VN Ren'Py Abandoned Oath of Loyalty [Ch. 10] [Silk Ari/REV]

[rev_01]

Hey Guys! Important announcement. So I've decided to open up a Patreon for Oath of Loyalty. Here's the link for it:

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If you have a couple of bucks to spare and want to fund the development of the game to help me buy better assets for the game (cos unfortunately I can't put all my money towards it), any support would be greatly appreciated :slight_smile:

 

[Dalish]

another game MC has a mullet.

 

[rev_01]

Kellermann why the thinking react to the post?

 

[Kellermann]

Kellermann why the thinking react to the post?

Just antsy after what happened with part 1. No worries though mate. I'm glad you have taken this on and will be continuing the story.

 

[rev_01]

Just antsy after what happened with part 1. No worries though mate. I'm glad you have taken this on and will be continuing the story.

Yeah, I’m not expecting much support until I actually release Part 2 and even then I’m not expecting that much but I blew like $500 on assets already and its starting to get too much for me ahaha cos im also tryna save for a house deposit and car so I thought any cent might help.

Completely understand why you and many others are hesitant though, hopefully I can show you that you don’t need to be when I release Part 2 in a couple of months

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Yeah, I’m not expecting much support until I actually release Part 2 and even then I’m not expecting that much but I blew like $500 on assets already and its starting to get too much for me ahaha cos im also tryna save for a house deposit and car so I thought any cent might help.

Completely understand why you and many others are hesitant though, hopefully I can show you that you don’t need to be when I release Part 2 in a couple of months

I would just like to say that I don't like it when a game forces me to have a girlfriend I didn't ask for and if I break up with her

I end up being a fucker that walks out on his unborn child

I tried everything to break up with her without

getting her pregnant

but nothing worked'

I hope you will consider changing it as the game goes on

don't want to abandon my child but I don't want to be with a girl I don't love

 

[rev_01]

I would just like to say that I don't like it when a game forces me to have a girlfriend I didn't ask for and if I break up with her

I end up being a fucker that walks out on his unborn child

I tried everything to break up with her without

getting her pregnant

but nothing worked'

I hope you will consider changing it as the game goes on

don't want to abandon my child but I don't want to be with a girl I don't love

I’ve written many comments on this tread about my inability to alter the events from Part 1. What happened with Jane is final unfortunately and I cannot change it.

 

[Kellermann]

I would just like to say that I don't like it when a game forces me to have a girlfriend I didn't ask for and if I break up with her

I end up being a fucker that walks out on his unborn child

I tried everything to break up with her without

getting her pregnant

but nothing worked'

I hope you will consider changing it as the game goes on

don't want to abandon my child but I don't want to be with a girl I don't love

It would be a shame if something were to ......."happen" .....to Jane off screen between the events of part 1 and part 2.

No guilt about abandoning your child, but still providing some ready-made drama for the MC who now carries anger and bitterness about losing his progeny and the "love of his life" (not mine, I was never that fond of Jane). Who or what could have done such a horrendous thing and how might your character dish out revenge...or forgiveness?

Anyway, not sure if that counts as altering the events of part 1 (which is against the original dev's stated rules), but it's one possible way to move forward.

 

[rev_01]

It would be a shame if something were to ......."happen" .....to Jane off screen between the events of part 1 and part 2.

No guilt about abandoning your child, but still providing some ready-made drama for the MC who now carries anger and bitterness about losing his progeny and the "love of his life" (not mine, I was never that fond of Jane). Who or what could have done such a horrendous thing and how might your character dish out revenge...or forgiveness?

Anyway, not sure if that counts as altering the events of part 1 (which is against the original dev's stated rules), but it's one possible way to move forward.

Feasibly possible since I wouldn't be altering the events of Part 1 but as much as it sucks I kinda just want to leave Jane's storyline there and focus more on other things. She doesn't really have a place in my plans going forward, and I could edit my plans to incorporate her but I just feel like it's not worth it. I'll do a poll and see what the community wants but my personal preference would be to just let Jane's story end where it did.

 

[rev_01]

The other problem I face is what then happens if the players left with Jane? The branch kinda screws things up a bit and makes it harder to fix it without more branching occurring.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Feasibly possible since I wouldn't be altering the events of Part 1 but as much as it sucks I kinda just want to leave Jane's storyline there and focus more on other things. She doesn't really have a place in my plans going forward, and I could edit my plans to incorporate her but I just feel like it's not worth it. I'll do a poll and see what the community wants but my personal preference would be to just let Jane's story end where it did.

it would be great if you could figure out a way to help us
it's not fair to be stuck with any girl we didn't ask for

then if you wanted out you're forced to abandon your child

they are a lot of people that don't want to be stuck with the guilt of abandoning their own child

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

The other problem I face is what then happens if the players left with Jane? The branch kinda screws things up a bit and makes it harder to fix it without more branching occurring.

How about if she leaves town without telling me and nine months later she leaves a baby at my door

I don't see why I can't rule the criminal underworld and raise my child by myself

Maybe by then I will be with a girl I actually choose

or raising my baby myself could be a good way to keep my Humanity so I don't turn into an evil bastard

 

[ttsheng33]

rev_01 glad to see you back

 

[rev_01]

How about if she leaves town without telling me and nine months later she leaves a baby at my door

I don't see why I can't rule the criminal underworld and raise my child by myself

Maybe by then I will be with a girl I actually choose

or raising my baby myself could be a good way to keep my Humanity so I don't turn into an evil bastard

How can she leave town without telling you when she legit left town and told you about it?

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

How can she leave town without telling you when she legit left town and told you about it?

honestly I have no idea I just don't want to be the guy who abandoned his child

and i don't want to be stuck with a girlfriend I never asked for I want to choose my own love interest

by the way my choice for my own love interest was my mom

hottest woman in the game by far she has no competition

 

[Mmushy]

Dude, no point whinging about it.
As already stated many times, one of the conditions for taking over the game is ...Part 1 is canon, whatever happens in part 1 cannot be changed....
Do not want a child with Jane, replay and don't cum inside her.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Dude, no point whinging about it.
As already stated many times, one of the conditions for taking over the game is ...Part 1 is canon, whatever happens in part 1 cannot be changed....
Do not want a child with Jane, replay and don't cum inside her.

bro I haven't played in a while but I believe that even if you don't come inside she still gets pregnant

 

[rev_01]

Poll is up about Jane's storyline going forward. Please make sure to vote on what you want to happen.

 

[Mmushy]

I voted no.
Don't need another revenge story.
Now if she brought in the red neck mafia...

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

bro I haven't played in a while but I believe that even if you don't come inside she still gets pregnant

Exatcly, I honestly don't see why the dev would make the pregnancy thing unavoidable when it won't even play a role in the game , either you leave with Jane where in the future she and your Daughter both gets murdered or be a scumbag and abandon your child (there's no good option) and now the dev has no interest in Janes story or continuing it.
Could at least let the daughter live and be a main part of the story in part 2, she could be MCs halo for whenever he feels darksided.