I just played the game and am impressed. Quirky and dark.
Good art.
I made a quick spelling correction. It's not much. I hope
DiscipleOfVirginia is cool with it.
I'm just trying to give back to the people who bring their creations to us.
I like doing this with games from foreign DEVs. It's interesting to see the differences in writing styles.
Common things I see for corrections are.
Calling men's underwear, panties, taking a shower when the character is obviously taking a bath. Also, like using, Him, He when meaning Her, She.
Saying cloths instead of clothes. And overusing words like really, but, just, and very good.
Not using letters Like ' i ' as uppercase when needed. I know the English language is full of contradictions and exceptions.
But that's what makes life interesting, right?