VN Ren'Py Abandoned Project SAGE [Act 1 v0.19d] [Paperwork]

[Living In A Lewd World]

I’m personally also rather a fan of version 19d as version 17. For version 17 there are some substitutes by now such as “Arizona unbridled” and “Coming of age” (has initial grind, but is nevertheless funny, creative and getting quite lewd (for those who don't like the grind, there are also some saves in the game-package up til the beginning of the latest version, and as all scenes are reviewable, there is not even a need to grind through)). The recently mentioned “Primal desire” seems also to go in this direction. But by now I don’t see any substitute for version 19.

For me, it is not necessarily the complexity which I like. I would be totally ok, if there was some reduction. I actually did just play it once and then looked in the replay-gallery-mod for the further scenes. What catches me and what by now no game like this ((non-violent) corruption of female protagonist coming of age) has realized so far is the high plausibility of the actions of Amy and the high quality of the dialogues, which make v19 so great. I could even live with making this game a total kinetic porn novel by reducing the game on one (not that vanilla)-path and just resuming that one and it would be nevertheless one of the greatest games on this site for me.

 

[defd©™]

She's not loser. Amy got new chance for future contest and it could be hot!

where is the contest she wins?...
She has a lot of will power in the v17 and all choice are made with her as a super hot winner!

Old (aka 0.17) version was stupid fuckfest with pretty dumb heroine. But most scenes was sooooo hot. But stupid

it is absolutely not stupid for a porno game! She as her will power and she is on command.
Also Hank (her boyfriend) want share her with his brother and this is fucking hot because Amy gets in control of the situation and punish him as he deserve!

in V19 almost all plots are incomplete and they stop when the porno usually starts except for the dildo.. there are no sex scenes. The only option for Hank is to start relationship or not there is not a real third choice where they decide the to have open relationship.
I think the v19 comes with a lot of nonsense or maybe requires a bug update...

should be great to have a new prequel episode when she was in Romania with the description of her life before... (she mention about her life in Romania in v17 when she is in the metro).

 

[defd©™]

unfortunately Paperwork disappeared. no trace of him.

this is for sure a trace of him
-- So his account is alive here--- and maybe one day..... maybe this Christmas


I suggest to him to close the game soon and create new episodes about Amy... with the beginning of her school life and the continuation of this game!
Amy is a great MC character she has will power and she is super hot!
She deserve more games and episodes like a TV series

 

[Zuhl]

I suggest to him to close the game soon and create new episodes about Amy...

uh nope, not really. We all wait too long for it to continue. I think a lot want if it goes on that it will continue with the lost 0.20 update.

 

[FookU2]

In v19 All that paths are incomplete and confused…. the MC is Amy and the v17 is focused on the mc.. Amy is the winner of all contest… in the v19 she is a loser… I don’t like stories where the mc is the loser.

If the MC is a female, and I'm trying to get her into all sorts of trouble, then losing is usually the goal. If she loses a bet, then has to give a BJ...if she loses a contest, and her punishment is to get stripped in public....etc, etc. That's the whole fun in it, for me. lol
If the MC is a male, then he definitely needs to win. Otherwise, he may not get any poontang.

 

[Zuhl]

If the MC is a female, and I'm trying to get her into all sorts of trouble, then losing is usually the goal. If she loses a bet, then has to give a BJ...if she loses a contest, and her punishment is to get stripped in public....etc, etc. That's the whole fun in it, for me. lol
If the MC is a male, then he definitely needs to win. Otherwise, he may not get any poontang.

That is in the eye of the beholder. If, as you say, the MC asl the woman at verleiren Bj there would like to see one or the other but from the prince's not wanting to lose one's ego and then also not against a pfeigpf or maots or whatever, losing in the dunes does not mean winning. I find it intressatn as in soclen play in a way and know the morlaic thoughts are stimulated whether how and about haubt. and it's already in a game where nobody gets harmed to hang your ass out. but i am also happy to be whomever i have the opportunity in so many games morlaisch about everything life is not just made of light and darkness.
: )

 

[Holysix9]

uh nope, not really. We all wait too long for it to continue. I think a lot want if it goes on that it will continue with the lost 0.20 update.

he just say barely the same... as i understand he want that the game continues with a new episode
what is the difference to close and/or episode and start a new one?

I think the plot of this game is confused...
would be great to have more episodes about Amy to know her better!

 

[isabellapink]

this is for sure a trace of him
-- So his account is alive here--- and maybe one day..... maybe this Christmas
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I suggest to him to close the game soon and create new episodes about Amy... with the beginning of her school life and the continuation of this game!
Amy is a great MC character she has will power and she is super hot!
She deserve more games and episodes like a TV series

this would be great!

 

[isabellapink]

If the MC is a female, and I'm trying to get her into all sorts of trouble, then losing is usually the goal. If she loses a bet, then has to give a BJ...if she loses a contest, and her punishment is to get stripped in public....etc, etc. That's the whole fun in it, for me. lol
If the MC is a male, then he definitely needs to win. Otherwise, he may not get any poontang.

I think if the MC is a female she must be winner same as all MC--- maybe she can lost something-- but at the end she must win the freedom and get her success.
Be fucked for reach our goal is not so bad!
Male MC is usually a loser in the NTR game!

 

[ayd0]

heyoo everyone I finished several this crazy game but can't find that capture.
ıs there that save file?

 

[Zuhl]

heyoo everyone I finished several this crazy game but can't find that capture.
ıs there that save file?
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Uh that's really hard to get that. this event alone has so many possibilities and variations, such as what happens where. the link here

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Believe it should help to get some people on the right path. More or less as I said it has a lot of variations. because the bils itself can believe up to possible action foren depending on how plays under Würifg and self conscious and or what Any attempt at this event in the realm erases a lot of other possibilities in the dressing room in the kitchen and like Amy or as you call her with the boys can annoy the tidying up. as long as a save satan is not enough. to make all this possible for you. since you will have to unlock yourself. but you will be rewarded there is no sex but comes close in one scene

I wish and pray so much that paperwork will bring the game to an end. No one else can bring it to an end like this. what he started there cannot be finished by anyone else that proves i think that the small and yet very large absschint in the game what he has come up with. Only Paier works can finish the game when he comes back as a developing story writer and and and.

 

[ayd0]

Uh that's really hard to get that. this event alone has so many possibilities and variations, such as what happens where. the link here

You must be registered to see the links

Believe it should help to get some people on the right path. More or less as I said it has a lot of variations. because the bils itself can believe up to possible action foren depending on how plays under Würifg and self conscious and or what Any attempt at this event in the realm erases a lot of other possibilities in the dressing room in the kitchen and like Amy or as you call her with the boys can annoy the tidying up. as long as a save satan is not enough. to make all this possible for you. since you will have to unlock yourself. but you will be rewarded there is no sex but comes close in one scene

I wish and pray so much that paperwork will bring the game to an end. No one else can bring it to an end like this. what he started there cannot be finished by anyone else that proves i think that the small and yet very large absschint in the game what he has come up with. Only Paier works can finish the game when he comes back as a developing story writer and and and.

thank you for your reply,but ı need save files.that link confused me

 

[ayd0]

I curiosity,what are you favorite scene?
mine,andrew and paul came house and whats happens..

 

[Zuhl]

I curiosity,what are you favorite scene?
mine,andrew and paul came house and whats happens..

Paul and Andrew is a very nice scene, I also like it a lot, but I don't have a lovely scene. Basically, I love all scenes, just regret that none of them are brought to an end. If you like the Andre Paul event so much, you should also be on your favo for the event with Simon and co. The one scene where Simone amy biotte to lean against the spints with her back to him and the one with seemed to be a little friend, Amy ass grind or the stripteas scene in Mister Myagi's office where if there is a link it goes so far as to do Simon right in front of mister Mygis eyes amy bussy feasting. Oh little, that's so much alone in school. and the whole beach scene with uh what's the name of the 2 idiots again no matter, and I like the guys a lot too. the train scenes with Andrew and the 2 idiots who go on it. I love the shower scene with all the men with bewoner, most of all those with uncle are ok, those with uncle are also the most expanded the one with the sprained ankle where the uncle helps her with moving and bathing ah yes and how it then Then the first joint shower with uncle continues. Oh, how I was looking forward to seeing the further development there. I think it's called the boisterous evening with Mr Wilston, and the first evening together with him under a starry sky, ahc yes so many beautiful scenes that I all love.

 

[defd©™]

If the MC is a female, and I'm trying to get her into all sorts of trouble, then losing is usually the goal. If she loses a bet, then has to give a BJ...if she loses a contest, and her punishment is to get stripped in public....etc, etc. That's the whole fun in it, for me. lol
If the MC is a male, then he definitely needs to win. Otherwise, he may not get any poontang.

When I said that the MC must be the winner I never said that she has to wins all battles.
And if she loves sex as it is very clear in this game... losing a bet to be fucked is a way to win her goal.
In any case she wins all her goals in the version 17a but in this 19d version her goals are not so clear because all paths are incomplete. In this release Amy use a big black dildo to train and gape her asshole for nothing
that is why I consider her a loser... she enlarge her asshole but she is not able to fuck her idol the black rapper because this plot never started in this version game... usually if a girl use such a big dildo for gape the ass hole she must have a goal to achieve... nonsense to train her ass hole for nothing... she want to use her ass instead the vagine because she want remain virgin but sge want fuck because she loves men attention and must be popular to achieve economic success as model.
Amy is also perfect as a Japanese porn star ... she could become very rich and famous in the future episodes
That is why I prefer the original 17a version that is almost a complete game with a great end!
Here is a part of her dialogue with herself at the end ... she knows well what others think of her.
This is great end for the first episode of Amy (a Romanian girl that have lost her mom)


The Pics are from the original dialog written by Paperwork for close his Project Sage v17a
the 17a end is far better than the incomplete ending of this 19d where all plots are incomplete and a bit disconnected.

That is why I always suggest to all paperwork fans to take a look in the first release... because that release is complete.
requires onle this phrase in the last frame.
"END of Episode 1"

In any case I love also 19d version even it is not complete bc I love the stunning model Amy that will remain in the history as one of the best plot in the VN adult game scenario.

 

[ayd0]

When I said that the MC must be the winner I never said that she has to wins all battles.
And if she loves sex as it is very clear in this game... losing a bet to be fucked is a way to win her goal.
In any case she wins all her goals in the version 17a but in this 19d version her goals are not so clear because all paths are incomplete. In this release Amy use a big black dildo to train and gape her asshole for nothing
that is why I consider her a loser... she enlarge her asshole but she is not able to fuck her idol the black rapper because this plot never started in this version game... usually if a girl use such a big dildo for gape the ass hole she must have a goal to achieve... nonsense to train her ass hole for nothing... she want to use her ass instead the vagine because she want remain virgin but sge want fuck because she loves men attention and must be popular to achieve economic success as model.
Amy is also perfect as a Japanese porn star ... she could become very rich and famous in the future episodes
That is why I prefer the original 17a version that is almost a complete game with a great end!
Here is a part of her dialogue with herself at the end ... she knows well what others think of her.
This is great end for the first episode of Amy (a Romanian girl that have lost her mom)
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The Pics are from the original dialog written by Paperwork for close his Project Sage v17a
the 17a end is far better than the incomplete ending of this 19d where all plots are incomplete and a bit disconnected.

That is why I always suggest to all paperwork fans to take a look in the first release... because that release is complete.
requires onle this phrase in the last frame.
"END of Episode 1"

In any case I love also 19d version even it is not complete bc I love the stunning model Amy that will remain in the history as one of the best plot in the VN adult game scenario.

MC accepts be doll or slut in 17a,but in 19d MC don't believe on yourself.i think like this..

 

[defd©™]

MC accepts be doll or slut in 17a,but in 19d MC don't believe on yourself.i think like this..

yes I agree
it is the same as I have wrote with less words..

There are many girls that are sluts even in real life in school age from 16 to 22 especially if they are motherless
many of them encounter their romance turn to be very good wives and no more sluts... some others can be rich by continuing to be porno stars and make a lot of money... also porno stars can become very good wives because when adult they can separate the work from private life.... also few of pornostars can become very good wives...

in v19d there is big nonsense for a motherless school girl in the plot due to the fact that she love masturbate with a very very masochistic size butt plug fucking her anal and cumming like crazy... but she repress herself only when the sexual action is very close (like in the beach or in the poker with neighbors!)
She represses her desire and it is quite impossible that a repressed girl can change.

...and when I say in 17a MC is the winner is because she accepts herself and has will to exploring her sexual need and the freedom that is only possible at that age.
this has more sense to me.. of course in adult game logical

 

[Holysix9]

MC accepts be doll or slut in 17a,but in 19d MC don't believe on yourself.i think like this..

I think MC accept herself in the 17a
in the 19d she is a slut too... but hide this to herself

 

[ayd0]

can everyone send 19d save files ?

I think MC accept herself in the 17a
in the 19d she is a slut too... but hide this to herself

absolutely
in summary,this games(17a-19d)have two personalities
ı think first personality is under control,extrovert,aware
second personality is quiescent,naive
I don't think that subject winner or loser,main subject her personality..

 

[Living In A Lewd World]

can everyone send 19d save files ?

absolutely
in summary,this games(17a-19d)have two personalities
ı think first personality is under control,extrovert,aware
second personality is quiescent,naive
I don't think that subject winner or loser,main subject her personality..

Do you mean, 17a is under control and aware, or the other way round?