Ok, I've read this chapter like 3 times already and the ONE part that hurt me to my very soul was when Ophelia and Brenna were in the threesome and Ophelia says 'I was lactating at the time'... WAS!?!?!? When the hell!?!? Now fully ignoring that this is an affront to me personaly. I was under the impression that Ophelia was leaking like a broken faucet because of the hormones Hunter was slipping on everyone (like with Brenna's pubic hair going haywire), as far as I know that didn't stop, heck he was putting in more, why would it stop?
Also, wouldn't it be something that comes up? You know a little conversation of 'Huh? The plumbing in the mamas fixed itself for some reazon, hehe Who says woman can't do blue collar jobs?'
Also, a lot of the time I have handwaved the stupid actions of the characters with 'they're drugged off of their fucking rocker, I've seen people in that state doing worse.', but Flora takes the 'ok, this is too much award' with DRINKING a whine that EXPLODED right in front of her, she's never been to Sterling's house so she isn't under the influence (she didn't even taste test the reduction before she just chugged on the bottle) and she said herself that she had already made that reduction hundreds of times probably with hundreds of different wines and it exploding in front of her for the first time in the process didn't raise any red flag?
Other than that, I really liked this update, the group scenes are very good and a good show that the girls are starting to be ok with this whole 'harem' thing and showing that Nora and Kiera are kinda the end state of all this kerfafle is nice.
The place where the chapter left off feels like a great place to take the relationships to something more intimate and honest, and I hope that the antagonist story doesn't end like that.
And on a positive note, as someone that knows a 'Nacho', have Sterling tell Cath that they could name the baby 'Ignacio' so that they can call the kid 'Nacho' that's kinda how that name works, pretty sure the dev already knows considering the scene but just as an 'incase'.
Now, this proyect is too far gone to ask for this but the Dev is probably going to continue making games and I have to beg on my knees right now, please learn to constraint the scope of each chapter, even if you don't end up getting a standar size for updates at the very least have an upper limit. If this project ends up on a 'we're on chapter 15... and I might need another chapter' it means that it's been well out of hand for some time.
I'm not saying this because of wait times, I'm saying this because of burn out, the dev already said that he's been sacrificing more and more of his free time to this game and he really shouldn't, we'll probably see an ending to this game but if he continues with this mindset of 'double everything' then we'll probably not see the ending to his next work, if he even wants to make one after.
I really admire the dev, it's noticeable the improvement he's have over the chapters, he's one of the few devs I've seen here that has a knak for cinematography, he's been improving like a maniac on the lightning department and his animations have been steadily improving, it does feel jarring going back and finding those little experiments he had and then dropped in initial chapters like the chapter that has a lot of over exposed renders, the chapter where the characters blink or where he was making animatic animations for actions that didn't need a full on animated scene but could do with some movement, but dude, you've done well, finish this game, take what you've learned and just go steady with the next proyect.
Also, wouldn't it be something that comes up? You know a little conversation of 'Huh? The plumbing in the mamas fixed itself for some reazon, hehe Who says woman can't do blue collar jobs?'
Also, a lot of the time I have handwaved the stupid actions of the characters with 'they're drugged off of their fucking rocker, I've seen people in that state doing worse.', but Flora takes the 'ok, this is too much award' with DRINKING a whine that EXPLODED right in front of her, she's never been to Sterling's house so she isn't under the influence (she didn't even taste test the reduction before she just chugged on the bottle) and she said herself that she had already made that reduction hundreds of times probably with hundreds of different wines and it exploding in front of her for the first time in the process didn't raise any red flag?
Other than that, I really liked this update, the group scenes are very good and a good show that the girls are starting to be ok with this whole 'harem' thing and showing that Nora and Kiera are kinda the end state of all this kerfafle is nice.
The place where the chapter left off feels like a great place to take the relationships to something more intimate and honest, and I hope that the antagonist story doesn't end like that.
And on a positive note, as someone that knows a 'Nacho', have Sterling tell Cath that they could name the baby 'Ignacio' so that they can call the kid 'Nacho' that's kinda how that name works, pretty sure the dev already knows considering the scene but just as an 'incase'.
Now, this proyect is too far gone to ask for this but the Dev is probably going to continue making games and I have to beg on my knees right now, please learn to constraint the scope of each chapter, even if you don't end up getting a standar size for updates at the very least have an upper limit. If this project ends up on a 'we're on chapter 15... and I might need another chapter' it means that it's been well out of hand for some time.
I'm not saying this because of wait times, I'm saying this because of burn out, the dev already said that he's been sacrificing more and more of his free time to this game and he really shouldn't, we'll probably see an ending to this game but if he continues with this mindset of 'double everything' then we'll probably not see the ending to his next work, if he even wants to make one after.
I really admire the dev, it's noticeable the improvement he's have over the chapters, he's one of the few devs I've seen here that has a knak for cinematography, he's been improving like a maniac on the lightning department and his animations have been steadily improving, it does feel jarring going back and finding those little experiments he had and then dropped in initial chapters like the chapter that has a lot of over exposed renders, the chapter where the characters blink or where he was making animatic animations for actions that didn't need a full on animated scene but could do with some movement, but dude, you've done well, finish this game, take what you've learned and just go steady with the next proyect.
