Well they give them unrealistic proportion and its usually not re default modem but the 3d artist that go overboard xD
- Sep 10, 2019
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Great game.. pretty decent renders, great story.. love the storyboard. the animations need some work.. facial expressions are unchanged throughout etc.. but really can't wait to see more. Great MC... the style they talk in definitely makes the charactors stand out with distinction. Pretty happy with it all.. 7/10 and left me wanting MORE!
- Jan 13, 2020
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We gonna have a shootout soon? Nice!!!
So for now we can only choose Jane or Angela? Sorry Angela, Jane is the best girl.
So for now we can only choose Jane or Angela? Sorry Angela, Jane is the best girl.
- Feb 5, 2020
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*Jane and Daniela*
MC: Seems like you two are hitting it off!
Me: Fuck...
MC: Seems like you two are hitting it off!
Me: Fuck...
- Jan 7, 2020
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- May 9, 2018
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Great update!
I'm not surprised learning the truth of Angela, I figured as much but I love that her and MC will have like that "Other side of the tracks" kinda romantic relationship. Angela is best girl in the game to me so I hope a real relationship with her is still possible. I like Jane but in a FB type of way, not LI.
Julia is a very beautiful model to me, she has that whole modest beauty thing going for her. Knowing that she has a crush on MC got me hyped.
Paulie seems like a cunt to me from the story the Mom told MC, he seems like he can be unstable at times. He and Sal are cut from the same cloth. You can't have hot heads in your crew, It didn't work out too well for Joe Pesci in Goodfellas.
Damn now I want more!!..
I'm not surprised learning the truth of Angela, I figured as much but I love that her and MC will have like that "Other side of the tracks" kinda romantic relationship. Angela is best girl in the game to me so I hope a real relationship with her is still possible. I like Jane but in a FB type of way, not LI.
Julia is a very beautiful model to me, she has that whole modest beauty thing going for her. Knowing that she has a crush on MC got me hyped.
Paulie seems like a cunt to me from the story the Mom told MC, he seems like he can be unstable at times. He and Sal are cut from the same cloth. You can't have hot heads in your crew, It didn't work out too well for Joe Pesci in Goodfellas.
Damn now I want more!!..
- May 9, 2018
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Jane is plain to me.
- Feb 5, 2020
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Lol, fair. I actually like Jane. I definitely prefer her over Daniela. Hell, I prefer all the girls over Daniela. I wonder if I make Julia preggers and ditch Daniela if Daniela will get sad and go away
.P.S. I also impregnated the fuck out of Jane
- May 9, 2018
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I cut my dick off once but another one grew back smh
- May 9, 2018
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Damn no one likes Daniela lol, poor thing.Lol, fair. I actually like Jane. I definitely prefer her over Daniela. Hell, I prefer all the girls over Daniela. I wonder if I make Julia preggers and ditch Daniela if Daniela will get sad and go away
P.S. I also impregnated the fuck out of Jane
- Feb 5, 2020
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I was pretty neutral about her during the last update. Still didn't care much for her. However, in this update, she just came off as a raging bitch. XD
2 portions of text that might sound a bit better.
the line about people dying in the prologue right and left, might sound a bit better as left and right.
the line about police on the "family's arm", doesn't make as much sense because if they are on a beach they got money to go away, so should arm be dime?
Should ask him about the baker? (feels like it is missing I), same with the mother repeating not wanting to be alone in bed
Failed economics class the story board of Main character has "was'nt"
(would be nice if all the previous information was on previous pages, so if you need to remember something you can check back)
slightly sad that the same conversation happens between vincent and angela as vincent and jane at the bar. The one about the throwing the doll, and Angela saying the same thing as Jane "Oh, are we going to get intimate?", it would be nice to have them be different people with differing speech patterns. Or how both have "shows" as their dirty talk and the bang/corny lines
the switch between first moan and second moan with angela does a flash of the text box. Also really should use some longer moans, half second loops don't sound good.
Paulie tells frank to deal with it, but then MC says he wants to go with Paulie, so is Paulie taking over a line of Frank's? Specifically "Paulie: Okay, get down there and take care of it."
When MC and Paulie arrive/leave, the fade to black should probably fade into next scene
Second splif : spliff (most of the english is pretty spot on, might be small places missing a word or punctuation mark)
(Daniela starting moan is not good, sounds very much like an under water sonar ping, surprised MC isn't worried about cumming inside her like he is Jane)
(MC should just be allowed to be named at the start of the game, and can change things via the board, having it start as a different name and reset to it again is odd)
(MC asks peter what his dad stole twice)
(some versions of cafe in the second chapter are missing the special e)
ego the size of skyscraper : size of a
Jane mentions "bills and rent" but she previously said rent is directly taken from the pay, which probably also covers utilities.
The dinner date with Jane has her repeating a lot of the stuff she said if you went on the first date with her, and MC acts like it is new
we both we're horrible : were
(The story never mentioned what happened to Tommy's gf, can't imagine she was happy her BF and friend went behind her back too)
Wat should you do. : What should you do?
(Why is aunt Barbara putting sun screen on her breasts?)
(small flash of text box during transition before asking another question)
(There are a bunch of transitions that go to a black screen but don't then transition on their own to the next screen)
(When she puts sunscreen on her legs, she should probably still have shiny breasts)
(can you ever not get caught spying on the aunt?)
(MC says he is hard already when making out with jane, but image when he is on his back shows he is not)
(another text box flash at end of movie scene)
(sex scenes never show MC going balls deep, but he keeps saying deep inside)
(choice screen on where to cum already has MC with penis outside, should probably have left it in until the choice)
(If MC started with Angela, and has creampies Jane at pool party on storyboard there is no mention)
lying and deceipt : (remove p)
the line about people dying in the prologue right and left, might sound a bit better as left and right.
the line about police on the "family's arm", doesn't make as much sense because if they are on a beach they got money to go away, so should arm be dime?
Should ask him about the baker? (feels like it is missing I), same with the mother repeating not wanting to be alone in bed
Failed economics class the story board of Main character has "was'nt"
(would be nice if all the previous information was on previous pages, so if you need to remember something you can check back)
slightly sad that the same conversation happens between vincent and angela as vincent and jane at the bar. The one about the throwing the doll, and Angela saying the same thing as Jane "Oh, are we going to get intimate?", it would be nice to have them be different people with differing speech patterns. Or how both have "shows" as their dirty talk and the bang/corny lines
the switch between first moan and second moan with angela does a flash of the text box. Also really should use some longer moans, half second loops don't sound good.
Paulie tells frank to deal with it, but then MC says he wants to go with Paulie, so is Paulie taking over a line of Frank's? Specifically "Paulie: Okay, get down there and take care of it."
When MC and Paulie arrive/leave, the fade to black should probably fade into next scene
Second splif : spliff (most of the english is pretty spot on, might be small places missing a word or punctuation mark)
(Daniela starting moan is not good, sounds very much like an under water sonar ping, surprised MC isn't worried about cumming inside her like he is Jane)
(MC should just be allowed to be named at the start of the game, and can change things via the board, having it start as a different name and reset to it again is odd)
(MC asks peter what his dad stole twice)
(some versions of cafe in the second chapter are missing the special e)
ego the size of skyscraper : size of a
Jane mentions "bills and rent" but she previously said rent is directly taken from the pay, which probably also covers utilities.
The dinner date with Jane has her repeating a lot of the stuff she said if you went on the first date with her, and MC acts like it is new
we both we're horrible : were
(The story never mentioned what happened to Tommy's gf, can't imagine she was happy her BF and friend went behind her back too)
Wat should you do. : What should you do?
(Why is aunt Barbara putting sun screen on her breasts?)
(small flash of text box during transition before asking another question)
(There are a bunch of transitions that go to a black screen but don't then transition on their own to the next screen)
(When she puts sunscreen on her legs, she should probably still have shiny breasts)
(can you ever not get caught spying on the aunt?)
(MC says he is hard already when making out with jane, but image when he is on his back shows he is not)
(another text box flash at end of movie scene)
(sex scenes never show MC going balls deep, but he keeps saying deep inside)
(choice screen on where to cum already has MC with penis outside, should probably have left it in until the choice)
(If MC started with Angela, and has creampies Jane at pool party on storyboard there is no mention)
lying and deceipt : (remove p)
- Aug 13, 2018
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Great little game so far.
I always think a little sex scene has to be in there at the begining as a teaser.
It's well implemented here. You even can chose between 2 girls with different body types!
Oh and it is animated! Quite well animated too. A bit short maybe. But hey it's in there
and I don't know how difficult and how much work it is to create those so I shut up about it.
The character models look really great and are not the same overused assets you see around often.
They are fresh and good looking. Oh and they got different body types. And, I would say, realistic body types
but realistic in games or media...maybe plausible? I think plausible is a good word.
What I am trying to say is, I think the creator has put a lot of attention and effort into every little detail of the ladies.
And it shows. Well done.
The renders look good too. No noise, no grain.
I like the mob theme and the fitting language. Good work on that.
The endings of the sex scenes need some finishing touch tho.
The first one with Jane. You see a render with a creampie dripping out
while the MC is claiming he's cumming. Huh?
Guess it's the first game the dev creates and the game is still in an early stage
so some roughness around the edges is absolutely OK and it will probably be straighten out
in future updates.
It's great, it's entertaining. Girls look fresh and great. Overall production quality is good.
Superb english. Oh and I like the boobs. They are really really really well done on all the ladies.
Check it out guys. And don't whine about some plot holes or minor stuff like that.
I mean we all know that there is no sound in space but you wouldn't want a
completely mute StarWars space battle now, would you?
Seriously, play it and like it. And create some buzz for it. It's deserved.
I always think a little sex scene has to be in there at the begining as a teaser.
It's well implemented here. You even can chose between 2 girls with different body types!
Oh and it is animated! Quite well animated too. A bit short maybe. But hey it's in there
and I don't know how difficult and how much work it is to create those so I shut up about it.
The character models look really great and are not the same overused assets you see around often.
They are fresh and good looking. Oh and they got different body types. And, I would say, realistic body types
but realistic in games or media...maybe plausible? I think plausible is a good word.
What I am trying to say is, I think the creator has put a lot of attention and effort into every little detail of the ladies.
And it shows. Well done.
The renders look good too. No noise, no grain.
I like the mob theme and the fitting language. Good work on that.
The endings of the sex scenes need some finishing touch tho.
The first one with Jane. You see a render with a creampie dripping out
while the MC is claiming he's cumming. Huh?
Guess it's the first game the dev creates and the game is still in an early stage
so some roughness around the edges is absolutely OK and it will probably be straighten out
in future updates.
It's great, it's entertaining. Girls look fresh and great. Overall production quality is good.
Superb english. Oh and I like the boobs. They are really really really well done on all the ladies.
Check it out guys. And don't whine about some plot holes or minor stuff like that.
I mean we all know that there is no sound in space but you wouldn't want a
completely mute StarWars space battle now, would you?
Seriously, play it and like it. And create some buzz for it. It's deserved.
- Aug 5, 2016
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It's not unnatural, it's being perfect as a model who uses a lot of makeup. In real world people don't look like this perfect when they are in their home.
- Jul 8, 2017
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- Dec 30, 2019
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Agreed they look perfect to me, this game is already becoming one of my favs.
- May 8, 2018
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great update, loved it very much
renders are so good and they look realistic AF, great job dev
Jane ah, i love that girl
and the fact that MC's mom thinks she is pretty and dad is also on board of her becoming our GF, makes me so happy
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renders are so good and they look realistic AF, great job dev
Jane ah, i love that girl
and the fact that MC's mom thinks she is pretty and dad is also on board of her becoming our GF, makes me so happy
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