VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch. 4 Up 4 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[MoarDakka123]

No, I did mean Warren.

Sorry.

Well that's too bad, because I'm not done yet!

EXHIBIT C!



Eyes: narrow and blue! Could be the short-haired blonde in the first post!

Aaaand the redhead in the first post, I have no clue. Sure looks like the "house girls" are previous Carnations, though (and would make sense, if they're all there due to debt or something like that).

... Unless the redhead with appropriately-coloured eyes is Hana, in which case shame on you, TD (and August)!

EDIT This is what a severe lack of sleep can do to you, people...

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

No, I did mean Warren.

Sorry.

And i saw him there but ignored because i thought you were talking about the women.

 

[name]

so what kind of scenes do you guys want to see moving forward? like i said earlier i want Rosalind and Lucy to meet because of how similar yet different they are and id really like a scene with the two of them too. like everyone else i also want more stuff with Hana and Mina but thats probably a little further down the road

 

[MoarDakka123]

so what kind of scenes do you guys want to see moving forward? like i said earlier i want Rosemary and Lucy to meet because of how similar yet different they are and id really like a scene with the two of them too. like everyone else i also want more stuff with Hana and Mina but thats probably a little further down the road

You know, I've never thought about the parallels between Rosalind and Lucy, but now that you mention it I would like to see a heart-to-heart between them.

Other than that, my vote goes to Dalia and Harper. As of the latest update, Harper seems like good company in the fun/wild sort of way, while I'm just generally interested in Dalia. Besides her being very pretty, I'm interested in how someone as sensitive as her (even described as "as ball of nervous energy") ended up as "head house girl".

 

[ename144]

You know, I've never thought about the parallels between Rosalind and Lucy, but now that you mention it I would like to see a heart-to-heart between them.

Other than that, my vote goes to Dalia and Harper. As of the latest update, Harper seems like good company in the fun/wild sort of way, while I'm just generally interested in Dalia. Besides her being very pretty, I'm interested in how someone as sensitive as her (even described as "as ball of nervous energy") ended up as "head house girl".

Yes, I'd very much like to learn Dalia's backstory. I'm not as interested in Harper, but it would be fun to interact with her more often just to see how her attitude towards the MC changes depending on his actions.

Personally, the scene I most want is a chance to learn what makes Felicia tick even if we aren't on her path. Now that we've seen Kathleen's birthday present, I feel like Felicia is the most inscrutable of the girls. So any insight would be welcome. Her laser focus on no-strings sex did not make a good first impression, and I declined a second date because I just don't think she's ever going to be my type. But I would still like to know more about her, so I'm hoping that will be possible without having to rely on my knowledge of other runs.

Other than that, I think I'm already on record saying I'd love to see Hana and Victoria interact, so let's go with that as a fallback. Start with them gushing about obscure movies, end with a tearful heart to heart about how fucked up the world is, and weave some brutal teasing of the MC into the middle. What's not to love?

 

[Mograx]

Finally finished to current content, almost all in one play through. Jesus what a fucking ride.

That scene with Veronica domming Kath was the hottest fucking thing I've seen in anything ever.

 

[duchbk123]

Mina and Hana is so cute, they seem like opposite at each other. While Mina is purely innocent, 100% cute, kind hearted with everyone, just like a 18 year old girl ready to explore a whole new life. Hana is experience, a broken glass through a lot of pain, a fallen angel who take a lot of suffer at very young age. Hana is combine of cute and cool, she cute in her special way, sarcasm everytime she like and being embarrassed when we make a right move

 

[AbaddonR]

Silly question here.. Is all the content on here or the previous chapters elsewhere?

Thank you!

 

[sunaboz]

Silly question here.. Is all the content on here or the previous chapters elsewhere?

Thank you!

Everything is included, it's just a simple way to name a file rather than v. 0.4. Otherwise you would have links to previous chapters. One of many advantages of PC is that it doesn't weigh that much when compared to DAZ titles (I'm looking at you Being a DIK) so you can easily download everything in one go, even with shitty bandwidth.

 

[-Dreamer-]

There is a familiar face among them.

Kathleen )

 

[sunaboz]

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Veronica looks great in this picture, can't wait for game release.

 

[hakarlman]

Is there anyway to build a romantic attachment to one of the girls, have her dominate you, then watch her get fucked by tons of guys?

Can you only play as a dominant MC in this BDSM game?

It says the game has female domination, but I haven't seen any yet. The women are all too nice, it's a snooze fest. This is the game's version of female domination:
- Woman: "I ORDER YOU TO BE DOMINANT OVER THE WOMEN."
- MC: "YES MAM."
- **MC dominantly fucks all the women.**
EDIT: turns out the female domination tag is in reference to the NPC women in game who like to be dominated by other females. The f95zone tagging system can be highly inaccurate and misleading due to it's imprecision.

Fuck, this game has so many positive reviews. Why am I so bored. I'll try it again in a few days.

I was hoping the mother would be working at the sex club as a prostitute. Why the fuck was she even shown in the beginning? Stupid game.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Is there anyway to build a romantic attachment to one of the girls, have her dominate you, then watch her get fucked by tons of guys?

Can you only play as a dominant MC in this BDSM game?

It says the game has female domination, but I haven't seen any yet. The women are all too nice, it's a snooze fest. This is the game's version of female domination:
- Woman: "I ORDER YOU TO BE DOMINANT OVER THE WOMEN."
- MC: "YES MAM."
- **MC dominantly fucks all the women.**

Fuck, this game has so many positive reviews. Why am I so bored. I'll try it again in a few days.

I was hoping the mother would be working at the sex club as a prostitute. Why the fuck was she even shown in the beginning? Stupid game.

Not true. Rosalind clearly has masochist tendencies since she enjoys feeling pain and Felicia likes when her partner takes charge but Veronica and Kathleen are quite dominant when it comes to sex, their scenes and interactions with other characters show that.

Also Victoria is Edwin's moral compass that he uses to keep his sadistic tendecies in check. Said tendencies you can choose to feed or not during the course of the game.

Frankly speaking this game is a gem. It is not often you see one with such a verisimilar aproach to S&M and corruption (sexual). Most games confuse it with the creepy/rapist aproach and everyone already starts corrupt or fall to debauchery after their first time having sex.

 

[hakarlman]

Not true. Rosalind clearly has masochist tendencies since she enjoys feeling pain and Felicia likes when her partner takes charge but Veronica and Kathleen are quite dominant when it comes to sex, their scenes and interactions with other characters show that.

OH, so the tag Female Domination refers to the NPC. The women NPC enjoy female domination. I thought the female domination tag meant the MC could be dominated by the women. Got my hopes up, lol.

The tags on f95zone need to evolve to the next level. F95zone is HUGE now, they should really make a better tagging system. Something more intricate and precise.

No biggie. Thanks for the clarification.

Also Victoria is Edwin's moral compass that he uses to keep his sadistic tendecies in check. Said tendencies you can choose to feed or not during the course of the game.

It's not believable that Edwin can be dominant nor sadistic, given how he looks. The character model used for the MC makes him look like a complete and total chump, I thought he'd be a total masochist. He'd make a much better submissive with how he looks.

Frankly speaking this game is a gem. It is not often you see one with such a verisimilar aproach to S&M and corruption (sexual). Most games confuse it with the creepy/rapist aproach and everyone already starts corrupt or fall to debauchery after their first time having sex.

I love harem games with a sadistic MC, but this game is way too vanilla.

The organized BDSM is VERY boring. It's too controlled, too vanilla. Exhibitionism without emotional attachment is empty imo.

I was hoping we'd get control of the club and could start pimping out the women immediately, but you're not really in control, neither are you dominant, nor submissive. It's just meh.

I think the massive amount of dialogue bored me to death and ruined any eroticism. The writing is good, but not in a pornographic way. It would be better for a non-porn game.

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

OH, so the tag Female Domination refers to the NPC. The women NPC enjoy female domination. I thought the female domination tag meant the MC could be dominated by the women. Got my hopes up, lol.

The tags on f95zone need to evolve to the next level. F95zone is HUGE now, they should really make a better tagging system. Something more intricate and precise.

No biggie. Thanks for the clarification.



It's not believable that Edwin can be dominant nor sadistic, given how he looks. The character model used for the MC makes him look like a complete and total chump, I thought he'd be a total masochist. He'd make a much better submissive with how he looks.

From this post I am going to guess you didn't played the game or at least didn't really get very far on it. You wouldn't be saying that otherwise considering all the interactions between Veronica and Kathleen with Edwin.

I love harem games with a sadistic MC, but this game is way too vanilla.

The organized BDSM is VERY boring. It's too controlled, too vanilla. Exhibitionism without emotional attachment is empty imo.

I was hoping we'd get control of the club and could start pimping out the women immediately, but you're not really in control, neither are you dominant, nor submissive. It's just meh.

I think the massive amount of dialogue bored me to death and ruined any eroticism. The writing is good, but not in a pornographic way. It would be better for a non-porn game.

Calling this game vanilla is a huge exageration.

As i said this game takes a more verisimilar approach to S&M games and corruption by focusing on the story and character development. It is not a harem game nor is a mindless fuckfest, thank the Devs for that. So Edwin can't simply enter the place and take if over from a trio of rich and smart criminals.

Also disagree about the writing. Its combination with the beautiful and sexy renders is one of the strong points of the game.

 

[GIL3D]

OH, so the tag Female Domination refers to the NPC. The women NPC enjoy female domination. I thought the female domination tag meant the MC could be dominated by the women. Got my hopes up, lol.

The tags on f95zone need to evolve to the next level. F95zone is HUGE now, they should really make a better tagging system. Something more intricate and precise.

No biggie. Thanks for the clarification.



It's not believable that Edwin can be dominant nor sadistic, given how he looks. The character model used for the MC makes him look like a complete and total chump, I thought he'd be a total masochist. He'd make a much better submissive with how he looks.



I love harem games with a sadistic MC, but this game is way too vanilla.

The organized BDSM is VERY boring. It's too controlled, too vanilla. Exhibitionism without emotional attachment is empty imo.

I was hoping we'd get control of the club and could start pimping out the women immediately, but you're not really in control, neither are you dominant, nor submissive. It's just meh.

I think the massive amount of dialogue bored me to death and ruined any eroticism. The writing is good, but not in a pornographic way. It would be better for a non-porn game.

Truth be told, some of the most dangerous people I've met in my life looked completely harmless. Never judge a book by its cover, but fair enough.

As someone who is very selective and specific with his ideal kinks and sexual scenarios, I understand how frustrating it is to just not get the itch scratched. This work is a mix of both TD's and my own preferences, I'm afraid it can't be helped if you just find them tame or unenjoyable.

Thank you for taking the time to give us a try.

 

[Construct]

It's not believable that Edwin can be dominant nor sadistic, given how he looks. The character model used for the MC makes him look like a complete and total chump, I thought he'd be a total masochist. He'd make a much better submissive with how he looks.

I mean... looks can be deceiving. Out of curiosity though, what does a dominant or sadistic person look to you?

I think the massive amount of dialogue bored me to death and ruined any eroticism.

I‘m gonna go ahead and say, this game isn‘t for you then, because I very much doubt that the writing will change much, since it‘s one of the things that brought many good reviews for this game.

 

[Turret]

Truth be told, some of the most dangerous people I've met in my life looked completely harmless. Never judge a book by its cover, but fair enough.

That is definitely true, I could tell a similar story from my life. And that looks can deceive is not only true for dangerous persons, but there is not for nothing the saying about "beware the nice ones". No matter how laidback a person is, do not push their buttons until the breaking point. Especially if the person in question is normally nice and/or laidback, the results of enraging them will be decidedly not nice!

 

[TD1900]

I love harem games with a sadistic MC, but this game is way too vanilla.

I often, only half-jokingly, describe our project as vanilla. I'm happy there's someone who agrees.

The organized BDSM is VERY boring. It's too controlled, too vanilla. Exhibitionism without emotional attachment is empty imo.

You telling me you don't find bureaucracy sexy like I do?

Joke aside, to your points: voyeurism, which is what the club patrons are primarily engaged in, is detached by the nature of the act. Obviously there's caveats to that, human sexuality can't be put in a box, but the organized approach is meant to be cold and dehumanizing. To make it feel like the women are in a zoo, which is its own unique flavor of BDSM.

The exhibition side, which is where the player and the Carnations sit... well, the level of emotional attachment depends on if you actually give a damn about the characters or not. Ideally, if you sympathize and like the characters or can conceive of the tug of war between Edwin's sadistic and more conscientious side, seeing them humiliated and performing in increasingly more depraved games should elicit an emotional response - either upstairs or downstairs. If it doesn't, just consider it a failure of the writing.

 

[Mograx]

Veronica and Kathleen are quite dominant when it comes to sex, their scenes and interactions with other characters show that.

I just want to add something regarding Veronica in response to this.
Yes, she is clearly dominant. As I said earlier, the scene where she dominates Kath (another dom) relatively early on was out of this world hot. Not surprising she did though, if anyone could dom a character like Kath, it's Veronica; she's the closest thing to a ginger she-hulk you'll ever find on this site (or anywhere frankly)

To my point: Which is why I found the particular photo shoot scene with her later in the game so interesting. If she has enough H-points, MC can shove his fingers in her mouth. One might assume MC's ability to comprehend consequences is severely lacking upon doing so, but the option is there.

And Veronica's response is.. not what you'd expect. I love that for the most part, her reaction is subtle (already something foreign to any descriptor of the woman.) Her face is flushed and she's making sounds that.. well, aren't angry. In fact, it seems she's enjoying it, albeit briefly. Like I said, it's not much, but the fact she isn't ripping your arms off and beating you to death with them is a small but much appreciated development of her character if the player has gone this direction with her.

I don't even like buff woman, at all, and here I am writing a descriptive post about her. And she's just one character I'm not even all that into.

That speaks volumes of the care the dev(s) have put into creating a living breathing world for us to immerse ourselves into.