I enjoy the cheating, NTR/cuckold, and female domination aspects of this story but it just feels like the pacing is off, and it's a little too railroaded.
My concern is just where exactly this goes from here, pretty early in and your girlfriend has fucked two guys, sucked two other guys off without any real choice, pressure or remorse, and you're completely oblivious about it.
That being said I do love the artwork, and the scenes are super hot. I especially liked the sex scene in the toilet for as much as I think it came too quickly, I was kinda hoping something would be done with the condom slipping off inside her.
Maybe she goes home and has the choice to sober up in the shower (and find the condom inside her but not leaking) or drunkenly masturbate with a dildo/vibrator and find it much deeper inside her the next morning. Would make for a nice regret/dilemma choice. Handle it yourself sneakily (and maybe be busted by someone you know in line at the pharmacy/planned parenthood getting the morning after pill) or have sex with your boyfriend and get him to cum inside you to make an excuse for him to go pick up plan B for you (added kinkyness of unknown sloppy seconds, and even the option of letting him go down on you to warm you up first would be hot too)
