- May 2, 2020
- 427
- 714
YES, work is not easy.
Although my favorite part is the main character's Bimbofication route just like Sarah,
but this game is still very fun!
- Jul 24, 2017
- 11
- 6
Just played through .3, it was really good.
I'm not good with remembering characters only by their names so I kept getting certain characters mixed up, maybe in future visual novels having the character's picture appear next to their dialogue would help with keeping up with everybody. Other than that, the game is excellent.
The story, horror, and erotic parts are very strong on their own and together make for a very enjoyable game when combined.
The previews of each route are also well done, and give a good idea of what sort of situations to expect. I like that there are multiple for each character too, as the story progresses.
Overall I'm excited to play the next update, great work!
I'm not good with remembering characters only by their names so I kept getting certain characters mixed up, maybe in future visual novels having the character's picture appear next to their dialogue would help with keeping up with everybody. Other than that, the game is excellent.
The story, horror, and erotic parts are very strong on their own and together make for a very enjoyable game when combined.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
The previews of each route are also well done, and give a good idea of what sort of situations to expect. I like that there are multiple for each character too, as the story progresses.
Overall I'm excited to play the next update, great work!
- Apr 7, 2018
- 226
- 188
- Nov 10, 2018
- 1,724
- 2,175
Excellent start and MINTED graphics, i especially love Klaudia's lezdom personality and can't wait for more, it would be awsome if by the end of the game, that if Klaudia gets her way with Mel every time, and Mel resists pretty much all optional hornballs, like Diva or Liam, there will be an ending where Klaudia ends up with a full blown Loyal Lesbian Harem with Mel & Amy as her 2 personal favourite girls.
Just a fantasy but the way Klaudia acts, her flawless body, her endless confidence and her ability to get what she wants really makes that fantasy turn my mind into sludge. Just like with Autumn Boulevard keep up the amazing work Diciple
Just a fantasy but the way Klaudia acts, her flawless body, her endless confidence and her ability to get what she wants really makes that fantasy turn my mind into sludge. Just like with Autumn Boulevard keep up the amazing work Diciple
Don't worry, I totally understand not just instantly accepting all criticism as correct -- I always tend to sound much harsher than I actually am, and it's your story. Like I said, I'm really enjoying this wonderfully strange story as it's unfolding!
re:Alternate Reality; It just seems like things are ever so slightly off. People are talking about 'cults' as if that's just a normal fact of life -- annoying, maybe, like a hobos, but not totally abnormal. It may simply be that, not being a native English speaker, that the emphasis in these lines is thrown off just enough to be confusing. I don't really know how I'd fix that beyond simply having a character say, "What the fuck do you mean 'cult' -- like the ones from Waco or something?" It just doesn't feel sufficiently clear enough that the main cast is profoundly confused about what's going on. Then you have the magic bimbo-making machine and stuff and it feels very made-for-TV-movie.
On top of that, the lamentations about seeing things and possible mental instability read as very 'dramatic' -- like a scene in a movie -- and not really like someone actually concerned that they're having numerous & profound hallucinations. Like I said, it feels like a fun, trashy horror movie or a Twilight Zone episode. Everything is ever so slightly off in a way that really adds to the atmosphere, but also serves to distance the story from reality. Heightened reality, I think, is the term -- maybe magical realism? That's not a bad thing, by the way, I rather like it. It makes sense with the Backrooms aesthetic -- it looks like reality, but off in a way that strengthens the horror elements.
Regarding the pornography, I don't think that it's simple preference -- I'd argue that your pornographic bits are far too clinical. Cold. Sterile. The narrator, or the character, just giving short observational lines -- not dwelling on the pleasure or feel of the moment. Erotica needs to be savory & sensual. The writing needs to evoke feelings of something. Not emotions, necessarily, but raw, pleasurable, overwhelming input from our five senses. Frissons of pleasure moving up and down the body. Making dialogue, even inner-voiced dialogue, the primary focus during an erotic scene just doesn't work for a variety of reasons. Even, like, audio-centric porn tends to zone in on describing sensations experienced by the erotic focus. I'm not saying it's easy to do or anything, don't read this as criticism. Read it as critique! I like the strange story you're setting up here, best of luck on seeing it through.
re:Alternate Reality; It just seems like things are ever so slightly off. People are talking about 'cults' as if that's just a normal fact of life -- annoying, maybe, like a hobos, but not totally abnormal. It may simply be that, not being a native English speaker, that the emphasis in these lines is thrown off just enough to be confusing. I don't really know how I'd fix that beyond simply having a character say, "What the fuck do you mean 'cult' -- like the ones from Waco or something?" It just doesn't feel sufficiently clear enough that the main cast is profoundly confused about what's going on. Then you have the magic bimbo-making machine and stuff and it feels very made-for-TV-movie.
On top of that, the lamentations about seeing things and possible mental instability read as very 'dramatic' -- like a scene in a movie -- and not really like someone actually concerned that they're having numerous & profound hallucinations. Like I said, it feels like a fun, trashy horror movie or a Twilight Zone episode. Everything is ever so slightly off in a way that really adds to the atmosphere, but also serves to distance the story from reality. Heightened reality, I think, is the term -- maybe magical realism? That's not a bad thing, by the way, I rather like it. It makes sense with the Backrooms aesthetic -- it looks like reality, but off in a way that strengthens the horror elements.
Regarding the pornography, I don't think that it's simple preference -- I'd argue that your pornographic bits are far too clinical. Cold. Sterile. The narrator, or the character, just giving short observational lines -- not dwelling on the pleasure or feel of the moment. Erotica needs to be savory & sensual. The writing needs to evoke feelings of something. Not emotions, necessarily, but raw, pleasurable, overwhelming input from our five senses. Frissons of pleasure moving up and down the body. Making dialogue, even inner-voiced dialogue, the primary focus during an erotic scene just doesn't work for a variety of reasons. Even, like, audio-centric porn tends to zone in on describing sensations experienced by the erotic focus. I'm not saying it's easy to do or anything, don't read this as criticism. Read it as critique! I like the strange story you're setting up here, best of luck on seeing it through.
Story seems interesting so far. For me my FC's on a strict no fat diet so ugly fat bastard denied she also likes her meat fresh and tender so ugly old turd denied she is on the Klaudia route till I can see what kind of content it'll be. If it's not something I'll like I'll open the console and turn it off.
Amy is way to fucking hot to fucking uglyfy her so hard no on that one Ryan is gay and ugly looking enough and he doesn't need to look even uglier so pass on that route if he turned into a hot looking female that would of been different.
Not interested in the Amy Ryan route at all if it was Amy and her sister or another hot girl I would be all over that like wind in a wind storm. So I guess Amy's going to be celibate.
Amy is way to fucking hot to fucking uglyfy her so hard no on that one Ryan is gay and ugly looking enough and he doesn't need to look even uglier so pass on that route if he turned into a hot looking female that would of been different.
Not interested in the Amy Ryan route at all if it was Amy and her sister or another hot girl I would be all over that like wind in a wind storm. So I guess Amy's going to be celibate.
- Aug 24, 2018
- 1,977
- 1,302
DiscipleOfVirginia
The volume sliders don't work for me. I'm trying to lower the music volume. It's at 1% in windows, cranked all the way down on my headset, but still too loud.
The mute button works, but if you mute and unmute it goes to max volume, which sounds the same as before you muted even if it was at a very low volume. Point being that the volume slider does nothing, it's always maxed.
A walkthrough would also be nice, but that's another matter.
EDIT: This was apparently temporary. I just decided to boot up the game, but there was no sound or music. Turned it up with the slider(sliders were below 10%) and it worked as it should. No idea why it didn't work yesterday in spite of restarting the game.
The volume sliders don't work for me. I'm trying to lower the music volume. It's at 1% in windows, cranked all the way down on my headset, but still too loud.
The mute button works, but if you mute and unmute it goes to max volume, which sounds the same as before you muted even if it was at a very low volume. Point being that the volume slider does nothing, it's always maxed.
A walkthrough would also be nice, but that's another matter.
EDIT: This was apparently temporary. I just decided to boot up the game, but there was no sound or music. Turned it up with the slider(sliders were below 10%) and it worked as it should. No idea why it didn't work yesterday in spite of restarting the game.
Last edited:
Two things:
1. Yes, there is an error on my part on the audio. I use several music channels in the game itself, as I have sound effects and what not. I will look into fixing this
2. And no, telling Trey about Ya have no bearing. Its just there to illustrate how to make choices. Might sound silly to some, but it has to be there
- Aug 24, 2018
- 1,977
- 1,302
Gotta applaud you for both the theme and current ending. I think there's at least a chance you're the first female dev(saw that somewhere, if I'm wrong, sorry) who's embraced the an "old" and "old fat" fetish.
Also the first time I've seen graphical 3d gore here on the site.Hope there won't be too many fatalities.
Oh, I want The Wasp to rack up a Kayako Saeki lvl death count by the end ^^
- Oct 10, 2017
- 7,250
- 19,690
Uh-oh, hopefully we just have enough lewds between! Which one is fun and which is just a day at the office is of course up for subjective interpretations
- Aug 24, 2018
- 1,977
- 1,302
One thing I noticed about the image in the bathroom was that it looked more like she'd been there a while, and not just murdered. The reason I think that is that there was no blood running from the shoulder to the floor. The image in itself was awesome, top notch quality. The circumstances and timeline just didn't match the image.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
- Mar 25, 2019
- 3,417
- 4,611
Hmmm.... i waited and thought something far more kinky will happen... sadly not the case atm but i want to sum it up bit since thats what bro's do:
Pros:
- still music
- the story is creepy, good and got really horror the last scenes before end of the update which is what i thought would happen so the horror tag is really well placed
- i see now tha the big-boob-tag is not meant for the MC Mel but for other girls which is kinda sad since i still would love to see Mel with bigger tits (and maybe even a bit taller imo)
- the outfits are nice
- the guys are well placed and nicely creepy and old most of the time
- the guys fantasies are really nice
- its nice you can make boobs and butts bigger during the game but
- path-choises not only for MC but other girls too!
Cons:
- why do the curviest girls have to have creepy clown faces? i also don't want personally that Amy's face and skin color change...
- Klaudia is HOT and i personally like her hairstyle with the ponytail and darker colour i hope she and DVA have some fun time and i can decide paths for her too
- why can't Mel have all her looks with her nice face and skin color but curves like Klaudia or at least tits like Steph? why Steph and Klaudia can change their hairstyles at least 1 time but Mel and other girls can't?
- still no sex
Others:
- sad that tattoogirl had to die, cause she looked nice - except for her tattoos. but the story and plot needs it it seems
- i hope we see Mel in that office and maid outfit and that she rides Geralds and Liam Strongs cocks good
- more kinky choices with Amy and Klaudia pls
- don't let Amy look like the girl who watched her in the mirror witht he pink dress. this is really too much i just want bigger boobs and butts *sadface*
- give Klaudia a hetero route aswell pls. not only lesbian stuff! and i think the curely hair look the worst on her (my honest opinion) this would be extremely nice and if it has to be with the Diva route then it shell be it! xD
- i like how the hedgehog protects her :3
-> PLEASE don't let this turn to your other game where nearly every girl looks like a plastic-surgery accident with joker genes. PLEASE! even big tits won't help here out xD
keep it up
Pros:
- still music
- the story is creepy, good and got really horror the last scenes before end of the update which is what i thought would happen so the horror tag is really well placed
- i see now tha the big-boob-tag is not meant for the MC Mel but for other girls which is kinda sad since i still would love to see Mel with bigger tits (and maybe even a bit taller imo)
- the outfits are nice
- the guys are well placed and nicely creepy and old most of the time
- the guys fantasies are really nice
- its nice you can make boobs and butts bigger during the game but
- path-choises not only for MC but other girls too!
Cons:
- why do the curviest girls have to have creepy clown faces? i also don't want personally that Amy's face and skin color change...
- Klaudia is HOT and i personally like her hairstyle with the ponytail and darker colour i hope she and DVA have some fun time and i can decide paths for her too
- why can't Mel have all her looks with her nice face and skin color but curves like Klaudia or at least tits like Steph? why Steph and Klaudia can change their hairstyles at least 1 time but Mel and other girls can't?
- still no sex
Others:
- sad that tattoogirl had to die, cause she looked nice - except for her tattoos. but the story and plot needs it it seems
- i hope we see Mel in that office and maid outfit and that she rides Geralds and Liam Strongs cocks good
- more kinky choices with Amy and Klaudia pls
- don't let Amy look like the girl who watched her in the mirror witht he pink dress. this is really too much i just want bigger boobs and butts *sadface*
- give Klaudia a hetero route aswell pls. not only lesbian stuff! and i think the curely hair look the worst on her (my honest opinion) this would be extremely nice and if it has to be with the Diva route then it shell be it! xD
- i like how the hedgehog protects her :3
-> PLEASE don't let this turn to your other game where nearly every girl looks like a plastic-surgery accident with joker genes. PLEASE! even big tits won't help here out xD
keep it up
- Jan 10, 2019
- 980
- 683
