Pr0GamerJohnny

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So it's not surprising, that Alison and Jeremy as well for that matter, is getting mixed messages from Ian about what he really wants.
To be fair to Jeremy,
Blah blah blah insert Jeremy overtime PR.

This game's core theme/fetish is cheating, sluttiness, and bullying. Yes, there are others paths and emotions, but you'd be blind to not see that's where the dev's main passions are. To serve that end, Jeremy is a plot device. He needs to be close to Ian (introduced as a friend), so when he sleeps with those in Ian's inner circle, the player gets a sense of betrayal/backstabbing and weightiness to cheating.

This is all by design.
 

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Welp I bit the bullet and subbed. I'm feeling generous since its around Christmas. So Ho Ho Here.


Our Red String Chapter 12 (Tournament update) BETA Release!

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Here's the Beta for Chapter 12's tournament update! Major bugs from the Alpha have been fixed, some additional dialogue pertaining to the Cherry/Holly routes has been added, plus a new Stalkfap scene and a small expansion to one of the sex scenes. The Full release will expand on another scene from Chapter 11.
This part of Chapter 12 focuses on the MMA tournament, while trying to advance some plotlines with character relationships. You might also find a particularly intense and maybe unexpected scene if you're on a certain path...
I had to go back and fix somewhat of a plothole regarding the Cindy love path: turns out Ian hadn't yet broken up with Lena and/or Alison even though he said he would, and as I was writing this chapter, I realized adding those event now would feel out of place. A quick replay of Chapter 11 might be needed to avoid possible bugs. I've also tweaked some "kickboxing" requirements that apparently made impossible to get to the master level during chapter 11, did you encounter this problem?
I also took the opportunity to tweak Seymour's scene in this last chapter, and add something I had in my mind but wasn't able to include. I wanted to save it for later, but it made so much sense to include it in this scene, and I had to.

Regarding the tournament itself; I knew I wanted to create a narrative-driven fighting system since before starting ORS, that's why I included the MMA training concept right from the start. I know it's not really integral to the plot of an erotic game, and some of you will skip entirely and wish I hadn't devoted the time I did (because, in the end, I made it way more complicated than I probably should).
But for those who try it, I hope you enjoy it; some tweaking and balancing is probably still needed, and I'm not entirely sure how easy it is to win or lose. I've tested it quite a lot and I believe it works as intended; it's been a real head-ache to build but I also had quite a lot of fun, so it's a side-quest I enjoyed and I hope the effort put into it translates into something fun and enjoyable for players too.
Thanks for sharing. I have a question. Will there be an option for Ed and Lena in the future? Can you give me an answer?
 

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I found a bug where Lena deleted her Stalkfap even though Ian didn't encourage her to
It has nothing to do with Ian's opinion, Lena potentially closes her Stalkfap on request from Seymour, since it's a breach of their contract (this happens in Ch.11 as a recent addition)

In fact, there's even a text variant for Ian who didn't mind Lena's Stalkfap, where he's quite baffled she'd do that.
 

Andrea9999

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Maybe she do it for the contract with Seymour?
I found a bug where Lena deleted her Stalkfap even though Ian didn't encourage her to
I recall Seymour asking her to do so on account of it being crude. Despite so many people's negs on Seymour, he does have Lena on the proverbial pedestal.

Well..why not? Everyone has their own tastes, I would love to see her on a leash at the feet of Ian and Lena
The picture you paint is incongruous. I can visualize the picture only with Ivy holding the leash. But of course, remember that I am the Seymourophile in this thread.
 

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I recall Seymour asking her to do so on account of it being crude. Despite so many people's negs on Seymour, he does have Lena on the proverbial pedestal.


The picture you paint is incongruous. I can visualize the picture only with Ivy holding the leash. But of course, remember that I am the Seymourophile in this thread.
How strange I don't see her on a pedestal when I see Seymour and Lena together what I see is him educating his new pet as his dominant would do with his submissive, am I wrong or do I let one of my fantasies take over me? :unsure:
 
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Sethmsf

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I recall Seymour asking her to do so on account of it being crude. Despite so many people's negs on Seymour, he does have Lena on the proverbial pedestal.


The picture you paint is incongruous. I can visualize the picture only with Ivy holding the leash. But of course, remember that I am the Seymourophile in this thread.
Ivy likes strong men who tame her, like when Ian subdues her by teaching her to fight. Oh come on, Seymour blacklisted Lena and blackmailed her
 

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Ivy likes strong men who tame her, like when Ian subdues her by teaching her to fight. Oh come on, Seymour blacklisted Lena and blackmailed her
How strange I don't see her on a pedestal when I see Seymour and Lena together what I see is him educating his new pet as his dominant would do with his submissive, am I wrong or do I let one of my fantasies take over me? :unsure:
Sethmsf:
While it is implied that Seymour prevented others from hiring Lena, because I always had Lena positive towards Seymour, it was never made explicit. In a phone call with Seymour right after the others declined to work with her, the subject never came up; Lena willingly met with Seymour and went along with the submission process willingly...(and aside to Leongren: people often worship their subservient pets). In my route Seymour is very nice to Lena, solicitous of her family problems and eager to help her mother with her health problems. Sethmsf, you can live in the universe you built and I will live in mine.
 

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Ivy likes strong men who tame her, like when Ian subdues her by teaching her to fight. Oh come on, Seymour blacklisted Lena and blackmailed her
Who wouldn't want that scene of Ivy and Ian fighting to have ended with the two of them having sex in the showers, would it be like a second round and at the end Ian and Ivy would take a selfie to send to Jeremy? :unsure:
 

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Sethmsf:
While it is implied that Seymour prevented others from hiring Lena, because I always had Lena positive towards Seymour, it was never made explicit. In a phone call with Seymour right after the others declined to work with her, the subject never came up; Lena willingly met with Seymour and went along with the submission process willingly...(and aside to Leongren: people often worship their subservient pets). In my route Seymour is very nice to Lena, solicitous of her family problems and eager to help her mother with her health problems. Sethmsf, you can live in the universe you built and I will live in mine.
I apologize if I offended you in any way, you know I like you and I like reading your posts, are we okay?
What I learned is that you do not adore the person you train but the version that you create from them, basically you adore your own work (something narcissistic if you ask me) and when training progresses a dependency is created on both of you for wanting subduing her and her for wanting to be subdued, what do you think? :unsure:
 
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Sethmsf:
While it is implied that Seymour prevented others from hiring Lena, because I always had Lena positive towards Seymour, it was never made explicit. In a phone call with Seymour right after the others declined to work with her, the subject never came up; Lena willingly met with Seymour and went along with the submission process willingly...(and aside to Leongren: people often worship their subservient pets). In my route Seymour is very nice to Lena, solicitous of her family problems and eager to help her mother with her health problems. Sethmsf, you can live in the universe you built and I will live in mine.
If you tell him that you are not interested in his proposal, he tells you loud and clear that no one will hire Lena, he names Dany, he names the art gallery and finally he even names the Wildcats if you have done the photoshoot with Axel, after that he offer again the business (this happen even if you have a good relationship personal and laboral with him) and yes We can each live in our own universe and enjoy it :)
 

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If you tell him that you are not interested in his proposal, he tells you loud and clear that no one will hire Lena, he names Dany, he names the art gallery and finally he even names the Wildcats if you have done the photoshoot with Axel, after that he returns to you again. to offer the business and yes We can each live in our own universe and enjoy it :)
Yes...I saw that universe.... (you know....save the choice...investigate the route you doubt you will take...reload the choice....later overwrite the less favored route). No disrespect....but your universe is filled with antiparticles....difficult to breathe! (I do have a separate Axel photoshoot with Agnes and Seymour saved...it could be promising...but still with Seymour benevolence.)
 

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Yes...I saw that universe.... (you know....save the choice...investigate the route you doubt you will take...reload the choice....later overwrite the less favored route). No disrespect....but your universe is filled with antiparticles....difficult to breathe!
Don't offend me, I have my own opinion of yours and I think it's great that everyone has their own, mine seems as perfect to me as yours does to you, but that Seymour blacklisted Lena happens in all universes, like she has broken up with Axel or that she knows about music
 

Andrea9999

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I apologize if I offended you in any way, you know I like you and I like reading your posts, are we okay?
What I learned is that you do not adore the person you train but the version that you create from them, basically you adore your own work (something narcissistic if you ask me) and when training progresses a dependency is created on both of you for wanting subduing her and her for wanting to be subdued, what do you think? :unsure:
This is an anonymous porn site for relaxation....taking offense at anything makes no sense! Further even the people who do get in each other's face never do it obnoxiously except perhaps a bit for SerHawkes but he HAS to because that is his function (like Nomad from that old 60''s Star Trek episode).

But to get to your comment....and what I am about to say I believe is amplified by the beta version i just did last night; the dialogs have changed...Seymour is extremely complimentary of Lena to her face and not just of her looks...at her singing debut he calls the "full package" ..... constantly commenting on his luck at finding her and praising her looks and her wits (I have her intelligence up to 7 and climbing). That is while he is introducing her to the erotic darker world of submission, I think EK has more sinister handlers in line for Lena; probably Agnes for one. I think that is the only way EK will realize her description of the game as including light BDSM; Seymour will probably be too gentle and kindly to implement that.....er....in my universe.
 
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Don't offend me, I have my own opinion of yours and I think it's great that everyone has their own, mine seems as perfect to me as yours does to you, but that Seymour blacklisted Lena happens in all universes, like she has broken up with Axel or that she knows about music
no offense was meant...and it is still a mystery to scientists as to why our universe has so little antimatter.
 

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no offense was meant...and it is still a mystery to scientists as to why our universe has so little antimatter.
My English is pretty bad, what I wanted to tell you is that I didn't feel like you had offended me, I don't know you well and we haven't talked much, but I don't see you as a person who tries to do it, so I never take your comments as something bad and I hope you don't mine either :)
 
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