Not a bad start at all. The plot seems interesting, at least what was revealed or hinted at, and did a good job of building suspense. The dialogue could use a bit of work, but overall it wasn't that bad. The renders were nicely done and I can't argue with the other posters commenting on that perfect butt. Looking forward to see where this goes.
Not really a spoiler, but I don't want to let a potential plot point out. I'll bet that 3d printer is going to be used to make something a body. Course at this stage that is wild speculation, but it is the first thing that came to mind.