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can you describe what you find feminine about her?


and agree. if ian found out as well about victorias porn career that would have messed with him
How to say it?? Her soft side, when she stop her tough act, her blushed face when you do something she didnt expect, how weak she is to pleasure, but how she is still fighting even in the middle of it, but if you really want me to say what i like the most, her Face, god she has the most beautiful face of them all, and in a game with Hana and Mina that is a fucking giant bar.
 

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How to say it?? Her soft side, when she stop her tough act, her blushed face when you do something she didnt expect, how weak she is to pleasure, but how she is still fighting even in the middle of it, but if you really want me to say what i like the most, her Face, god she has the most beautiful face of them all, and in a game with Hana and Mina that is a fucking giant bar.
She's definitely very expressive, and there is a gracefulness she possesses but she doesn't lead with it. Even though I find redheads attractive, I don't find her as attractive as others... maybe it's the combo of red hair with the muscles I'm not feeling??... because I would totally let pop my head like a zit.

Everyone needs a stan. It's wholesome and I don't think that's a bad thing here. I hope you meet your irl Veronica. :D
 
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How to say it?? Her soft side, when she stop her tough act, her blushed face when you do something she didnt expect, how weak she is to pleasure, but how she is still fighting even in the middle of it, but if you really want me to say what i like the most, her Face, god she has the most beautiful face of them all, and in a game with Hana and Mina that is a fucking giant bar.
Physically she is the least attractive to me. But I really like the way she is written and she has grown on me. Based on the poll on patreon she seems to be the most popular carnation as well (rose is at 11%, felicia at 14% and veronica at 16%) and I think there is a good reason for it.
 
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can someone explain to me how to make the girls tie in the second week competition?

I've tried all the alternatives and it still doesn't work.
Just cheat it, it's a long ass week to replay and if you you're off by just one point you have to go back and replay the whole thing until you get it right.
 

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Good news everyone, work on Part 3 is officially underway!
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Sounds pretty exciting! Numbers wise, our intrepid devs have turned out 133 statics and 5494 words in 5 days - an average of ~186 statics, 0.0 animations, and 7690 words per week. Here are the shiny, new charts:
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Obviously GIL is going to have to work on that animation rate:p, but otherwise we seem to be off to a good start. The real question is how big the update will be, and that could go a lot of different ways. I'm very curious to see how the new productivity goals will play out, even more interested in the big story developments, and especially interested to see what Veronica's path has in store. Lots to look forward to, even if it's too soon to guess on when we might finally see it. :)
 

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The public version is out now:



Probably not worth redownloading the update, but I wanted to note here that we revised Ch4Up2's concluding scene to be player driven. This is mostly an RP and flavor thing; You won't miss anything critical by not going back and replaying it.
Sorry I haven't been around as much lately; I finally bought a copy of Wrath of the Righteous to scratch my non-VN gaming itch, and the thing is massive. It's sucked up nearly all my free time, and I'm still not quite done. Still, I did manage to play the Public version of PC.

Overall, I think the changes to the ending scene were very well done. I didn't have a big issue with the original version; Edwin has consistently been portrayed as private and a bit temperamental no matter how we play him, so I could see why Abel's visit would provoke an unusually sharp response. But I think the new version smooths out some of the jarring transitions without sacrificing the MC's annoyance at the way Abel is acting. The additional details in Abel's still vague warning give us a little more to speculate on, too, which is appreciated.

My only complaint is that it feels like the least confrontational options should be gated by the 'Governor' trait; it rarely gets any attention and using it here would help highlight that the MC is unusually pissed off by the situation. Of course that would almost certainly require revising the scene even further to add some sort of bonus (since people will expect something more than a dialog change once game mechanics get involved), which is probably more trouble than it's worth. Just something to think about for next time, I suppose.

At any rate, good work, TD! Thanks for listening to the feedback in a measured way. (y)


to those of you who like veronica: is it because you are into femdom or is there something else you find sexually appealing about her?

is there someone who doesn't like femdom and dominant masculine women, but still finds veronica sexually attractive?
I don't know if it's specifically sexual, but I definitely find Veronica attractive. She has a lovely face. Her large body makes the game's consistently oversized breasts look a little less egregious on her. I really like the deliberate, rational approach she takes to the contest (even if her ultimate reasons for participating are blatantly irrational). Her interactions with the MC on the few occasions where they can hang out without his job overshadowing things have been a delight. Above all, though, I just appreciate her willingness to call Kathleen out on her bullshit; we can score +2 points with Veronica if we refuse to ogle the Carnations at the start of Week 1 - what's not to love? :love:

Granted, Veronica's path has been more about friendship than romance or sex so far so it's entirely possible I'll be disappointed as we learn more. I'm very much not a fan of 'domination' by either party when it comes to sex, and Veronica seems to lean that way from what from the little we've seen. And I get the impression she's a much bigger fan of lesbianism than I am. There are definitely some potential issues here. But I like her enough I have to at least give it a try and see where her path leads.
 

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Veronica is most direct/honest with MC, I can see them in a stip bar together discussing some girl as good buddies but hardly can imagine any romance.

Rosalind is not someone You can trust enough for real romance, I see no future in such relationships, she may somewhat like MC or feel attracted in sexual way but... it's more like prostitute/Best client relationship.

Felicia... Felicia... I want to believe there is "something", FWB for sure, no problems with that, something bigger... I do really want to believe but...

Kathleen - no comments

There are Black Tails and Blonde Tails (meh...) for romance, we'll break our hearts if hope for someone else (for now) IMO
 

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Good news everyone, work on Part 3 is officially underway!
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Sounds pretty exciting! Numbers wise, our intrepid devs have turned out 133 statics and 5494 words in 5 days - an average of ~186 statics, 0.0 animations, and 7690 words per week. Here are the shiny, new charts:
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Obviously GIL is going to have to work on that animation rate:p, but otherwise we seem to be off to a good start. The real question is how big the update will be, and that could go a lot of different ways. I'm very curious to see how the new productivity goals will play out, even more interested in the big story developments, and especially interested to see what Veronica's path has in store. Lots to look forward to, even if it's too soon to guess on when we might finally see it. :)
Oh nice to have it confirmed as a Veronica update. Sure look forward to this one. :p
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I played it again with the new update and the truth is that I didn't get tired of it, maybe because of my preferences I took the route of "GF Hana", but I am doubtful about how the relationships with the others will end, because to a certain point I understand that beyond girlfriend type relationships I could only think about hana and mina, but I have my doubts about how the author will progress with the relationships of the others, anyway very good update and I look forward to the next update.
But would it be wrong to have a relationship with Hana and then think about building a harem with the others? (Yes, it's a stupid question, but I wanted to express it).
 
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i don t know if i am the only one, but i always treat veronica the hardest because i find her so damn ugly and weird... xD does anybody thinks that, that woman is the worst of all the game? such a bad idea to create her in the first place... im not into man-woman
I mean to each their own. I personally am not into really muscular woman either, but plenty of people are. Be thankful she's not a futanari, or you'd really be in trouble. :KEK:
 

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I mean to each their own. I personally am not into really muscular woman either, but plenty of people are. Be thankful she's not a futanari, or you'd really be in trouble. :KEK:
Personally, she is my fav of the three girls, so to each of their of own I guess... you don't need to be insecure in your own masculinity over a a fictional character
For me, Veronica is last among the 3 Carnations, but that is because of some of her character traits, not her looks. For example, ruining your marriage in part for a gym that even her old trainer did not want to burden her with in the beginning, is a big hmmm? There is an unhealthy stubbornness in Veronica. You should not fold at the slightest wind blowing in your face, yes, but we got several strong hints that Veronica is overly stubborn to the point of not seeing when to think things over.
Being "good advice resistant" is not a good trait, neither in business nor in provate life.
 

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I don't know...for me Rosalind is the most shifty woman in the game that isn't called Kathleen or Sophia.
Her circumstances are the most dire among the three and necessitate her being shifty as a consequence.
That aside, she's my favourite because she's very attractive and her role keeps reminding Edwin of his mother's past.

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I played it again with the new update and the truth is that I didn't get tired of it, maybe because of my preferences I took the route of "GF Hana", but I am doubtful about how the relationships with the others will end, because to a certain point I understand that beyond girlfriend type relationships I could only think about hana and mina, but I have my doubts about how the author will progress with the relationships of the others, anyway very good update and I look forward to the next update.
But would it be wrong to have a relationship with Hana and then think about building a harem with the others? (Yes, it's a stupid question, but I wanted to express it).
I find it strange that you can't be transparent with Hana or take a rain-check on the girlfriend thing since you could do so with Mina.
 
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