VN Ren'Py Abandoned Rebel Daughter [v2.0] [Walkernight]

[Vrijgeest]

Girls at her age that have big breasts dont look like her. She is too mature. The sister's bazookas dont help either. I think a redraw is required. The dialogue needs a rewrite. Do we need the aggression?

 

[AnubisMRM]

Let's see if this goes further than 0.2 and then I'll give it a try.

 

[Hellster]

Girls at her age that have big breasts dont look like her. She is too mature. The sister's bazookas dont help either. I think a redraw is required. The dialogue needs a rewrite. Do we need the aggression?

She's portrayed as being rebellious, so kinda understandable, i'm sure it will mellow over time

 

[Call of Booty]

Give us MEGA link and then we can all judge those fake tits

 

[Jack-ish]

Daughter from DMD has a similar figure. The complaints about it have no real justification. It's not like girls that age, and with that figure don't exist in real life.

 

[Deckard81]

She's a rebel, she'll do what she wants, almost a word for word quote from the game

Sure but it could work a lot better if she were to call him Dad when neutral/rebellious and Daddy when trying to manipulate him. Even outside of incest VN's in a completely plutonic familial relationship; kids calling their parents by their first names always irks me so it'll continue to do so in this game

Daughter from DMD has a similar figure. The complaints about it have no real justification. It's not like girls that age, and with that figure don't exist in real life.

She's ridiculous too tbh, even more so as they're perfectly spherical

 

[Hellster]

Give us MEGA link and then we can all judge those fake tits

Nopy is just as fast if you can't wait

 

[Hellster]

Sure but it could work a lot better if she were to call him Dad when neutral/rebellious and Daddy when trying to manipulate him. Even outside of incest VN's in a completely plutonic familial relationship; kids calling their parents by their first names always irks me so it'll continue to do so in this game

Well i did notice the switch between name and dad when i was fixing the english translated dialogue, but i figured it was meant to be that way for whatever reason, so i just left it the way it was

 

[kwiatos]

The Bj scene was very short and not arousing, if in the future sex scenes are going to look like this, I'm out.
PS.
Also, I don't like when during sex scenes there are no dialogues describing their emotions.

I hope it will change in the future

 

[MikeyUK]

Played Day 2 - Frank talking to niece in bedroom, he starts to speak in Spanish not English. A translation bug??

 

[uberzubron]

The dialouge and 'story' are dumb as can be but I can buy into the ridiclousness because the renders have something about them and i'm ABOSLUTELY FINE with the daughters tits

 

[Hellster]

Played Day 2 - Frank talking to niece in bedroom, he starts to speak in Spanish not English. A translation bug??

No that's intentional, that dialogue is meant to be spanish

 

[Avaron1974]

Boob size is average, no idea what the complaint is there.

The blowjob scene is terrible. Neve have short animations, loop them. There is no point to quick animations, solvalley has the same problem.

The main problem is the daughter is less of a rebel and more of an utter cunt.

Her and the MC's sister aren't exactly nice people and the fact the sister just stands there and does absolutely nothing while her daughter is being talked to like she's a piece of shit by her niece, not a nice person and shit parent.

 

[jdtwk123]

has some real possibilities. Overall I like the models, small quibbles aside. Let's let this cake bake a little longer and see where it goes.

 

[randomguy6516265165]

How far can we get with the girl in the middle on the main op pic?

 

[Hellster]

How far can we get with the girl in the middle on the main op pic?

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[bamachine]

Game needs some serious proofreading and honestly, needs some character re-writes. The daughter and sister are not rebellious, they are assholes. I could get over the ridiculous proportions on those two, if their personalities were not just as terrible.

 

[Deleted member 24136]

Wtf is wrong with his Sister's Daughter Lucy...
With that mother she should have a rocking body...

 

[Hellster]

Game needs some serious proofreading and honestly, needs some character re-writes. The daughter and sister are not rebellious, they are assholes. I could get over the ridiculous proportions on those two, if their personalities were not just as terrible.

Proofreading ?

 

[Sonico]

Wtf is wrong with his Sister's Daughter Lucy...
With that mother she should have a rocking body...

She's younger than Celeste for starters, could also be a late bloomer or have inherited a less vast boob package from her own father's side (though i can also see Megan having a previous marriage or single pregnancy before him, i'm guessing Steve since he is Megan's husband and seem to share some facial features with Lucy, imho,).

All of that said, Lucy does rock a quite nice booty and that pink bunny thong out of a sex shop is clear proof she knows it.

And that sexy sleepwear is definitely hers, something swept from Megan wouldn't be that snug. Feels like Lucy is much saucier than people give credit.