Loving the game, and hey if the dev is here I just have a couple of small critiques, because that's what I do. And they are small, people here have seen my overlong rants on other games.
1. I do feel like oddly enough the relationship with the ex moves way to fast (I know right, of all the ones to do so) considering the history of the MC as a cokehead. I think it would be an easy as hell fix of saying this is the first time he's seen her since they ran into each other in Illinois and ended up boning and hitting it off again. She could have been there for a nursing home conference or some shit. You do that, and BAM the really fast return into her life is fixed.
2. The last scene with your sister and Elly just kind of ends. I mean 2 hours pass. What happened, I would really like to see everyone's reaction at the end. It's such a great scene, that I hate to see it apparently cut short like that. We really need a bit of the aftermath, was it awkward? Was it not? Just cutting from there to you in bed with Emily just feels weird.