4.00 star(s) 108 Votes

arms99

Well-Known Member
May 11, 2018
1,031
2,662
You always have to be consistent. Wit Paris, there was talk about having unprotected sex and concern about coming inside her because she might get pregnant.

Can just magically make the condom disappear with Miracle. And it wouldn't be a realistic to just cum inside her just because you feel like it, and then get her pregnant. That's not something the main character would just do without thinking about it
Does that mean that if I go back and reject Paris the scene with Miracle changes?
 

Deleted member 1412183

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
May 15, 2019
1,725
8,214
Does that mean that if I go back and reject Paris the scene with Miracle changes?
Of course it does lol. How would Miracle catch Paris sneaking out of your room if you are not in a relationship with her?

Or maybe you meant would MC then cum inside Miracle if not having sex with Paris? No, she is a socially anxious 18 year-old about to start college. And the MC is struggling to pay the bills. See those realistic factors? He is not just going to get her pregnant without thought.

Paris was a totally different situation. She is way more mature, so the MC was not as protective and willing to risk cumming inside
 
Last edited:

arms99

Well-Known Member
May 11, 2018
1,031
2,662
Of course it does lol. How would Miracle catch Paris sneaking out of your room if you are not in a relationship with her?
Besides that dialogue of course. The last response sounded to me that MC is being extra careful after Paris pregnancy scare, so without it he would be more reckless with Miracle (no condom). Or did I misunderstand that?
 

Deleted member 1412183

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
May 15, 2019
1,725
8,214
No. But I guess you can impregnate her later.

:WaitWhat:
Besides that dialogue of course. The last response sounded to me that MC is being extra careful after Paris pregnancy scare, so without it he would be more reckless with Miracle (no condom). Or did I misunderstand that?
Oh, yeah. You can impregnate all the girls once you enter their routes
routes, I know at least one or two might be end game.

But what did the main characters say that made you think about pregnancy? I'm drawing a blank
 
  • Like
Reactions: Ghostly

Deleted member 1412183

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
May 15, 2019
1,725
8,214
Well I was imagining more of oops kind of pregnancy
Ok, guys. let me make this clear because everyone starts to go crazy when you talk about adding pregnancy.

Pregnancy will just be an add-on or endgame thing. pregnancy is not the main focus of this game or play a major factor because it will get in the way of the story for everyone besides Paris who wants to be pregnant.

Man, I might not do pregnancy anymore in the future lol. Because it looks like you have to go all and instead of it being it a small thing
 

darth_hiruma

Well-Known Member
Jan 13, 2020
1,310
2,601
But what did the main characters say that made you think about pregnancy? I'm drawing a blank
I'm also curious so I went back to that scene. I think arms99 talked about this dialog and misunderstood.
brrrrrrrrrrrrr.jpg
Ok, guys. let me make this clear because everyone starts to go crazy when you talk about adding pregnancy.

Pregnancy will just be an add-on or endgame thing. pregnancy is not the main focus of this game or play a major factor because it will get in the way of the story for everyone besides Paris who wants to be pregnant.

Man, I might not do pregnancy anymore in the future lol. Because it looks like you have to go all and instead of it being it a small thing
You were the Chosen One! It was said that you would add pregnancy, not remove them. bring balance to the preggo, not leave it in darkness.

Jokes aside, I understand. I'm good with small thing and I'm sure most of preggo team ok with that. Just be clear when you gonna add pregnancy (which girl, pregnant sex scene or not).
 
Last edited:

Deleted member 1412183

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
May 15, 2019
1,725
8,214
I'm also curious so I went back to that scene. I think arms99 talked about this dialog and misunderstood.
View attachment 661932

You were the Chosen One! It was said that you would add pregnancy, not remove them. bring balance to the preggo, not leave it in darkness.

Jokes aside, I understand. I'm good with small thing and I'm sure most of preggo team ok with that. Just be clear when you gonna add pregnancy (which girl, pregnant sex scene or not).
That car scene has nothing to do with pregnancy. It is just talking about taking her virginity. Obviously he's not thinking about getting her pregnant on her very first time.

But I can't just tell you guys all that I have planned because that game isn't done. if I'm writing a scene and I think of something else that might be better, then I will change it to make whatever is best for the story.
 

msleomac

Engaged Member
Feb 1, 2019
2,505
1,606
Ok, guys. let me make this clear because everyone starts to go crazy when you talk about adding pregnancy.

Pregnancy will just be an add-on or endgame thing. pregnancy is not the main focus of this game or play a major factor because it will get in the way of the story for everyone besides Paris who wants to be pregnant.

Man, I might not do pregnancy anymore in the future lol. Because it looks like you have to go all and instead of it being it a small thing
:LOL::LOL::LOL:. Just do what you were planning to do. I suppose you can take it as a compliment that there are so many players who feel compelled to tell you to add their fantasy to the game. Credit to your characters, visuals and game. I'm sure whatever you do everyone is still going to play :D(y)(y).

Full disclaimer - I'm a member of the harem/preg group as well but I appreciate as a game maker its your baby and creativity. I just want to say thanks for creating a game I enjoy playing. Just a thought maybe you can put a dream scene where MC sees all girls are pregnant at the same time. Makes makes the harem/preg group happy and get them off your back.

Sorry the VA didn't work out. It was a bold and different idea to enhance the game. Maybe keep what you already did and leave out the rest.
 

darth_hiruma

Well-Known Member
Jan 13, 2020
1,310
2,601
:LOL::LOL::LOL:. Just do what you were planning to do. I suppose you can take it as a compliment that there are so many players who feel compelled to tell you to add their fantasy to the game. Credit to your characters, visuals and game. I'm sure whatever you do everyone is still going to play :D(y)(y).

Full disclaimer - I'm a member of the harem/preg group as well but I appreciate as a game maker its your baby and creativity. I just want to say thanks for creating a game I enjoy playing. Just a thought maybe you can put a dream scene where MC sees all girls are pregnant at the same time. Makes makes the harem/preg group happy and get them off your back.

Sorry the VA didn't work out. It was a bold and different idea to enhance the game. Maybe keep what you already did and leave out the rest.
You can't get me off his back!!!!
 

GrammerCop

Well-Known Member
Donor
Mar 15, 2020
1,831
1,790
Yes, it's so. Sorry, man, but it's just way too unrealistic to have a harem of pregnant girls, especially when my story is a more realistic type.

And only Paris will be pregnant on the harem path, so you don't need to break up with her. Though you could just not make her pregnant either if you wanted, you wouldn't need to break up with her
I suppose the condom could break. I mean, it does happen, right?
 

Jace325

Member
Dec 27, 2019
128
280
If I may offer bit of constructive criticism, hopefully this comes off as intended, but the pacing and character development could use a bit of work. after the introduction time starts to jump around from one lewd scene to the next, and while we're told how things progress to that point its lessens the impact of the moment because we weren't shown the progression and we couldn't build that relationship for ourselves. Thus things sometimes seemed rushed or come out of the blue. Everything in the story makes logical sense given everything we've been told, but not everything makes intuitive sense what we've seen from the characters (remember the writing guideline show don't tell). I know changing this would add a lot more work but (IMO) it would really deepen the impact of events and would build a stronger bond with the reader and the characters. Part of it may just be my personal expectations/tastes for something a little slower of a burn but I think even a few scenes here and there could be a big help
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Don't get me wrong I really enjoyed the story and look forward to more.
 
4.00 star(s) 108 Votes