn't speak and instead, characters respond to your choice, but that's just me.
 
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And yeah I agree with this, he always seems to have these insecure inner monologues about "blah blah blah am I doing the right thing? Am I bad a person?" - Frankly I could do without this on ANY of the paths, just pick your way and be proud of it, either you're a proud dominant character or an enthusiastic submissive character, enough moping.
Do yourself a favor and don't play Single Again :LOL:
 

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Out of curiosity, for those who chose to fall for someone other than Jen, what led you away from her? I ask because I'm surprised Jen is so low on the poll of patrons. Emma I completely understand, I just thought Jen would be higher
 

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Out of curiosity, for those who chose to fall for someone other than Jen, what led you away from her? I ask because I'm surprised Jen is so low on the poll of patrons. Emma I completely understand, I just thought Jen would be higher
Because she's f**king boring and the least attractive (in an overall unattractive cast) to boot..? I'll fuck her, sure, but she's about as intersting as watching paint dry..
That MIGHT be a factor..

Edit: forgot about the asian chick, she's equally fugly tbf, credit where credit is due. But at least she's a bit of fun.
 

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Because she's f**king boring and the least attractive (in an overall unattractive cast) to boot..? I'll fuck her, sure, but she's about as intersting as watching paint dry..
That MIGHT be a factor..

Edit: forgot about the asian chick, she's equally fugly tbf, credit where credit is due. But at least she's a bit of fun.
I don't think Jen or Kim are ugly, but I agree Jen is a boring character. Kim on the other hand is interesting. There's a cat and mouse dynamic with Kim, I find that to be fun.
 

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Out of curiosity, for those who chose to fall for someone other than Jen, what led you away from her? I ask because I'm surprised Jen is so low on the poll of patrons. Emma I completely understand, I just thought Jen would be higher
I liked Jen until her story took a turn for the utterly formulaic and boring. Neither the dom or sub routes are particularly engaging.

The dom route feels like it's just "going through the motions" without actually having any teeth - for ex) the "dom" sex scenes have pretty vanilla dialogue accompanied by extremely vanilla sex scenes...I dont need faces smashed into mattresses; but SOMETHING that would indicate her desire for that relationship dynamic (a desire so strong she's willing to break up over it!)...

The sub route was decent until the later chapters when it builds up into
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IMO, Lea is the new Jen, and I can't imagine I'm the only Jen-expatriate that moved there.

I'm on the opposite side of the fence with Kim, can't stand her, find her physically and emotionally ugly, every dialogue choice with her I try and pick the one that will get her out of my face the fastest. However, I will concede for her faults she isn't boring.
 

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I liked Jen until her story took a turn for the utterly formulaic and boring. Neither the dom or sub routes are particularly engaging.

The dom route feels like it's just "going through the motions" without actually having any teeth - for ex) the "dom" sex scenes have pretty vanilla dialogue accompanied by extremely vanilla sex scenes...I dont need faces smashed into mattresses; but SOMETHING that would indicate her desire for that relationship dynamic (a desire so strong she's willing to break up over it!)...

The sub route was decent until the later chapters when it builds up into
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IMO, Lea is the new Jen, and I can't imagine I'm the only Jen-expatriate that moved there.

I'm on the opposite side of the fence with Kim, can't stand her, find her physically and emotionally ugly, every dialogue choice with her I try and pick the one that will get her out of my face the fastest. However, I will concede for her faults she isn't boring.
I'm kinda in the same boat for Lea, I'm liking her more and more, but I think I have a soft spot for Jen for some reason. But Kim fucking sucks, I just want her to leave everyone alone
 

ename144

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Out of curiosity, for those who chose to fall for someone other than Jen, what led you away from her? I ask because I'm surprised Jen is so low on the poll of patrons. Emma I completely understand, I just thought Jen would be higher
Because she was the MC's patient. Not only would banging her be blatantly unethical at the best of times, it's the very sin the MC is forever bemoaning throughout this game! The last thing I need is to give him even more reason to navel gaze about his busted career.

To overcome that level of criminal stupidity Jen would need to be the most irresistible girl in the history of AVNs; she's nowhere close. She's very likable and rather pretty, but even in this game alone there are several other girls who are just as likable or have substantially better dynamics with the MC. Turning down Jen is an easy call. All IMHO, obviously.

As for Lea, I love the character, I just can't stand the way the MC acts at the start of her path.
 

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I'm kinda in the same boat for Lea, I'm liking her more and more, but I think I have a soft spot for Jen for some reason. But Kim fucking sucks, I just want her to leave everyone alone
I think it's impossible to not have some kind of soft spot for Jen; she's a rare avn character that's written with a "gentle" personality.

I've known real world girls like Kim (so credit is due to mister silver for realistic writing) especially in my college days, and I always wanted to yell at their face "You're not hot enough to be that big of a bitch. Shut up and go bother someone else."
there are several other girls who are just as likable or have substantially better dynamics with the MC. Turning down Jen is an easy call. All IMHO, obviously.
On that note, I really wish Emma would get some more love. (I hope im not butchering the names its been awhile), but like - the girl who's his defacto best friend from the start; and as I recall her paths were fairly limited and linear. I'm always a sucker for the "canon girl" or the one mc ignored earlier in life....
 
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ename144

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On that note, I really wish Emma would get some more love. (I hope im not butchering the names its been awhile), but like - the girl who's his defacto best friend from the start; and as I recall her paths were fairly limited and linear. I'm always a sucker for the "canon girl" or the one mc ignored earlier in life....
I love Emma; the way she and the MC bounce off each other is fantastic.

That said, I haven't explored her paths too much because I just can't stand dom/sub content and that seems the be the lens through which most of her scenes have to be viewed. There is a narrow neutral route in the latest update, but it feels very sluggish. We see Emma and the MC are very awkward together when they aren't trying to one up each other - which certainly makes sense - but the point is made without developing it much further. We see them acknowledge the problem and that's about it. They don't ponder the implications of their awkwardness, much less grapple for a solution. It's a good start, but not much to show after 6 episodes (rather like poor Bri and Olivia).

We'll see what happens next, but for now I think Emma works better as a rival than as a lover. :(
 

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Out of curiosity, for those who chose to fall for someone other than Jen, what led you away from her?
What ename144 said. But not only that: I felt like a relationship with the MC was also wrong for her, and would have somehow hindered her therapy. She had to find her own inner strength, without relying on the MC and becoming emotionally dependent (note that I don't know anything about psychology, it was just a feeling of mine. Still, it didn't let me enjoy Jen's route).

Osanaiko mentioned that new paths may be added to the game: well, speaking of Jen, she triggers a weird fetish of mine. I wish there were a non-sexual route with her, where I could treat her like a little sister. Just hugs, headpats and icecreams. Like her granpa, I guess. I know, I am a weirdo.

Oh, and: Lea best girl.
 

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This was the best rated femdom game and I can see why. I doesn't excel in anything of it, the character models are rather generic, the dialogue is plain if not childishly immature resembling teenagers chat language. Buts its so consistent and unpretentious that it gets away with it? I still dig elaborate flowerfull writing, but I respect the straight delivery. They can’t/won’t do it, so they leave it at that. Very likely the reason for the relatively speedy work, this isn’t painfully combing over every tiny detail to waste months of productivity and fall in to depressing over perfecting the work, the content is deliverd efficiently and in good quantity.

What stands out is that the restrictions are laid bare immediatly, 48 fetishes and 6 main girls for 10 chapters, other projects lose themselves in +10 girls and more and more outbranching with no end in sight.

Despite the generic style and writing, its very authentic. I was having my dick in my hand and the game just straight unironically spend an entire section with chess commentary, I laughed my ass of, its so genuine the developer doing whatever they like to do. And the disclaimer thankfully pointed out that all the psychology shouldn’t be taken seriously to stop anyone from stressing out how it doesn't apply to RL (no shit dude). After all, nothing in videogames applies to real life, but has a perception of being plausible and appears to be realistic, which is important to immerse yourself in the game and justify the porn logic.


Bri ist he least developed character and ist unclear what role and how she belongs. She is surprisingly all present but barely does something? It doesn’t help that her stuff is very basic and vanilla, now this could exactly be the point, not fucking a desaster and potential drama waiting to explode like the other girls, but its boring. Not even race play or anything to make her stand out.

Olivia suffers from lack sexual content, her role is justifyable and characterisation is well rounded. She may be too similar to Deb and giving her more scenes with the MC swinging with her and Jamie would end up of being a copy of Deb/Carl. The character in most need of more content, unlike Bri who could be droped.


Kim didn’t convince me s much on the sub route, partly because her scenes are difficult to trigger in general and dropping everyone for a character that was always on the sidelines and barely messed around with you was to quick. The manly route knocked it out of the park and considering that the nastier stuff in the sub route is about to begin, its overall alright. Her motivation is too one dimensional and cartoonishly evil, however, the game sorely lacks an antagonist and all the other characters are just to kind and nice, Emma and Deb wouldn’t physically hurt the MC and even trying to set up Carl as the bull is really harmless (maybe Jamie could’ve been more reckless and slightly shittier). Kim is excellent to focus on a cunning route (fwit you can even enter her route with middlish cunning and can focus on other skills)


Deb is the best sub, her male content clearly left a lot to be desired and is unfinished. Cage is good just beause its incoperated in other routes. Adressing on your doms relationship issues differentiates her from the typical cliche dom in most dom games, when the dom character is usually perfectly content with themselves and its just the sub that has issues.


Lea is the most flexible that can be applied with every skill, the branching out and interacting with other routes is good, its always a bit unplausible why the cheating aspect is barely adressed in harem/semi-harem games, so its good that its adressed and even played with through her. My only mild complaint is that 20 honesty are mandantory. It's fine if one focuses on her honest exhibition route anyways, but if you intend to cheat it can be a bit of a roadblockt that you can overcome technically by chosing a few hon options just to get 2-3 hon skills and then drop it, but I suggest on building on what was already done: alowing to be in a manipulative relationship just by being cunning enough. She is already emphasized as the ideal girl if you play a honest character, contrasting this with a cunning route rounds up the potential of her character.

Jen is excellent utilisied for the mcs trauma and while she is clearly meant for the manly route, her sub route isn’t too shabby either and has plenty of servivable options. The issue of being forced to have Cunning to enter her route is similar to Lea, however, you only need 10 cunning which is easily done.


Emmas strengths on how she can bounce back on the MC in two entirely different ways is done well. Minor complaint is how loose the relationship is and how they always can mess around. The kissing her passionatly option in particular came out of nowhere and can be out of character on extreme manly/sub runs, maybe tweaking that and limiting it to a vanilla/love/romance route is better?


As I said, good game for what it strives to be, actually convinces me to donate for the next update, patreon isn't too scummy either and developer responds, shows their work and seems chill and content.
 

rampage97

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This is the first time in quite a while that I caught up with a game and immediately went to Patreon. I can't give enough to gain access to 6.3 (which was literally just released btw) but this game has so many layers and I love the variety, so I knew I had to help in any small way. Kudos MrSilverLight, I'll be eagerly awaiting what's next.
 

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This is the first time in quite a while that I caught up with a game and immediately went to Patreon. I can't give enough to gain access to 6.3 (which was literally just released btw) but this game has so many layers and I love the variety, so I knew I had to help in any small way. Kudos MrSilverLight, I'll be eagerly awaiting what's next.
Pretty much. Not even heroing the update, since its not some insane sum some developers demand.
 
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My previous silly post was partly due to my great happiness and euphoria at finally achieving the goal of...

Completed proofread/editing of Chapter 6! :love:

I'll hand the final edited file over to Mr SL tonight. It only took me 9 weeks lol. So much for my prediction of 2-3 weeks back in May.
2779 lines edited of 19053.

I have no info on when he will be able to merge (hopefully most) of my suggested changes back into the game files and make a patch release. And please don't pressure him, he is more than busy enough working on both the new content and the enhancements to previous chapters that are going into the first Steam release...
Not to take anything away from what you're doing because I think this is an excellently written game and editing things line by line is an exceptionally time consuming and generous task. But have you or MrSilverLust considered tossing the script into something like Google Docs as a first pass?

The first couple of opening lines in chapter 1, "The ghosts of your past mistakes still hunt you" and "To your dream job as sexologist" can both be caught this way. These lines in particular are really off-putting as a first impression considering they occur in the opening monologue. I didn't test this with every chapter, but it looks like similar problems can be found by tossing the scripts for Chapter 2 and 6 in as well.
 
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Gicoo

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How do I get Lea's 12th scene (between chapter 5 beach and chapter 6 handcuff)? Its considered a manly scene but I went through the honest route and didn't unlock it (I assume it isn't on the submissive route).
 
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